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the basic concept for the story is really cute, but it's been done before. If you can figure out something unique to add to your story it's golden!!! And trust me, I like to write stories to and trying to be unique is always the hard part. Keep working on it though!

Pretty good story. It would be cool if there was some type of mystery. Like the parents were murdered and the crash was just a cover up. Then add some action and danger and guns. Just ideas. Good luck!

Your story actually reminds me a lot of the anime special A

It didn't work oops

I love it. Keep making parts.

Um, okay. Ha, this was good..

good keep working on it

I loved it! You have to KEEP WRITING THE STORY CUZ I LOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEDD IT!!!!!!!!! [b]PLEAAAASSSEE!!!! [/b], [i]PLEAAASSSSEEE[/i ]