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My oc is a fluffly grey she-cat with green eyes named Clover. Shes a loner but then follows her friend Rose into clan life in thunderclan. Then her friend ends up betraying her and chooses thunderclan over her. So she ends up in riverclan, eventually gaining their trust and becoming a warrior but keeping her name. her parents also abandoned her (bc why not) so when her friend abandons her for thunderclan shes even less trusting. (Cute fact I made up, since shes used to catching mice, ect. Sometimes she gives the kits/apprentices mice as treats)
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My OC is Dawnripple/Dawnstar, a 28 moon she cat who was born and raised in Riverclan. She has medium-length white fur and grey/silver stripes on her back and tail. Her right, front paw is dark grey and her eyes are a blazing, deep blue colour. Over her left eye she has a light pink scar that she got in a battle with shadowclan. She is noble, loyal and trustworthy and is well respected among the clans. Frostfeather, a thunderclan cat, and Sagefrost, her brother were part of a prophecy to save the clans from wolves. She lost her mate to wolves. It broke her heart, but she came back stronger, and Larksplash watches her from starclan. She died at 73 moons from greencough but shines brightly from silverpelt every night.
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My OC is Foxfire, a 31 moon old she-cat from Shadowclan, she has orange fur, black paws, and white ear tips, muzzle, and tail tip- sorta like a fox (hinting at her prefix)! Her eyes are light blue, and she has pink lashes, like her pads or inner ears. Due to her being my warriorsona who also represents me, she shares as personality with me: sarcastic, caring, anxious, and shy. She doesn't yet have a backstory, but it's being developed! (I dunno where I got her suffix from xd)
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My OCs name is SunWhisker. She is a female warrior of windclan.
Her mate is formerly from Shadowclan and joined windclan to be with her. His name is dimfur. She journeyed from being a kitty pet to becoming a warrior. Her best friend was Colorstar, but in a second battle with the dark forest Colorstar died to save her from a vicious cat named LostHawk. Her fur is yellow with orange spots and green eyes. She went on a mission for a prophecy: go beyond boundaries and discover the past to save the future. I am currently writing a fanfic, so if any one wants there characters in there I'll add them.
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My oc's name is RiverShine. Her backstory is when she was a small kit in the nursery while her mother was gathering flowers for decorations for the nursery, because she was the only queen in the nursery and it needed fixing. So while River kit was in there alone, there was a rustle behind her and out jumped a wild eyed fox who snarled at her. A sudden flash of fur whipped past her.It was her father who took the blow the fox sent. Her father stumbled on the ground and fell limp.The fox ran away as her mother chased it off.River kit stared traumatised by the sudden event and that is her backstory.Now she is older and is an apprentice, her new name is River paw. She is a very social she cat who listens carefully to other cats than they think, learning secrets and drama easily. She has a silky smooth fur and tends to pick lavender often by the bank and loves going on patrols. She is very nice but is snappy to rude cats. Her mother TimberWood is a quiet cat, mostly because of her fathers death. Her father's name was TwigFeet, he was a bright and loveable tom cat. He loved flowers and was always protective of River paw. River paw is an apprentice of Thunderclan and her only kin in the clan who is alive is Running thought, a tom cat and Thrush wing, another tom cat.Her close friends are stripe cloud, Glowing dream, Miststorm, and talonsting.Her siblings are Frostfoot a male warrior and Dappleleaf a medicine she cat.
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My OC is Moonlit Stream, she was abandoned and taken in by RiverClan, before they threw her out again. Her rogue name is Moon. She has been stealing prey from Riverclan for many moons. She is a completely black cat, save for a slight tinge of blue on her nose. She has piercing green eyes, and is skillful at hunting and fighting other cats (particularly those in RiverClan). She was abandoned because her mother was killed in an accident on a Thunderpath and her father was trampled by a monster. She is still alive and is recruiting cats to form her own clan: DeathClan, and take down everyone who stands in their way, starting with humans.
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My Oc is Dove feather, a fluffy light grey she who has lighter grey rosette markings and freckles. Her eyes are green, and when she is full grown, she is not much larger than an apprentice. Her back right leg is paralyzed from being hit by a monster as a Kit. She is grumpy, short tempered and snappy, but has a soft spot for kits. In her lifetime she and her mate, Elktrot have three litters of kits, but while she was pregnant with the third litter, Elktrot tragically died. After her third litter grew up she adopted two more kits whose mothers had died. Her death was sad, as she died defending the nursery during a rouge attack, but she reunited with Elktrot in starclan.
She has a much longer backstory, and Im sorry I didnt go over her Kit and appreciate years (or moons I geuss) I was unable to write it all due to the character limit. I apologize for the bad writing .
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I forgot to mention that she is in Shadowclan- oops
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My oc's name is DeerTooth. He is a brown, white speckled windclan tom with blue eyes. He was formerly a kittypet called moose , but he got abandoned in the woods by his sister, willow, alongside his littermate, cheeto. Cheeto walked off and got attacked by some rougues and went to live with loners. Deertooth was an apprentice when he joined the clan, with the name DeerPaw. He went into the forest and caught a few prey. But then Windclan was invaded by Shadowclan, and he watched another apprentice die. This scarred him. When he was made a warrior, he made a promise to protect kits.
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My OC is named Reed'Stalk, a she cat. She is part of River Clan. Reed'Stalk's mate is a pure black tom called Black'Shard. Reed'Stalk was born with no siblings. Her parents were his dad, Dawn'Shade and his mother, Frosted'Sage (dead). Reed'Stalk's fur is a gradient of reds and browns. She had a mentor named Raven'Shadow, but after her death, Reed'Stalk's personality changed. She became snarky and cold. The only person who could bring her back was her mate. She never kitted, but showed her love for her clan through her noble death, after she had saving a kit from a member of Shadow Clan and being killed to a deep slash in the throat. She almost was named deputy, but was challenged and lost.
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My OC's name is Nightfall. She is a black cat with eyes so blue they look purple. She has long fur, being a Norwegian Forest cat + Siberian cat cross breed, and she has pretty rosettes dotted across her back. She has white spots beneath her eyes and light grey stripes across her face. Her tail is bushy, and her pelt, but she is still quite a small cat. The tip of her left ear is white, and she has a white left paw. Her left eye is half blind, with a long, ugly scar running across it. Her left ear is half missing, and her right ear torn. She has many large scars along the left side of her pelt, and a few on the right.
Nightfall began her life as a small kit, born in an abandoned Twoleg shed on the outskirts of Galaxyclan territory. Her mother was called Starlight, her father Shadowfur, (He was a former member of Galaxyclan) and she had two siblings, Moon and Midnight. They were told many stories of their fathers old clan, and by four moons, they had almost learnt the warrior code by heart.
That was when tragedy struck. A dog was let loose from the nearby Twoleg den, and it killed most of Nightfalls family. The dog scarred her badly, injuring her eye. Nightfall blamed herself, as she insisted that she should've been out there helping, rather than lying half dead on the ground.
Everyone she loved was gone, but one not dead. Moon, her brother, was still alive, although Nightfall didn't know it.
Still only four moons, Nightfall was ready to give up, until she was found by an old russet tom called Paradise. He took her in, helping with her grief, and all seemed to be well until Paradise became weaker. He eventually passed away, leaving Nightfall hopelessly alone.
That was, until a familiar cat with stars in her paws visited Nightfall in her dreams. Nightfall's mother had come to guide her.
Eventually she was discovered by Galaxyclan, accepted after a two moon trial, and giving the apprentice name Nightpaw.
Once she became a warrior, she fell in love with a Stor
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(eheh...) a Stormclan warrior called Russetflame. He returned her love and they snuck out most nights to talk.
That's all I've done so far for meh baby Nightfall, but she's a new OC so I'm hoping I can get more done laterrr :P
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My OC's name is Lemoncloud- She was a mother of two litter of kits and sadly died giving birth to the second.
She's a tall, slender tabby she-cat with striking yellow eyes and a cream-and-light ginger pelt. She was named Lemoncloud after her eyes (lemon yellow eyes), and her fluffy, soft-hearted demeanor (could- obviously).
Lemon cloud was a beloved member of StormClan. She had mentored 3 cats before her death.
She now looks over her family and friends from StarClan, and wishes she could still walk among them-
She gave her brother (Everbreeze) his 9th life- For compassion and care of all who need him.
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My cat is named Vixenstar. She leads an OC clan called West Clan.
Vixenstar was originally born as Tidekit and was raised by her mothers closest friend as her mother had passed when having her and her two siblings, they did not make it. Her father was a rogue cat who wanted nothing to do with her upon her mothers death. Vixen wasnt really the favorite of the clan since she was half and half, her father was previously part of a clan known as GlacierClan before he had turned to a rogue life. She was always berated by her clan, being told shed never make it far in clan life due to her parentage and that she was weak. So by the time she became an apprentice she trained even harder and would sometimes go days at a time without sleeping.
She eventually made it to her Warrior ceremony and was named Vixenglade. She continued to train and carry out her duties as a warrior and even trained an apprentice by the name of Fennecpaw. She eventually became deputy after the former deputy was banished for being a traitor to the clan. The former leader and her former mentor, Shatteredstar, stepped down to become an elder once he reached his last life and there fore she took on the role as the new leader.
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So I have multiple OCs but I decided to use one of my old ones, who was just recently changed to look better. His name is Tigermane, as he has white face floofs and is also a dark brown tabby. I really love this guy. He's kind, especially to young ones (He's mentored three apprentices, even though he's only 40 moons old). This comes from his young brother and sisters, as he was born into a litter of four, but his sister died as an apprentice due to sneaking out at night to hunt and being caught by a Shadowclan patrol. He then realized that you never know how long you have your loved ones left, and that you should spend your time with them wisely. After finishing his own training, he was greeted with a nasty surprise: His mother had died from whitecough. Tigermane greived for moons, before recieving his first apprentice, Snowpaw. Snowpaw allowed an escape for Tigermane, and after she finished her training and earned her warrior name, Snowface, Tigermane quickly recieved another apprentice and another.
While I do hope this inspired you, please do not steal anything. I work hard to create my characters, and I'd rather you create your own than just copy someone else's hard work. Keep in mind that you can't be proud of something you stole the way you can be proud of your own work. Thanks for reading :)
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This is really well created! I don't really have anything to criticize, it's just really good!
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My OC's name is Leafstar. She was in multiple prophecies of saving her and her clan. She is strongly respected leader and has two sisters, Poppyheart and Willowstar. Poppyheart is warm-hearted and gentle while Willowstar has gone to Riverclan to become a leader. She misses her sights of her sister, but atleast she is happy and they get to see eachother at the gatherings.
I'll tell you a bit more about Leafstar. Leafstar is a loyal, brave, cunning, smart, and sometimes mean leader. She met a cat named Cloudwhip and they soon get to know eachother and have two kits: Gorsefur and Petalkit. Petalkit dies after a blow of greencough in Leafstar's clan and Gorsefur dies of old age. Leafstar had died her last life after saving her clan from dogs.
Leafstar has a brown/golden pelt with beige stripes and orange dapple. Her eyes are amber and the right side of her face was torn off by a cougar when she was a kit. - bit like brightheart- Her mother was Goldenwhisp and her father was Mossfall.
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My character's name is Iceblaze. She has one frosty blue eye, and the other is a fiery orange. Her pelt is a blueish grey, leaning more towards grey. Her legs are a bit darker than her primary coat, and her fur is speckled with darker spots. Her chest is mixed with blacker fur, mingling with the grey. Her cheeks have a thick side fur, which is white. Her ears are tipped with fur, and over her eyes is darker grey fur. Her tail is long, not to overly fluffy, and darker underneath.
Iceblaze is very blunt, observant, and straight forward. She doesn't want to purposely hurt a other cats feelings, but it's not really a big deal for her. Some cats more than others. Either way, she is a highly respected warrior of Stoneclan.
Iceblaze has one litter mate, who's name is Mistfire. She's very different from her sober sister, and loves to joke around, socialize, and be a little more carefree. The two were close, despite their differences, and shared everything together. So Mistfire was surprised when Iceblaze came to her, revealing she had fell in love with a cat from outside the clans; Let alone, that cat being a medicine cat!
Iceblaze was firm, and stood on the warrior code more than others, but she began to question it when she met Palemint. A soft, caring, but assertive calico tom, who isn't afraid to take charge when required. His light greenish-blue eyes always cought her off guard, and his soft tenderness was something she began to crave, since not many cats offer that.
Iceblaze questioned the warrior code severely, wondering how much pain would be caused, and blood would be shed, just because two cats couldn't be together despite the different clans. In the end, she left Stoneclan, and joined Palemint in Streamclan. The calico tom left his position of medicine cat, leaving his graduated apprentice to assume the role entirely.
Palemints transition from a medicine cat, to a warrior was not without obstacles, but with Iceblaze's help, he succeeded, and became a shar
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-p hunter. From there, the two lived happily in Streamclan, even having a litter of kits. That is, until Iceblaze was called back to Stoneclan; To which her family would follow her, all the way.
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My OC is Snake.Paw soon known as Snake.Runner. A red and white she-cat with blue eyes and wheat always stuck in her pelt. Shes feisty, quick, can have a attitude yet is protective of her clan, ShoreClan.
She was born into kittypet life yet due to her size and sass she was dropped in the middle of the thunderpath which was dormant yet frightening for her. A unknown yet noble cat brought her to ShoreClan where the unknown cat died and she remained a outcast yet tries to stay cheerful for the unknown cat,knowing there looking at Snake from starclan.
She is 8 moons and has a close bond with Rain.Jay and Leafling.Kit.
She has no powers and has been in no prophecys.
Merry Christmas!
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My OC is Poppyfrost
I created her for a role play so technically an OC clan, the dark forest existed in that role play, her and her mate Owlflame work to take out the dark forest, but in the process their leader sides with the dark forest and 80% of their clan is wiped out. She has two litters of kits with Owlflame 5 the first and 4 the second but one dies young. Owlflame and Poppyfrost raise their kits with the remains of the clan, and recruit loners to rebuild their clan, with Owlflame becoming Owlstar for about a year and a half before passing it on, Poppyfrost is not his deputy but has her own rank below the deputy. She is a pale gray spotted tabby with blue eyes, but Ive used her in multiple role plays and if theres too many blue eyed cats for my taste Ill just change em to yellow.
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My OCS name is Mothfawn, she is a ruddy Abyssinian x Maine coon mix with deep brown eyes. Her story is so complicated but it deals with the supernatural, solstices, elements She has a very specific mentality and deals with repressing her emotions so much she doesnt feel them anymore. Only ambition, and from a physiological standpoint she is one of the most intelligent cats to ever exist. The strength of her mentality and physical strength is incredible, and doesnt have to deal with her supernatural attributes she attains, rather the way she was raised.
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One of my favorite OCs is Emberwing. She's a dark orange tabby she-cat with spots of white on her paws, tail, chest, and muzzle, and she has amber eyes. She was born to her mother, Morningheart, and her father, Pinefang in WindClan along with her brother, Oaktail. She was apprenticed to Flintstar, her grandfather, and Oaktail to Moonflight, her grandmother. When she and her brother became warriors, she noticed that Oaktail looked dull rather than his usual fiery, funny demeanor. When she asked, he snapped at her. The two went from being close friends to being almost mortal enemies. Emberwing eventually was trained by Mapleshade in the Dark Forest, killing two other trainees in the process. She decided to rebel against the Dark Forest and attacked Mapleshade in one of their training sessions, defeating her. She fell in love with another WindClan warrior named Stormsight. The pair ended up having four kits: Adderkit (Addertail), Robinkit (Robinheart), Harekit (Haretail), and Talonkit (Talonclaw). She mentored her only daughter, Robinpaw, while Stormsight mentored Talonpaw. After her kits became warriors, she ended up hearing news about how Addertail, her oldest kit, had died from a ThunderClan attack. She swore vengeance on the ThunderClan leader, Thornstar. Pinefang, now Pinestar after Flintstar's death, allowed Emberwing to lead the attack on ThunderClan's camp after several warriors caught prey on their land. After she arrived at the camp, she saw that no one was there. She returned to camp only to find all of ThunderClan in the WindClan camp. She attacked Thornstar, taking one of his lives, before getting mauled by ThunderClan's deputy, Blackwhisker. She was taken to the medicine den and was watched over by the medicine cat, Stormsight, Robinheart, Haretail, Talonclaw, Morningheart, Pinestar, and, to her surprise, Oaktail. She made amends with her brother before dying due to her wounds. After she ascended to StarClan, she ended up giving a prophecy to one of Talon
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My boy is Wrenscreech, he's a dilute ginger tom with pale blue eyes and he's a warrior of MossClan. He keeps to himself most of the time and hangs around in the background, but when it comes to getting what he wants he's smart and sneaky, slowly building trust before taking what he came for. He was raised by a fiercly conservative mother who taught him not to trust anyone and to look out for himself over everyone else, because all they'll do is hurt him. As he grew up though, his father worked to keep the sweet side of him alive, and the right cat might be able to sbreak down his barriers ;)
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My OC is named Sparkpool. She is a golden tabby she-cat with green eyes. She was born into ThunderClan. Her mother is Streamstar(the current ThunderClan leader) and Flameheart. She was trained by Ripplestripe and when she was an apprentice, her sister, Hollypaw died while fighting. She grieved heavily for her sister. Soon, she earned her warrior name and was given a prophecy. The prophecy consisted of her, Skyfeather(her brother), Streamstar, and Darkstorm(her enemy). She killed Darkstorm to fulfill the prophecy and became the deputy of ThunderClan(renamed StreamClan after her mother).
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Actually, her name is Sparkheart, Sparkpool was one of her ancestors.
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My Oc's name is Arctic'Brawl and hes about 30-40 moons old depends on the timeline. Hes a shadowclan cat with white fluffy fur and greyish ends and golden eyes. To others cats hes considered pretty big. Mainly a warrior though trough a series of events became a leader. He had a rough childhood as both his parents were in the darkforest and was left alone when he just became a warrior.
sURE hes perceived evil by others though doesint think of himself like that.
He had a mate called Stone'Skim and two kits Maggot'tail and Blizzard'Surge. Though he didnt really love her and more or less chased after Snow'Storm whom also had a mate. After she didnt repricate his feeling for obvious reasons Arctic went on a murder spree and absolutely ended their family.
Oh and cool plot about how he managed to become a leader! There were these cats called Hive cats. Their cats that lived in rouge like groups in a completely different teritory. Their mainly just backstory cats for another oc but also good fillers. These hive cats were mainly feral and evil and after finding out about starclan and having little to no history some of them managed to sneak in. These cats were very interested in Arctic'Brawl and gave him those 9 lives.
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Well, before I start my OC rant, I am 15 living in MT; I write as a hobby along with listening/making music, and I am excited on this topic to share!
My OC is NorthStar, originally BlackOmen, of ThunderClan. He has dark brown eyes, like his mother, and is all black, developing white on the tips of his ears when he is over 24 moons old. For a back story... (and also would like some criticism on my writing plz)
Since the last great heroes, the forest has descended in chaos, with StarClan made powerless and almost forgotten amongst the evil and darkness that weilds the forest. The Warrior Code: forgotten. Now it is replaced by "Scourge's Code", whom most of the cats proclaim as the only righteousness and perfect cat that ever lived, very few even knowing what the warrior code is. StarClan sends a prophecy as a last hope: that a kit shall be born that will save the forest, but even the brightest strongest light can be put out... But, among the darkness, there are cats hearts that still burn brightly for the True Code and StarClan, including a nursing mother, SpottedTail.
Her 3 kits are her second litter, but a choice must be made, as the firstborn is all black, then considered an evil omen of early death for the mother, but she fervently protects BlackKit (after the runt dies an early death) from the evil talons of OwlStar, ThunderClan's murderous leader, who desires to slay the child as an offering to Scourge. Because of this, SpottedTail is shunned and her kit struggles to cope with being an outcast. CarggyRoot, the wise old Tom who is ThunderClan's medicine cat, becomes like a second father to BlackKit, (The actual father of BlackKit, TornStar, is murdered by OwlFlight, his deputy) and teaches him the ways of the warrior code along with his mother and a senior warrior, CoalStripe. Once becoming of age BlackKit becomes an apprentice under CoalStripe, and grows strong and wise under his teaching and care.
While he is under training, OwlStar constantly
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i have an oc named Scorchcloud, a fluffy, plump tortoiseshell she with green eyes based off my tortie pet Ceecee <3 Scorch is frm ShadowClan and she's introverted and shy at first, but when you befriend her she's really passionate to talk about herbs as a hobby despite her being a warrior
Scorch is very opinionated and will get into arguments over the smallest slip-up during a convo, however she does have a soft, affectionate and almost flirty side and will support + cherish her friends especially during their tough days
I'm not very skilled in writing as opposed to my art skills so you're not gonna find a fanfic featuring her online any time soon X_X
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Name: Gold pool
Type; Maine coon
Colour : Ginger with blueish grey
Age; 8 moons
Role: Med cat
Clan: River clanBack story: Not eventful Happened before she was 7 moons old, During leaf fall her mentor was killed by a rouge who was the same age as her, Her mentor fell down the gorge, Golden never forgave the loner, Who was trying to be freinds with her.. When She became Medicine Cat, It got busy, Rouges and dogs often attacked during the early new leaf, and thats all!
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My Ocs med apprentice in riverclan love ur oc
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