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  • Lol I got 27%,, his name is kumono nemui wich literally translated to "sleepy cloud". He's like an angel that take care of people's dreams and his relationship with his parents isn't the best but they still love eachother very much. His hair and eyelashes are white with blue eyes and details on his hair and he mostly just wanna chill with his human friends. Well that's good i guess

    Justapumpkinpie
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  • So uh, i have this OC Named Madison, SHe has the same middle name as me, her last name is Crystal. She has 6 sisters, which makes Madison the 7th. she and her sisters were born on a planet named Gamora. but then an evil entity named Hazmat came to her home planet and destroyed almost half of her home. it was just 5 weeks after Madison and her sisters were born, the king and queen(Madison´s mom and dad) had no other choice but to send madison and her sisters to earth, but only six made it. the last one (Who is named Nova) got kidnapped by Hazmat. as madison and her sister were about to land on earth, her three sisters landed in opposite directions. only Madison and her 2 sisters landed on the place together. 13 years later, when they turned 13, Madison and her two sisters, Shimo and Tsurai, realized they had magical powers. I´m too lazy to explain the rest of the story. my OC got 40% Mary-Sue.

    powerpuff_prince
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  • 14% okay! My oc is Genso Marrow, (hes a my hero academia Oc-) he has a good relationship with his parents and siblings, he has one sibling he doesnt see but thats because hes grown up. Hes 18, and a third year student in UA. Hes not part of the big 3 but is close friends with them. He has a speaking disorder which is a stutter, but doesnt let that get him down. Hes a bit stubborn, but thats only when fighting is involved, hes seen as nice and a bit shy, hes white and cant tan, he has red hair and dark red eyes, which he gets those features from his mom.

    Slither pickle
    1
  • I got a 23%! My OCs name is Taiyo, after the sun. Basically he falls in the line of a family of golden dragons. The world mostly consists of man-eating monsters or dangerous creatures, and golden dragons happen to be one of the fiercest, hungriest monsters to trudge the planet. So when one is born, they are automatically deemed royalty. Though it is sad, because though golden dragons are strong, other monsters or monster-like humans will hunt these golden dragons for their golden scale and features. Lucky for golden dragons, they can turn into humans to deceive most people. Taiyo hasnt exactly mastered this trick, so his horns and tail still show, which is why he stays inside most of the time.

    His father is king of the country, (theres many more countries with different culture and beliefs) so its natural for Taiyo to become king after his father dies. Their relationship is not smooth at all, as they barely see each other, sometimes going weeks without contact. The king hires tutors, maids/butlers, and anything that can substitute himself with this role. Taiyo must be perfect, strong, trained, and smart. The king expects nothing less of this. Taiyo is also very handsome, as golden dragons tend to be, and hes extremely tall. When in dragon form, these guys are taller than buildings, and can eat families in a second. Hes also slightly feminine, as he has to wear elegant clothes, makeup, and jewlery.

    Sadly, Taiyo cant master the human technique, isnt super smart, and feels extremely lonely. The friends his father hires are only there for the money they receive after caring for Taiyo, which makes him start to not trust anyone.

    Taiyo then meets a teenager who is the same age as Taiyo, who was hired by his father. Though, the two seem to hit it off instantly even though Taiyo is a pretty shy guy. Anyways yada yada, Taiyo realizes he likes this guy. They end up having sex but Taiyo realizes that hes going to be a king and he needs heirs.

    It turns out this guy was jus

    Poopee Nugget
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    • Oops I went over the character limit

      Poopee Nugget
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    • Well anyways it turns out the guy doesnt actually like Taiyo and he tells the king so that Taiyo gets in trouble. Taiyo basically loses all trust in everyone.

      Poopee Nugget
      1
  • I did a few characters I have, and they only got like 15-20% on all. I did one joke one which was putting all the marysue stuff together, and got 68%. Hilarious.

    My character I first did was a dutch angel dragon named Angelica, shes a personal sona and just a bratty dragon who is occasionally nice.

    Im writing a story on my characters (besides Angelica) I hope to publish and just wanted to make sure they werent marysues.

    EEEEeeeEEEE
    1
    • I did it and got 100 lol

      Bandananna
      1
  • I got 17%! Yayyy!

    My character has pink hair, but their world is a fantasy world and unnatural hair is normal. She has brown eyes and is training to be a mage. She has a very high metabolism and can barely gain weight for muscles, so shes very weak. But for some reason the more I describe her, she seems more like a Mary Sue. (Btw shes an original character not from a fandom)

    HelloJello
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    • Also, her backstory is kinda tragic, because her mom was diagnosed with stage 4 cancer, and while she was away, her dad didnt abuse her per se, but more of like, neglected her. Since she was so little and young, she starved due to her dad off somewhere drinking, so that led to her having stomach surgery due to her stomach eating itself

      HelloJello
      1
  • 6% I knew there was something lacking with his character. Well, he's a human who lives in an alternate Earth, and he has this plain ability to alter his flesh form into a statue/alabaster. It's very weird and it's not something that can blend in with most artist OCs and that's why I've been struggling making friends because he was rather dull. He has also been harsh towards his father before he passed away, and obviously regretted it. He had a sister but however passed away as she had cancer. He and his mother are the only ones currently living in the world. He has enemies, tho. It would be boring if there weren't any. First, it was himself, and the entire world. However in this world of mine, everyone else is against the world. They build teams to defend themselves from the new age, and somehow builds up a camaraderie alongside their pilgrimage together. He looks like any other plain man, specifically British, although a bit more good-looking.

    VersaTrov
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    • *He has enemies too, though. It would be rather boring if he had none. First, himself, second, the world.

      And I used to make friends with artists back then and it was easier for me to do so as my character was one with an eye-catching appearance. Just in case it confused any of you as to why I included the issue about me being unable to struggle making friends just because my OC wasn't interesting enough.

      VersaTrov
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  • Oh! Almost forgot! Victoria L. is not part of the Student Council, but shes on their good side (shes on all antagonist good actually). Shes a Lady of Few Words, a bit impatient, and is a mortal despite being quite strong ( the antagonists doesnt usually think about killing her mainly because shes unimportant . If she do get targeted, she could handle the situation herself sometimes or get help which is almost always around).

    Anonymity
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  • 18%

    I have to say, I expected a bit more due to my character having a decent past. But 18% is a bit surprising if I must say.

    The quiz is fairly well, though the is your character 40+, and looks their age question is kind of a defect, as theyre 20 but however look their age.

    All in all this is a great quiz, would recommend for anyone writing a series, getting into role-play, or just making an OC in general.

    Markus
    1
  • 17%

    My character is around 22 years old, she has blue hair and red eyes (that's normal for her world) she is a villian. Her parents died when she was little, and she got adopted a few years later by a small family with an older son. Let's just say they where not nice

    She started her life of crime when she was around 16 let's say, by doing some petty theft. When she was 19 she burned her adopted parents house down and devoted her life to crime

    Her name is Comyt (Com for short) and her pronouns are She/Her or They/Them

    AnxiousAce
    1
  • Sooo i used one of my oc's Sara Mercier, she is like a mix between a vampire and demon shes mixed (french mother finnish father) she has natural red eyes and Black hair she was born in 1999 also shes a pansexual + accept any pronounce. Some stuff of her was from a genorator like her being left her mother at age 2 her father was normal (the genorator made he was a a choholic changer it), he married a woman whit 2 kids when she was 14 she lives in a whealthey aaaaah i cant spell neiborhodd + she drownd a 11 years old and wiqh she could kill more people... Yeahnot too much shes a mage.

    Lavalamp
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    • She got a 19%

      Lavalamp
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    • I forgot her powers... She has one umm more like uhhh... Green lantern and turn them in to fire (she Can make fireballs) water (now i know how she drownd th 11y old) they are transparent. Yeeeeee she knows every language like every. Pretty usefull but not in killing people.

      Lavalamp
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    • I always find characters with linguistic powers fun, you can play so much with them! And I think they probably could help out with a ruse for murder, perhaps if she liked to loiter in airports or train stations and convinced people to come back to her place or just helped them out with directions, especially if they dont speak the native language of the location! I like your character!

      Mewisloud
      1
  • 27% Mary sue huh? That's kinda disappointing, but I ain't gonna shoot the messenger. In case anyone is curious, here is a basic rundown of the MCYT OC I used for this quiz:

    Name - Cherry Hoglidite.
    Age - 21.
    Pronouns - She/Her.
    Species - Half Piglin Half human.

    Personality - Witty and tough on the outside, sensitive and in need of love and acceptance on the inside.

    "Powers"(I say that cuz normal humans don't have these things, they're specific to her species) - Knockback fists, sensitive hearing, the ability to speak to pigs, piglins, and hoglin beasts.

    Origin - Nether.

    Family - Pietron Hoglidite(Father, deceased) Unknown mother.

    Allies - Technoblade, Phillza, Ranboo, Phoebe, and Nikki.

    Backstory - Her human mother died during the birthing process so her piglin father had to raise her in the nether, teaching her to steel from the bastion so they could survive since he wasn't respected enough to get a job cuz he took a human wife. He took his anger out on her a lot, and she has a few scars to prove it. One day she took too much and accidently dropped a gold nugget, alerting the guards, they took her father's life because he was held responsible for her actions. She carried on a pretty much raised herself in the harsh environment. Eventually she was old enough to be recognized as a wanted criminal, she saw something she had never seen before, a portal, and she leaps into it in hopes it would help her get away from the guards and ends up in the overworld. There she starts rummaging through a cabin she finds and it turns out to belong to Technoblade. They fight for a bit but eventually agree that if she helps out around the house and mines and becomes his loyal battle partner, she can stay as long as she needs too. Eventually she joins the Syndicate and becomes close friends with Techno, she develops a crush on him but I'm leaving it up to the fans and the actual person behind the Techno character to decide whether they should be a couple or not.

    Foreverblushing
    1
  • Ok, I got 19% for my OC Mira. I've been worrying if she was a Mary Sue or not because she can Manipulate water with her voice and she is a half Loch ness. Because of this, she's locked up in an unknown market, where they constantly remove her scales and sell them to keep the market thriving. Just a quick FYI, no, she is not the protagonist, she is the deuteragonist.

    CreepyIsMyLife
    1
    • That actually sounds really cool :D

      Una
      1
  • I did this test for ny oc Lennon and got 21%. If I'm fully honest I don't see them as a Mary Sue, they are non-binary and go by they/them pronouns. They were born with dirty blonde hair but dyed it green after getting a buzz cut. For the mental disorder question they have dyslexia and PTSD (the PTSD is from their younger sister being abused), They get severely bullied but somehow always seem to see the positive side of everything. They're 14 and completely 100% a human. They have teal eyes although they is blind in one because of a scar caused by their abusive father makin it turn white (Idk its my logic). They don't actually fall in love but another one of my ocs has a tiny crush on them. They don't like her back though. Their family is pretty accepting when it comes to them being nonbinary (accept from their Dad but thats a story for another time.) They are kinda average when it comes to weight although they are a bit taller then some of my other ocs.

    TiaTheWeeb
    0
    • Omg I meant my at the start

      TiaTheWeeb
      0
  • 25%- I wasn't expecting this with my character, Aroura, simply because of the fact that she's 320 years old. Not to mention that she's a fairy (A reimagined fairy, mind you. Very different from the mainstream type, imo.) and her whole race relies on powerful bard-like magic. And, needless to say, after 320 years you're gonna have some bad stuff happen, a lot of love interests, and a ton of reflection on your personality. I mean, she IS pretty aggressive, petty, and essentially an alcoholic (kind of? her fae-blood keeps her pretty sober, but she hates using magic and as long as she's slightly intoxicated she can't use it.), so I guess those flaws brought her score down, but I'm still shocked.

    Anyway, to make a long story short I was expecting 50% at least and was pleasantly surprised when I got 25%. And truth be told, I used Aroura specifically because I wanted to get the highest score possible while remaining honest about my characters.

    Well, that means only one thing! I'm going to quiz with them all until we have an answer!

    ActualAmadeus
    0
    • immortal storm spirit who was the head royal guard but got exiled because he broke the #1 rule while trying to find a traitor? 19%

      young dragon raised on a human-run reserve who had his family killed off by dragon hunters? 17%

      Ghost of a human who was burned for learning to use magic? 16%

      a racist elf who runs a tavern and got exiled from her group for murder? 10%

      In short, I think my main cast, AKA a drunk DnD party, is fine. But I'm also a little worried about how they kept getting lower and lower with each one. Oh well, I'm sure it's fine.

      ActualAmadeus
      0
  • My character feels like the cliche Mary Sue, so I was surprised she only got 18%.

    Her name is Jaci (pronounced like Jackie). She's fourteen years old, lives with her parents, and owns two dogs, Goldie and Cocoa. (They're named after their coat colors) Her hair is a light brown and her eyes are emerald green, so she''s not that far of in the appearance department other that unusually bright eyes.

    Her grandmother was a jeweler who loved to collect crystal figurines. One day when Jaci was visiting he grandmother, a brutal car accident occurred. Her grandmother sadly passed away in it. Jaci fell into a depression. She had loved her grandmother so much, and she felt like it was her fault because she was the one who suggested they drive to the ice cream parlor instead of walking. Jaci's family inherited her grandmother's collection of crystal figurines. Most of them are kept in a large wooden cabinet that is locked at all times. However, Jaci keeps one of them in her room. It's a beautiful red figurine of a cardinal. She loves this one specially because she helped pick out this one with her grandmother at the shop (I threw a little symbolism in there; cardinals are symbolic of a deceased loved one being near).

    One day, a relative shows up at her house looking to take one of the figurines. She is known among Jaci's family for being a severe alcoholic who will sell anything to buy more booze. While trying to shove Jaci out of the way, she accidentally knocks over her cardinal figurine. It hts the ground and shatters. Jaci is furious. This is where she learns she has the power to turn things into crystals/precious gem.

    At first, she is worried everyone will despise her for her power. She runs away and meets a strange creature in the forest, which she quickly befriends.

    I'm still working out some plot holes, pacing issues, and such with my friends, but what do you think? Any ideas/suggestions for me o add? :D

    miley_fairy
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  • I put in one of my most overpowered characters, named Ana, that I honestly thought would be WAY more sue than 32%, which is what I got.

    Shes a white furred canine with pink eyes and her own mini dimension that shes basically the god of. She also hops universes a lot, and knows a lot more than she should. She also breaks the fourth wall a bit. Sounds like a total sue, right?

    I asked a ton of friends for weaknesses, and together, we came up with some pretty good ones. The character is (in my opinion) rather fairly balanced now. There are certain areas where she cant use her abilities, she cant affect herself in her own dimension (ex. No self-healing), and she cant hip dimensions at a whim, its mostly random. Shes also extremely overconfident and believes herself to always be the smartest one in the room, even if this isnt true. Her dimension is also only about the size of an average house. It gets smaller if she becomes injured.

    I think the unexplained phobia of snails is a good de-suefier too lol

    Even if she still sounds like a sue, Id have to type a lot more to explain how her abilities work and all that, and I dont think any of you want to read an essay about an OC you dont know much about, so Ill just leave this here, I guess.

    Tips and thoughts would be appreciated! My discord is Ackubota#5127 if youd like to talk about characters, art, or anything else, or if youd like a better explanation of this character!

    Ackubota
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    • So she basically has a different power set in her dimension? I like it. Very original way of nerfing a character.

      JuniperRochopper
      2
    • This really helped me out because this character is a creepypasta oc and she is with ticci toby but they don't imediatlly love each other at first it's one sided then it's both of them. I heard from a lot of people that I should take this quiz to test my character. and I only got 31% mary sue which isn't that bad but could be better so I will make a couple of changes. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

      foxfoxfox30
      0
  • Hey! I took this quiz about my OC Paisley (she's a bat) and I got 23%. Her 'tragic backstory' is getting abused/cheated on by her ex-boyfriend. Nothing too tragic. I agree, she could use a bit of spicing up. This quiz is helpful and I'll probably be taking it with a few other of my OCs.

    ThatOneCoolPerso
    2
  • 10%
    this is nice
    welp

    expec ted higher because she has amnesia and is severely obsessed with a main character because that character is very familiar to her.

    and the character she finds familiar finds her familiar too, personality wise.

    And has a tiny soft spot for her.
    but is also mean.

    And is somehow she's that character's apprentice.

    Becaus e it's that characters fault how she got in the story the first place.

    Very very very long story.

    carl_the_llama
    1
  • I got 23% for my DnD character, Valentine. He is a tiefling bard turned serial killer. He hunts down the people involved with the brutal murder of his mother, often adding people who remind him of said killers to his list. I made him for our villain campaign and he's been very fun to play so far. He does show empathy for survivors of abuse as his mother was one as well and he is a FIRM believer in "if you have been wronged, return the favor tenfold". He fully believes that he is a hero in his mind doing everyone else a favor as he takes out people he deems as immoral and abusive. His family was a part of a circus which is why I decided to make my villain a bard, who is currently multiclassing warlock who serves Desirat. I'm not planning for him to change his ways as I've decided he's been doing this long enough to where there is no turning back, especially considering there is a hefty bounty for his head and he refuses to go to jail. He does not have a happy ending, find the love of his life, gets married, and has kids off in the country. He reopens the circus where the tragedy started and devotes himself to Desirat. He continues to conduct horrific murders and becomes his own demented ringleader.

    ChaosCo
    1
  • I got %20-%28, I did it bc I was curious! My character is Kounna okami, shes the daughter of inari okami the Asian goddess. Shes a kitsune and she lives in a camp with other demigods like her, the questions that I think made it so high was 1. She dont have a remarkable singing voice but its decent enough for her to sing to her kids so I was kinda stuck, 2. She didnt die and come back Alive but she was in a coma at one point but i think I answered no and 3. Is being a demigod royalty? I dont think so but idk

    Foxlo106
    1
  • Vale Sayer is the character I tested out at 16% a Mary Sue, which I think is rather impressive for my Level 14 age. His story is that he was born in London, England in the 18th-19th century, and had a normal childhood, but when he was 19, he was accused of murder and was executed for a murder he didnt commit. The name Vale Sayer is an alias, and he is referred to with many other names, but he is a thief with a bounty on his head the fake names are necessary to keep himself out of prison, as he has negative connotations of prisons, jails, and the cops (which in the afterlifes are called the Badges, which is headed by seven people who control all of the afterlifes government called the Council), because of his past.

    He does have one illness, which in this world is called "corruption', which essentially causes a soul's body to slowly deteriorate, which is a big part of his character, as I imagine that growing up, he worked as some construction worker/farmhand, and he is supposed to act as the muscle or semi-powerhouse of the main 6, so him having an illness that would weaken him is a good negative trait or setback in my eyes. The only real supernatural trait about him is the mark around his neck that he received as a kind of like a branding from his hanging, and his eyes, which are a kind of pale green caused by the effects of the afterlife, and his corruption combined, as his eyes before death were hazel, but going to the afterlife turned them dark green, and when he got corrupted the color sort of drained from his eyes.

    He also is sort of the groups older brother figure, being one of the first members of a small ragtag group of thieves which consists of the other members of the main 6. Together they go around, stealing and scamming their way through the afterlife to put food in front of them, all while being chased around the nation by the badges. There is more to the story than just stealing, as Gods and Goddesses exist, but since Im planning on making this into

    WarmBird
    1
  • I got 14%. The OC I used here is Rhinestone (One I came up with yesterday lol):

    Appearance: She is a humanoid figure made of stone and gemstones. She can create anything out of gemstones with her power, and creates her clothes depending on the occasion. Her head floats and is diamond-shaped with a chip in the corner. Her body is light lavender.

    Age: 23 Years old
    Love life: Nobody-

    Personality: Chill, fun, kind, caring, can be overly attached

    Catchphrase: "We'll meet when rain is falling, like rhinestones from the sky!"

    Powers: Geokinisis (Limited by how large the object being moved is), invincibility (Due to her being made out of gems and stone), summoning (Limited by how large the object being summoned is)

    Rh1n3st0n33y3s
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    • the quality of the character majorly depends on what you're planning to use them for. sounds like this is just a fun train of thought inspired by my favourite gorillaz song lol

      but if you want actual in-depth honest feedback for a character you need to be interesting bc you're planning to use it for something (like a project); hmu :)

      metaphisto
      1
  • My character Blaise MacKay got a 26%. I didnt expect him to get a quarter score. He is an elf from a fantasy world Ive created, and he has heat magic abilities (which get more powerful as the climax approaches).

    Hes 17, and has brown hair with orange eyes (Thats normal among elves.) He has a pretty normal appearance other than that.

    DevilsTaxiDrivr
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    • Id rate him about a 5% Garry-stu. Unless his personality is an all-knowing, loved by all handsome dude with zero flaws, he seems like a character with a lot of potential, without being an awful protagonist.

      HalfMoonrise
      1
  • My OC is 15% marysue according to this test but this was a confusing test because he is a alien a lazy one and he excuses himself for it because his mom pushed him to his limits in education when he was little he is intelligent with education but lazy and i used this to drive the plot forward he landed on earth and got stuck there and meets other aliens no one hates him but 't got to know him no one likes him either they hadnt he tries to create communicator to tell other aliens he was stuck. he was in a trio of aliens who were nice enough to take him in and he hid with them and they got to know each other and became friend he has a slite crush on one of them whos past is unknown she can be a little obnoxious at times but she is pretty and was slowly opening up until my OC messed up and and got mad I know its bland I'm still working on giving them personality

    foodie
    1

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