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Hi! This is _________! Since I want to be a good actor, I want to be in a good movie, and I made one up in my head! So I want to share it with Gotoquiz to see if you like my story or not. Sometimes it wont make sense and have some bad grammar because I don't explain it very well. I made the summary too long didn't I? Well, whatever! Please comment and tell me if you liked it or not, or maybe make some changes to make it better. Thanks!

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  1. Hi! So...I want to be an actor when I grow up, and I want to be in a good movie (Main character). So I made one up. So I want to share it to you all! If you have any compliments or suggestions, changes..let me know.
  2. I don't really explain stories very well so this will kinda take long.
  3. This story is about two parents that are #1 agents that need to solve a mission. They need to fly to Greece so they can find the Moussaieff Red diamond that was stolen from Dr.Green. But they can't take their daughter (Rebecca) because it was too dangerous for a child to stay in a hotel by herself or go to the mission with them (even if there are babysitters in Greece because the babysitter would probably talk in Greece). So they sent her to a babysitter (That's american :I )
  4. While the parents were flying to Greece, The oil was coming out of the airplane. So it crashed, and the parents died. Since Rebecca and the babysitter found out that they died, the babysitter sent her to the orphanage. The boss of the CIA (where the parents worked) adopted her. He said he will take care of her and protect her. In the CIA, some people told her how to fight, use weapons, and do karate.
  5. While the parents were flying to Greece, The oil was coming out. So it crashed, and the parents died. Since Rebecca and the babysitter found out that they died, the babysitter sent her to the orphanage. The boss of the CIA (where the parents worked) adopted her. He said he will take care of her and protect her. In the CIA, some people told her how to fight, use weapons, and do karate.
  6. When she turned 6, she was #1 on the top 40's list. She can fight with big guys, use a gun, and do karate. She was always #1. She never became #2 or more. Finally after 12 years (she is 18), Her boss (the one that adopted her) said that she needs a partner. She didn't want to have a partner, she said she can do everything herself.But then she ended up having one. It was a boy, and his name was Jonathan. He was 18 years old, hot, and was really good at karate, fighting, and using weapons. All of the girls liked him, except Rebecca. Not because she's jealous but because he is her partner.
  7. The next day Rebecca came to check if she was still #1...she wasn't #1 anymore. Why? Because Jonathan is #1. She doesn't get it! Yesterday was his first day here! She went to the office to talk to her boss. He said that it's because he did all of the tests that he gave Jonathan and he passed all of them. He said Jonathan did better than Rebecca. Rebecca was Angry! She started hating him more! In the afternoon, it was lunch time. Everybody were getting lunch normally like everyday. Jonathan suddenly saw Rebecca flipping her hair with her beautiful eyes looking around the lunchroom. He thought she was beautiful. He sat on a table with a whole bunch of boys eating their food normally. The boys saw him staring at Rebecca, so one of the boys asked "do you like Rebecca?" So he said "Ya I do. Do you?" The boys started scooting next to him and one of them said "Ya we do..but..we are kinda afraid to confess. So Jonathan pooped out of his chair, walked to Rebecca, then confessed.
  8. Guess what Rebecca did? She punched him, kicked him really hard, then spit on him. After that..Rebecca and the girls walked away. He didn't just like her because she was beautiful. It was because never saw a girl hate a hot guy so much. All of the girls never did that to him before in his life!
  9. Make sure you read all of it! MAKE SURE! Because I want you to comment and say if you liked it, or if you have any questions.
  10. If you comment good stuff and rate good, then I will do more? Deal? and make sure you read it!

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