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Name: Ravenwing
Gender: Female
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 47 Moons
Rank: Deputy

Appearance: A black she-cat with subtle wing patterns in her fur. She has blue eyes and short fur. She is surprisingly strong for her lanky build.

Personalty: Harsh and jaded. She is one of the most aggressive cats in the clan, but she has a soft heart that she only shows to a select few.

Story: Raven was born as a rogue in the center of a big city. She was kicked out of the family at a young age and spent many moons honing her skills to steal food from other cats. Eventually she found herself at the carrionplace and first met the ShadowClan leader at the time, Wildstar. Wildstar was the one to introduce her to the ways of clan life. Raven quickly fell for the sense of community and joined the clan. She even gained a mate and two kits, Silverpaw and Goldenpaw.

But not all was what it seemed. After becoming deputy, she realized that Wildstar didnt belive in StarClan. The ancestors came to her instead, warning her about dangers that lay in wait for Wildstar. She took it as her duty to protect Wildstar for as long as it took. And- was she falling for her leader?

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Mantidstar

Mantidstar was born in a group of rouges, his name was Moonlight then. He was born with a black pelt and white chest, and yellow eyes. One day when most of the rouges were asleep, a cat came back and rather than bringing food, they brought a lit cigarette. So, when he spat it out, the grass caught on fire and a few rouges died because they were sleeping. Moonlight got separated from the other rouges, but he was only panicked because of the fire caught on his ear, so he put it out on a small patch of grass, he was only a few moons old. A few moons into shifting more onto the loner side, he met with another loner who was named thorn and they became friends. A few moons later, a twoleg took Moonlight and left Thorn behind. Moonlight was a kittypet for days until the twoleg found an infection in his ear from the fire and Moonlight had to get his ear cut off or else there would be deadly circumstances. Moonlight was horrified after his ear being removed, so he ran other of the door and into the woods in a panic. After strolling around the forest for a while, he came across Risenstar, Risenclan leader, who greeted and took him into Risenclan due to a previous disaster that they called the death storm that wiped out most of risenclan. The medicine cat, Crowpelt, also got a prophecy specifically about Mantidpaw saying "Only a cat as stealth as a mantid can fix a broken clan's mistakes" Previously. Skip into time, as a warrior Mantidheart met his old friend Thorn only his new name was Nighttusk. Mantidheart was the deputy as the old deputy, Tornclaw, died of poisoned prey. After Mantidstar became leader, he made Nighttusk the deputy. Eventually, Nighttusk died of his own foolish curiosity, and he jumped into a grinder. Mantidstar was in disbelief for a while, but eventually he made the new deputy Pebbleshade.

Lives:
1 = Food poisoned
2 = Earthclan attack
3 = Gathering battle (sadly ;-;)
4 = Ghostclan attack
5 = Pushed into a pit of mice
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Name: Hugo
Gender: Tom

Clan: lives with his mate sunspot , in shadowclan, ruled over a weak leader. sunspot plans to take the role.

Age: about 20 moons
Rank: never really joined the clan

Personality: politely rude, a bit cowardly but would do almost anything for his loved ones.

Likes: likes to collect random things, a mouse bone, Once he found a ring outside. when he lived with his homefolk he enjoyed the company of the family dog Hattie, who sometimes got on his nerves.

DISLIKES: not being comfortable/well fed, other cats who give a sense there better in every way possible.

Appearance: a chunky orange tabby tom, wide pale hazel eyes, a handsome-ish face. Sort of gives a sense of arrogance.

Some backstory: he was living happily being fed every day before he was put on a diet which he was discussed by, he went outside trying to catch some prey, and wondered further and further away from his home. Hugo suddenly Hurd heard a painful yowling, ducking into bushes, a blood stained, twisted sort of cat was limping as fast as he could away from something. Another huge light gray Tom steps tored the bloody one and brutaly kills it and drags it away. Hugo panicked of what he saw bolted and found his way to windclan camp were he begs to stay for protection. They agreed and was going to be given the name finchpaw which he refused. Hugo made close friends with sunpaw and she knowing that shadowclan was weak, and wanting power they plan to go there. after he had stayed there for a while she developed a crush he was ( kind of ) unaware of, later becoming mates and so on.

Name: Hazelpaw
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 11 Moons
Rank: Warrior Apprentice

Appearance: Hazelpaw is a light brown tom with darker stripes on his legs. He has white paws, muzzle, and tail-tip. His ears are tall and pointed, with dark brown tufts at the tips. He has a small dent on the top of his right cheek, and a small scar right above his left eye. His whiskers are particularly short, and he has big, pale, olive-green eyes. He is muscular, but has short legs, making him a couple of ears shorter than his denmates.

Negative Persona Traits: Irritable, short-tempered, defensive.

Positive Persona Traits: Honest, skilled hunter, observant.

Final Score: %78

Name: Chipped-Gorge
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Exiled TC/Rouge
Age: 27 Moons
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: Slender, agile, and some-what tall, brown-orange stripes with a golden pelt and splotches of white. Right eye yellow while the left is a light orange. Has a shredded ear and one long scar that starts at her mouth then down towards the upper part of her throat.

She has long sharp ears that look like theyre capable of hearing far away but truly, shes partly deaf. She has a abnormally long and fluffy tail while the rest of her pelt is very short.

One of her teeth is slightly chipped from a clumsy fall onto a rock while being a kit which gave her the prefix, Chipped.

Personality: Ruthless, untrustworthy, thief, ambitious, zealous, and curious

Likes: Smooth rocks, tall grass, drawing in dirt, and squirrels

Dislikes: Loud obnoxious sounds, leaf-bare, confined areas

Score: 86%, Its a lot better than Id expect ;_; I was thinking more like 63-74%, something like that.

Name: Kittenfang ( originally had the prefix collie)

Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan

Backstory: Mother was a little and father was the SC med cat. He had two siblings, Houndkit ( tom) and terrierkit ( she) their mom abandoned them and they were found by windclan. They had a normal life growing up. Colliepaw fell in love with a economic cat, but was friendzoned. When his assent came, he found a rabbit and while chasing it, a hunter found him and shot him. His lower jaw was blown off and teeth were chipped or fell out. He recovered with the help of a friend, who also had a disability. The two fell in love and became mates, colliepaw having the new name Kittenfang. They had a litter of three together, all of them having a disability. Kittenfang and his mate grew old together and happily died the same day together as elders

Name: Bubbleshine
Gender: Female

Clan: ForestClan (OC clan, not a real one) past: Kittypet

Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: Lightpaw

Appearance: Pale-ginger Siamese she-cat with icy blue eyes.

Personality: Bold and athletic. Not patient at all, and loves to take risks. Never thinks twice about anything she does, and is a bit of a trouble maker. She's kind at heart but has a tough shell.

Backstory: Luna was an average kitty pet living her life. She loved life just the way it was. Her owners had decided to move away, and the place they were going had a no-pet policy. Luna was abandoned in the forest. Later, a cat called Birdpelt invited her into ForestClan. Luna refuses at first and thinks she can handle living life in the forest by herself. She finds out she can't. With a rough attitude, she confesses she'd like to join. From then her name was Bubblepaw for her blue eyes. (Btw, she was about 7 moons at the time). She learned quickly and loved hunting. After saving Goldenblaze from drowning, who was deputy at the time, she earns her warrior name "Bubbleshine". She lives an average warrior life, and since ForestClan was founded by kittypets (it's a long story :p) everyone learned to respect her. She later gets an apprentice, Lightpaw and passes on her knowledge to her. Overall, Bubbleshine has a tough time asking for help from others, and is pretty grumpy.

My score: 86% I'm willing to take it :D

name: Willowstar
gender: she-cat

all names: willow, willowkit, willowpaw, and willowleaf.

looks: fluffy silver pelt, fluffy tail, green eyes

clan: WindClan
rank: leader
mate: Ravenwhisper
paren ts: fern & rocky
foster parents: duskpool & iceleaf
littermate s: hazelwing, jay, and lion

kits: 1# litter: thunderheart & lightningclaw

2# litter: mudwhisker, cloverdust, dreampelt, silverstripe, and grassrunner

facts: was a rouge as a kit, mother died, father got a new mate and neglected her and her littermates. her and her sister ran away, joined windclan, and lived their lives. mated with cat from riverclan, and that cat soon joined windclan.

Name: Lilybear
Age: 13 moons

Past names: Lilykit, Lilypaw(medicine cat apprentice), Sweetie (loner), Lilypaw (warrior apprentice)

Gender : Female
Rank: junior warrior

Love interests(current): Stoatpaw (oc tom), Sunny (oc rogue tom)

Love interests (future) : Wildtail (oc tom), Misteddream (oc she), Stoatnose (oc tom-formerly Stoatpaw), Sunny (oc rogue tom)

Sexual Orientation: bisexual

Allegiance: Rogue (formerly) Leaf Clan (current)

Traits: funny, weird, bubbly once known, daydreamer, flirty sometimes, annoying, anti-social, silly

Voice: very high, cute and kit-like (Doll like)

Appearence: a golden-cream she-cat with a small frame but large paws. She has short, yet lean legs that make her soft,white paws look even bigger(which her suffix 'bear is based on). Her face is perfectly shaped facial features make all cats (tom and she) fall in love with her, yet her quite annoying voice soon puts them off her. She has small, rounded ears with cute cream tufts on the tips. Her chest-fluff is large and white which perfectly contrasts her golden underbelly. She has a bushy tail that is quite small but looks much larger because of her fluff :3

Favourite food: bluebird

Friends: Mouseface (oc she), Stoatpaw/Stoatnose (oc tom), Littletail (oc she), Sunny (oc rogue)

Disliked by: Riverheart (oc she), Rainyflame (oc tom), Rugged (oc rogue tom)

Theme song: I wouldn't mind- (He Is We)
:3

[Second Comment, Took the test Twice]
Name: RisingDawn
Name: FadingDusk
Gender(s): Both Female
Role(s): Both apprentices

Pelt (Dawn): Blackish, Burn't Red fade, with fluffy coat, Etc

Pelt (Dusk): Black Faded blueish-grey, fluffy coat, & few scars

Eyes (Dawn): A golden-green on the right, purely white on the left.

Eyes (Dusk): A green/teal on the left, & purely white on the right.

Personality (Dawn): Clumsy, Heart-Felt, caring yet sassy.

Personality (Dusk): Cold, Intellgent, & collected.

Details/Traits (Dawn): 'The bright blessed Day'

Details/Traits (Dusk): 'The dark sacred night'

Lore: Rising`Dawn & Fading`Dusk are both born at the same time, twins. These twins are the beheld StarClan's gift to RiverClan, for they both are in a prophecy ment for the doom of one sister, & the throne for the other. Dawn was popular, kind & hot-headed, & dusk kept her out of trouble. But in the end, the tables turned, as Dawn's corrupted thirst for power, & Dusk's love for her sister had both sisters in deep peril. That is, only when Dusk saved her sister, that dawn had realised the damege she caused, at the cost of her sister's life. Once they both are in StarClan, they're then brought to the embodyment of StarClan, to be reborn as brothers. (To be Containued)

Name: FalconStrike
Gender: Tom / Male
Role: Deputy

Pelt: Blue faded into brownish red, White from Underside of throat to mid torso & front paws

Eyes: Golden/amber

Personality: Cunning, Humorous, Couragous, & Determined.

Details/Traits: Extremely Sharp Claws, & Exellent Eye-Sight.

Lore: FalconKit became an apprentice, just as any other, at 6 moons. He was extremely determined to become an expert warrior, & a wonderful fighter, to defend those he loves. As an apprentice, he met a caring & gold-hearted she, named 'Fox`Tail'. He then became Falcon`Strike, & devoted the rest of his life to his mate & 3 sons. In a horrific earthquake, FoxTail was killed by a Land-Slide, along with two of his sons. He then raised the 3rd son, to be the greatest warrior of all time, & once he became deputy, he made sure his son would take his place after his death. He then passed at the age of 38 Moons (25 in human), His son taking his place, as requested to the leader. In StarClan, Falcon`Strike finally reunited with his one & true love, FoxTail.

More?: Falcon`Strike is one of my favorite, & many Ocs, I couldn't decide which to specificly use on this test- So i randomly decided, Falcon`Strike should be tested.

Name: Suntail
Rating: 84%
Age: 18 moons
Rank: medicine cat
Clan: WindClan
Prophecies: 1
Parents died after first prophecy
Positive traits: loyal, hardworking, sweet

Negative traits: envious, prideful, overworked

Likes: herbs, interacting with the StarClan, casting for kits

Dislikes: showboating, swimming, sleeping (very active)

Appearance: orange tabby, very floofy. Large tail, bandana. Brown eyes. White mittens.

Backstory: when Suntail was 2 moons old, she had her first prophecy. Soon after, her parents died. She mourned for a long time. Her father was the previous leader of WindClan. The new leader was very selfish and unkind. She ran away from WindClan and became a rogue. By the time she was 6 moons, she didn't enjoy the rogue live. She returned to WindClan and had a 1 moon sentence to torture. She got a scar from that one moon. She is now a medicine cat training an apprentice, Mothtail.

Name: DuskLeap
Gender: She-cat/molly
Clan: WindClan
Age:IDK they just old
Rank:Elder

Personality: A committed, friendly, cheerful she who tries to be independent even though she is death.

DuskLeap was never a real apprentice or warrior because of her hearing problem. Her brother and her had a great bond and he found a way to communicate with her. Although she never had a mentor she was determined to learn. After her brother finished training he helped her learn everything he did. As warriors she and her brother went out of camp and played together and tried hunting. Once he had passed she was overwhelmed and went to see her mother(SpiderFog) for comfort. Her brother helped her on her journey to starclan.

My oc is, Cyan'Breeze. She is a small elder she cats with a cyan pelt and eyes with black spots and toes with a black mask. She lives in river clan after being a leader of Thunder Clan and wiping out a clan by herself over time. She was a good cat and went to star clan after being killed by her sister from jealousy, rip.

Age:192 moons (16 years wow!)
Gender:She cat (Female)
Mate:Elk'Face (Died in a fire)

All names:Cyan'Kit, Cyan'Paw, Cyan'Breeze, Cyan'Star.

Parents: Mom:Meadow'Cloud. Dad:Five'Foot.
Time born:Oct/5/2078 at 5:34 am.

Name: Sparrowheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FogClan

Appearance: Brown with a black stripe running from her head to tail, white heart on her forehead, greenish-blue eyes

Personality: Light-spirited and naive, she's like a kit in a warriors body. She's also very caring and will help any cat in need.

Story: Her mother mananged to bring a time of peace between clans and later became leader of FogClan. Sparrowkit used to brag about this to the other kits, but later learned how snobby she was being. She became Sparrowpaw and her mentor was Onyxice, who would often have to take over Hailpaw's training as well. Sparrowpaw soon grew feelings for Hailpaw, but was unaware he was using her to get closer to the clan leader. At Sparrowpaw's first gathering, she met Squirrelpaw from MapleClan. She began getting very close to him and was too naive he was using her for secrets about FogClan. After they became warriors, Sparrowheart noticed her sister - Fadedbird - and Featherfall - a grey she-cat - grew feelings for each other. Sparrowheart couldn't understand why so she grew distant from her sister. Eventually, Sparrowheart and Hailcrash had a litter of kits; Nutkit and Ashkit. However, Ashkit disappeared a few days before his apprentice ceremony, which made her extra protective of Nutkit. At gatherings, she would often sneak off with Squirrelfern and began growing feelings for him too. Hailcrash knows this and is becoming possessive of her, which means Sparrowheart never has time to be alone.

That's all I've gotten done so far! She got a score of 73% :D

Name:coyote storm
Age:18 moons
Clan:wind-clan
Rank:deputy
Personality:strong,and prideful, yet gentle
Gender:male/Tom
Likes:kits,clanmates,his apprentice

Dislikes:shadow-clan patrols that cross the border/disobeying the code

Apearrence:coyote-storm is a cream tom with orange-ish stripes and amber eyes his appearance also makes him looks unbeatable in battle although he isnt

Backstory:he was raised in wind-clan. Born in a storm with his two brothers fish-kit, and bat-kit. While an apprentice he was mentored by hawk-breeze a brown she-cat. When he was a warrior he was given the name coyote-storm by his leader ferret-star. He fought off a badger loosing his brother fish-whisker. When he became deputy he was the age of 16 moons. He is described as wise. He tells stories to young kits,and apprentices. He has his very own apprentice now a she-cat named falcon-paw.

So his name ist Phoenixstar (Phoenixfire) and he is related to Tigerstar and thats why he was in his first prophecy- He has an older Brother, two older Sisters and a Younger sister. His older brother has three kids but doesnt care for them. One of them became a kittypet, the other one joined his Clan later and the Last one became besties with him. So, he lived in an Oc-Clan called Crystalclan but they got attacked from wolves and one stole his Younger sister greykit who got the Name Dragonkit from them. She never changed her name and is now deputy of another OC-clan called Forestclan, her name is Dragonscale, short Draco. She hates Phoenix. He rescued her from the wolves and got to know the ex of his Brother who got banished from her Clan, because she was a healer. Phoenixstars prophecy was written in German, becuz I am German and I do Not want to translate it, so...No Prophecy for you, sorry :D Phoenix' mother died very early, her name was Spiritsoul, they named the oldest son after her, Silentsoul. He joined the "Clan" of their Aunt Cherryfog who now terrifies all Clans in the so called "old territories". Back to Phoenixstar: he was feared and hated by his father and all other cats and got mad after his older sis, Silverrose (now Silverstar), became leader of the Crystalclan and not him. He Made his own clan, the Clan of the night. He took in kittypets, banned cats and everyone who was good enough. After many moons He got accepted and ended his war with the Crystalclan.

The second Prophecy is more about his brother and his oldest son, himself being called "the innocent" by Starclan itself, after they called him "the Tiger" in the First prophecy. He treats Silentsouls Son Nightburn like his own, he has three kits, one of them will become evil. Phoenixstars dad became father again of two kits, one of them will die early, the other will become evil. Phoenixstar is gay and his partner is called Griffinclaw (Harry Potter lol). But because Phönix is an a-hole he has v

Name: Glowingheart
Age: 29 moons
Clan: Windclan

Personality: swift, not very strong, with some trust issues, somehow calm.

Appearence: A siamese averagely tall she-cat with blue-greenish eyes and a small scar in her cheek.

Backstory/trauma: Her mentor Flamingfox was a vicious, bloodthirsty and harsh yet skilled tom, who basically abused her in her apprenticeship. She heard things she wasn't supposed to and he tried to kill her, luckily a kit that had wondered out of camp to see them 'train' saw them, and the dawn patrol was just in time to save her life. She stayed in the medicine cat for some time before having her warrior ceremony. She then fell in love with Swiftgaze, a silent but caring tom. They had four kits called Onyxkit, Sunkit, Ivorykit and Coffeekit. (Now ima stop here bc she just lives a happy life, and it's her kits who have the prophecy, not her. Starclan gives the propechy to a random shy apprentice)

Name: Halo'Fang
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 36 Moons
Rank: Deputy
Clan:RiverClan

Personality: Stubborn, (Somewhat stupid but means well) Kindhearted Snarky.

Likes: Her mate and kits, (Kits were apprenticed before she was made deputy) A elder named Fallen'Stone (her brother)

Dislikes: One apprentice named Stormpaw, and Shadowclan

Appearance: Halo'Fang is a slender, glossy-furred she, she's (Somehow) a bengal patterned, dark brown with small light orange patches one on her front left leg, chest, tail, and face (Like.. a chimera cat) She has very subtle heterochromia, (Dark blue and greenish blue) Her left ear has a small rip out of it, and she has a scar across her nose from fighting a thunderclan cat who was hunting on riverclans territory shes a medium furred cat. Her pelt is usually well kept and she hates getting it dirty.

Idk.. I forgot my score and im to lazy to go redo it or look at it soooo yeah.

My OC's name is Dewfur she comes from RiverClan, and she is 32 moons old. She's a lesbian.

Dewfur's personality:

Dewfur is slightly more introverted. In converstions she is quiet, considerate, and funny. She is guided by her heart and likes to watch fish in the river. Dewfur can also be competitive and destructive. She doesn't share her opinions, but when she does it's in favor of war. Dewfur is power-hungry and is hoping to be leader one day.

Rank: deputy

Apperence: Her fur is desaturated gray with a striped tabby pattern. It is shaggy and long. She has a triangular face with circular blue eyes. She has a soft voice and a leafy scent. She has a long, fluffy tail and is considered loyal to most but she will turn evil.

Backstory: Her mothers were Featherface and Dappledpool, she was very close to Featherface because Dappledpool died shortly after giving birth to four kits, which left Featherface to raise them. Featherface was killed by a fox and after she became a apprentice and worked hard to try and please her dead parents. She soon began to go mad, and killed two of her siblings, Blueheart and Greythorn. Ever since she has been longing for power but acts loyal to one day become leader of RiverClan

Family:
Dappledpool (with StarClan)
Featherface (with StarClan)
Greythorn (with StarClan)
Blueheart (with StarClan)
Olivetail (alive)

Name: Waxtail
Gender: Tom
Age: 27 Moons

Clan: Luminousclan (OC clan which is basically the main clan like Thunderclan)

Rank: Warrior

Personality (Good & Bad): Hot tempered, clam (At times), independent, honest, responsible, quiet, stubborn, Disobedient

Likes: Bathing in sunlight, the smell after it rains, fall winds, being alone, frogs, & mice

Dislikes: Being wet, snow, loud noises, rats, and dogs

Appearance: Waxtail is a large sized tom, with a long haired pelt, which has red, black, and red-ish brown calico ears, tail, feet and muzzle, and bright amber eyes.

Waxtail has a few scars from his kit-hood, one on his back, two on his front right leg, and one on his left hind leg.

Score: 59% (I know Waxtail isn't the best OC and he also is quite an old one, but I was not expecting that )

Name: BlazeFlight
Gender: Tim
Pronouns: He/Him
Role: Leader
Fur: Black and orange tortoishell
Eyes: Light green

Personality: Cold and rought. Sometimes can be mean but he really doesn't mean it sometimes. He is misunderstood

Lore: He was bringed to the clan (not sure abt the name yet) when he was a kit. He was bringed to a queen named DoveShade. DiveShade accepted Blazekit as her own quickly and treated him like her own. DoveShade already had another kit named Copperkit. Copperkit was older than BlazeFlight and was redy to apprentice in the next moon. Blazekit's brother didn't like Blazekit. Most of the clan didn't also like Blazekit. After long moons of his brother not giving him attention and his mother's love he was named as an apprentice. Blazekit was now named Blazepaw and was trained by the leader. The leader was also very interested in Blazepaw and treated him nicely. The clan didn't still fully agree having Blazepaw in the clan. Copperpaw was really famous in the clan. He was hard working and did anything to get attention from his clan. Later it was shown that Blazepaw wasn't really bad to the clan and did his best to be accepted. The clan started to like Blazepaw now more. But then his brother got jelaus. Copperpaw started to frame Blazepaw from little bad doings. This started to get the clan suspicious about Blazepaw. Soon Copperpaw was named CopperClaw. But not even that long after CopperBush was named, another apprentice was also named Cinderpaw. Blazepaw was now 8 moons old, CopperClaw 13 moons and Cinderpaw 6 moons. Soon Blazepaw grew up and was named BlazeFlight at the age of 13 moons. Time went by and nothing exiting really happened until BlazeFlight reached the age of 37 moons. Cinderbelly and Blazeflight became mates! They had grown a lot if love for each other nad has been best friends since they has been apprentices. Blazeflight was now 37 moons and a warrior, Cinderbelly 35 moons and a warrior and CopperClaw 41 moons and deputy. The life was

name: Sunpaw

appearance: Brown tabby with sun ray like stripes and golden eyes and a cream colored muzzle.

Clan: Riverclan

Story: Sunpaw was born to a she cat named Pebbleleaf in Riverclan but her father left to join Windclan before she was born. she had 3 other siblings and one that died at birth that she never knew about. the medicine cat apprentice got a prophecy from starclan saying, "When the Sun shines brightest the Shadows will fade." at first Berrypaw (The medicine cat apprentice) did not know what this meant but connected two and two and decided the prophecy was about Sunpaw. soon later, Shadowclan took over. there were many battles but eventually Riverclan was forced to retreat and live on the island. Sunpaw, Creampaw, Toadpaw, and Rockpaw went on a mission to restore peace to all clans.