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ivytongue is a smart mouthed sarcastic and agile shekitty

backstory!!: When ivytongue was a young cat she was constantly compared to everyone around her. She had to fit to her mothers (shadefern’s) standards she had to supress her emotions to live up to her mothers expectations thus leading to lots of built up emotions later. Many moons later ivy had gotten appointed for deputy of shadowclan. Although now instead of just her mothers she had to live up to everybody around hers standards slowly driving her insane one day she snapped and killed the leader (lynxstar) and her own mother. she couldnt belive what she had done she knew she needed to flee she ran as fast as she could away from everyone until she had found a barn. Everytime she had thought of what she’d done she would rip a piece of flesh off her paw in punishment. a couple moons later she decided she couldnt keep doing this so praying no other cat had heard of her past she decided to go to thunderclan. suprisingly they hadnt heard what she had done and let her in. after some moons she had her eye on a tomcat named “brindlefeather” he had liked her aswell or so she thought only for him to be seen with a shecat from RIVERCLAN?? after that she decided to build up walls around her so no one could hurt her again. After awhile she had made friends although shes always on edge still leading to her short temper and snappy personality. (STILL WORKING ON HER STORY :3 PROLLY GONNA CHANGE IT)

I did my OC Viverridcall!

Viverridcall of BatClan She-cat Med. Cat Apprentice Diluted orange and brown tabby with yellow eyes and short fur. Is part of the group that deals with the Herb Fox area, so she's learned a bit of fox tongue. She is fairly liked by the Herb Foxes, and is welcome into their herb grounds as often as she likes. She teaches a few of them cat tongue in exchange for their hospitality and kindness.

(The Herb Foxes are foxes that hang around a mushroom patch near the southeast BatClan border. They... Eat the fungi to seek a... High. They've come to respect the ways of the clan cats- thus see no reason to attack or threaten them for no reason.)

Name: Mothglare
Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan
Age: 12 Moons
Rank: apprentice

Appearance: A small shortfured ginger tabby with amber eyes

Personality: Protective, weird, caring, quick thinker, warm hearted, funny, clever, annoying.

Dislikes: family, battles, being stressed, the cold, fleas, slimy fish, shadowclan

Likes: bugs, friends, prey, exploring, kits, the leader, some loners, other apprentices

score: was like 78 or smt

KP name: Panda
Clan name: PandaPaw -> PandaHeart
Gender: She/They

Story: Panda was born in a shelter and adopted by an abusive pit or two-legs. She watched her sister who had come with her die in their hands so listened to the stars and followed the brightest ones to RiverClan. She was held prisoner for a few days and than apprenticed to the leader SwiftStar. When she became a warrior she fell in love with BeeWing (She/Her). They ended up taking in a pair of kits they found by the ThunderPath. They named them DangerKit (He/Him) and MiracleKit (She/Her). PandaHeart than passed away a few moons later as she shoved MiracleKit out of the way of a monster after she attempted to hunt a bird.

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Name: One'Foot
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 43 Moons.
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Trustworthy, fierce, realistic. Harsh, and his realism can appear as pessimism.

Appearance: One'Foot is a tall and broad-shouldered tom with a peanut coloured pelt and a chestnut brown tail and paws. One'Foot has shamrock green eyes and a brown area on his face. The tom has one extra dewclaw which is where he got his name, his ears are pointy and also.. brown.

Name: LogBranch
Gender: Male/Tom

Clan: (OC Clans) Formerly SparrowClan; Currently AppleClan

Age: 36 Moons (approx. 3 years)
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A brown tom with a cream underbelly and dark brown stripes on his legs, a dark brown tail, and amber eyes.

Story: LogBranch was born with his sister, AshKit. They became apprentices together. Logbranch was mentored by StoneFall, a pure black tom with one blue eye and one green eye. LogBranch was loyal and always listened to his mentor. He and his sister also became warriors together. AshPaw became AshSong. And LogPaw became LogBranch. His sister was then chosen deputy. But then, while LogBranch was on patrol, he saw a beuaitul calico She-Cat. She was from AppleClan. Her name was FlowerPatch. LogBranch then figured out she liked him too. They then started meeting at the Big Oak and stuff happened. He then found out FlowerPatch was carrying his kits. By then his sister became leader and was now AshStar. He tried to hide everything but all else failed. He had one more choice and that choice was to join AppleClan. AppleClan only let him in because they were low on warriors. Now LogBranch is living with his mate and kits. But.. His sister is still mad at him...

Name: snowgoose
Gender: tom
Clan: thunderclan
Rank: senior warrior
Age: 55 moons

Personality: politeto clanmates, loyal, rude to loners and trespassers, not a fan of kittypets, patient

Apperance: a white longhaired bob tailed cat with yellow eyes, the tail looks like a goose's tail

History of name: as an apprentice he got bitten in the tail by a goose, he doesn't like to talk about it though

Name: Sunpool
Role: Medicine cat
Clan: Sunclan
Gender: she-cat

Scars: One on the right front paw and the other near the left ear

Personality: kind, helpful, quiet, friendly

Name - Blizzardstar
Gender - Male/Tom
Clan - Skyclan
Age - 53 Moons
Rank - Leader

Personality - Calm, clear-headed, dedicated, flexible, kind-hearted

Likes - Cold winter mornings, finding small stones and feathers to collect for his daughters, the arrival of new kits in Skyclan

Dislikes - hot days, (especially with his long fur), mosquitos, getting his fur wet after grooming, twolegs

Appearance - Blizzardstar has thick white fur, making him an excellent hunter during leaf-bare. He has huge, round, bright, sky blue eyes and huge paws. his sharp claws are tended to and look sharp and clean. He has one tiny scar near the base of his tail, he often tries his best to hide it though.

Mate - Lilytail
Kits - Glacierclaw, Lotusheart, Snowleap

Name: Mintnose
Clan: Riverclan
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat
Eyes: Mint Green

Fur: White with silver tabby legs, ears and tail

Descr:

So she met a Thunderclan tom named Chestnutfur (btw I made the whole Riverclan) when she was an app and they fall in love and he left the forest for Mintnose so she would't get caught but she still has his a kit but she didn't know abt him because he was only one and after he's born she left Sparklekit to a Twoleg place hoping they will afopt him and yea

Name:ravenkit (called ravenwind when older)
Gender: female/she-kit
Clan:shadowclan
Age:3 moons
Rank:kit (future warrior)

Personality:playful,loud,curios,impulsive,loyal,adventurous,irritable at times

Likes:playing with other kits,exploring,listening to the elders stories,warm weather

Dislikes:having nothing to do, no one paying attention to her, rude cats/kits,the cold weather

Appearance(as an adult and kit): fluffy long haired black,grey and white tabby patched fur with a small dark grey heart shaped splotch on her chest a large fluffy tail a short and sturdy build, claws are a common length,one lilac eye the other a icy blue, light pink inner ears nose and paw pads,sharp fluffy pointed ears

Name: Half-face
Gender: Male
Clan: JungleClan (OC clan, not a real one)
Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: Flowerpaw
Mate: Sunsetstream

Appearance: Large, toirtoishell tom with a strangely coloured face. One side of his face being black, and the other ginger. He has a blue eye on his right and a green one on his left. He has a few scars on his legs and muzzle.

Personality: elegant and snotty. He can talk trash about anyone, but is very sensitive about his own look. He gets aggressive if anyone even mentions his face, and hates his name. He has a soft-side though, and he's kind at heart. He's a great fighter and never gives up hope. Half-face is bold but bitter.

Backstory: Half-kit was born to Hopethorn, a kind queen. He has an average "kit life" but his apprenticeship is when it all began. Half-paw was often teased about his appearance and name. Half-paw never let them bully him for long though, he spat rumors about other cats around, and cats started avoiding him more. Later, he helps fight off ForestClan cats from JungleClan's camp, and earns his warrior name "Half-face". Half-face then earns his long-waited respect from other cats and is treated as a regular warrior. He later develops a huge crush towards Sunsetstream, a pretty tabby she-cat. He also confesses his feelings and is glad Sunsetstream feels the same. Half-face then gets a shy apprentice, Flowerpaw. He lives the rest of his life as a normal warrior with a few friends.

My score: 98% (why do my background characters score more than my main ones eek)

Name: Stormbellow
He/they
Pelt: patchy gray with some noticeable scars
Greenish-yellow eyes
Cunning, vengeful, swift

As a kit, he was very confident and couldnt wait to be a warrior, always wanting to help out. When he reached 6 moons, he became Stormpaw and was very well liked. One day, though, his sister, Minnowpaw wanted to play, resulting in Stormpaw falling off of a large, jagged boulder, resulting in several scars. After he healed, he noticed a shift in how other cats reacted when he was around. Thinking nothing of it, he continued his apprentice duties and eventually was given the warrior name Stormbellow. In the first few moons of being a warrior, he became close with a she-cat named Owlpetal, and developed a crush on her. Certain that she felt the same, he admitted his feelings to her. Owlpetal was stunned at first, then politely rejected him, saying that she was in love with another tom. Angry and saddened by this he hid in the warriors den for days, not talking to anyone. Eventually, his anger grew, and he thought Owlpetal had rejected him because of his scars. So he lured Minnowflash (Minnowpaw) into the forest, where he proceeded to attack and kill her, because she was the reason he had the scars. He returned to camp, and pretended that rogues attacked and killed Minnowflash. Feeling better, he returned to his warrior duties where he found out that Owlpetal was expecting another toms kits. The old anger grew inside him again, and he put deathberries in her food the next day. This time, he was seen by a Clanmate, and exiled, where he got ran over by a monster and still tries to make his old clan miserable from the Dark Forest.

Name: Merrytrot
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 67 Moons (approx. 5.6 years)
Rank: Medicine Cat

Positive Traits: Playful with kits, wise, humble of his rank

Negative Traits: Empathy issues, impatient with older cats, defensive of his blindness

Likes: Gathering herbs, cool weather, rain, snails/frogs

Dislikes: Hot/Humid weather, enclosed spaces, aquatic prey

He is chestnut-colored, but a large portion of his body is white, including his paws, tail, and muzzle. His chestnut markings are tabby striped, and they look almost red from far away. He is very grizzled, and his ears are both shredded. His eyes are cloudy due to his blindness, and the lack of black pupils make his gaze a bit unnerving.

He is quite long-furred, and he has a thick white mane. His tail is also quite bushy, and they are both areas that often get tangled with herbs and twigs.

He often trots confidently, which is why he was given him prefix and suffix, "merry" and "trot".

Scoring: 69%! I'm surprised I did this well.

Her name is FrostGlare and she is a pure white cat with crystal blue eyes, she was a kitty pet until she joined Wind clan. Her mate is DewStar and her kits are GoldenGlare and GorseFur. Her kitty pet name was Frost(named after my real cat). She is graceful, but she is untrusted by her clan mates. And my score was 94 and I feel good about that.

Name: Eclipseshadow
Gender: She-cat
Clan: My OC clan "Wildclan"
Age: 26 moons
Rank: Warrior

Personality: She is shy and sometimes and be a bit harsh on younger cats, but once she opens up she is kindhearted and loyal.

Appearance: She is a black cat with a white splotch over her left eye. She has very pale grey eyes.

Quote: "Life turns endlessly. If we sit and wait for a moment we lose out time we could be working."

name : archeye
pronunciati on : /ärch eye/
past names : archpaw, archkit.
future names : none.
age : 19 moons
gender : tom
sexual orientation : homosexual
rank : deputy
allegiance : palmclan (an oc clan.)

description : leggy sleek black thick furred tom with pale green eyes and six toes on each paw.

Name: DarkMask
Gender: She-Cat

Clan: WC (I took the clan test and got RC but I want WC)

Personality: Stern, strict, loyal, caring, Ambivert

Facts: Mostly every time there are border patrols she leads them. Every time a cat dies(2 happened after her friends and lover died) she tries not to show emotion and formally dips her head and apologizes.

LORE: She grew up happy with lots of siblings in her litter, they decided to sneak out during their app days but got cornered by dogs (Dont ask me the bread they are just big) and 2 of them were killed leaving BlackMask and her brother(last litter mate) NEXT DEATH: It is a snowy night and disease has been going around the camp, it slowly reached the app den and BlackMasks brother got really sick with(Insert disease name). And painfully passed away NEXT DEATH :3, Blah blah blah BlackMask found a lover his name was QuickSand, BlackMask heard the news coming around that their lover betrayed WC, one day they went out and discovered that QuickSand joined the rouges and was given many warnings about crossing territory, sadly they didnt listen and BlackMask had to fight himthey were fighting next to a weakened tree and it fell on QuickSand(more details is that his organs came out his mouth:3) BLACKMASK DEATH: Is not that wild but she just crossed paths with SC passing territory and lost the battle, after she was killed she was thrown off a tiny hill into the bushes were no one found her. (I actually made a tiny book about her but I didnt fell like putting in the names and actual terms)

Name: Mistystorm
Rank: Warrior
Clan: SnowClan

Appearance: Small silver and white tabby she-cat with ice blue eyes, a very fluffy tail and a beautiful face.

Personality: Funny, loyal, strong, courageous and can be a little sassy or harsh, but still has a kind heart.

Story: Her mother, Smokewhisker and her father Tigerstripe raised her with her littermates, Hazelkit and Mothkit. As a kit, Mistykit was annoying but nice and energetic. Her first friends were Vinepaw and Ivypaw, both 5 moons older than her. Vinepaw and Ivypaw became Vinefoot and Ivyclaw, while she was still a 6 moons kit. Vinefoot was her mentor, making her so happy. Mistypaw grew close to Hailpaw, and was so sad when Hailpaw died, killed by a Thunderclan cat. When Mistypaw had her warrior ceremony, she was given the name of Mistystorm, as a reminder that she born in a terrible storm and survived it anyways. Mistystorm and Vinefoot became mates, and Ivyclaw and Wolfwind too. Ivyclaw was exiled for no reason, making Mistystorm following her to bring her back home behind Flamestar's back. Ivyclaw had abandoned her, going back to Snowclan and leaving her alone in the wild to live as a rogue. She started to train in the Dark Forest for revenge and learned that they had planned everything, for her to be exiled and never come back. She died sadly and went in the Dark Forest forever with her real family. Mistystorm took the spirit of an innocent kit, Mistykit. She had every single pawstep and words controlled, and when she became Mistypaw again, she fell in love with Rainpaw, who Flamestar's spoiled and selfish daughter, Berrypaw liked too. One night, Rainpaw told them that he liked Mistypaw, making Berrypaw mad. Berrypaw dragged Mistypaw too the waterfall cave, and threw herself in an abyss filled with ledges. Berrypaw lived because Mistypaw's only brother, Hawkpaw, saved her life for his. When Mistypaw went down to help them, Berrypaw killed her, biting her neck. Flamestar didn't do anything to help her, a

Name: Snakestalker
Gender: she-cat

Appearance: Brown with black legs, jaw and tip of her tail, tan ears and muzzle, and bright green eyes

Personality: Secretive, keeps to herself, but sweet and caring once you get to know her. She can be snappy at times.

Story: ok I hope this sums it up. As a kit her mother was killed in front of her, leaving her in grief. She takes it out on her Sister, Swiftpaw. Their brother Bristlepaw has to stop the fights. Snakepaw becomes a warrior named Snakestalker because on her final assessment she catches an adder (Like Ravenpaw). Her littermates get the names Swiftwind and Bristleclaw. As a warrior, she goes to help a family of rouges hunt and fight. Two parents named Dice and Sparky, and their three kits, Streak, Flutter and Claw. As a TunnelClan patrol comes, including Swiftwind and her apprentice, Echopaw. They think Dice and Sparky kidnapped her and Snakestalker was only taking pity on them because they had kits. They kill Dice, Sparky and Flutter. And the patrol forces her to leave Claw and Streak. (Btw ik Claw has an emo name, he came from a roleplay. Actually so did Snakestalker and Swiftwind XD) so as moons pass, Swiftwind and Snakestalker's fights are now physical. And Snakestalker is in a half-clan relationship with a MarshClan cat named Newttail. When she is expecting half-clan kits, TunnelClan exiles her and MarshClan rejects her, she goes to roam the streets of Twolegplace. (Btw there are two other clans. BrookClan and CavernClan) She runs into two rouges named Fox and Slate, and they bring them to their leader. Their leader is Claw, wow who knew. Oh btw forgot to mention, the medicine cat apprentice, Gorsetuft, received a prophecy from StarClan in the prologue. The snakes fangs will be strong enough to defeat the Claws of Blood. Yeah. Anyways this non-canon BloodClan is called The Tribe of Blood. And she has four kits. One dies and she named him Ginger after her mother. The two she-cats she named Fluffle and Myrtle, and t

69% Well made!
Name: Duskstar
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: Riverclan :)
Age: 58 moons (About 4.8 years)
Rank:Leader

Personality: Confident,Sure of themselves,Compulsive,Loud,Usually does what she's told

Likes: Rain, Shiny pebbles she finds in the shallow parts of the lake,Fish

Dislikes: Small spaces, Lizards, Cold days,Those who don't take her seriously

Appearance: Duskstar is a small,lithe, Blue-grey she-cat with large, round amber and blue eyes, she has strong back legs, and usually has a very clean pelt, She has darker coloured paws, ears, muzzle, and tailstripes. She has a lighter underbelly, and a somewhat small face.

I got 71%! My OC is Lightningsplash, a she-cat in one prophecy! She is a warrior of ThunderClan, and lost a few beloved cats on the way of her life. She is fierce, loyal, and good-natured! Only 75% done with her though, so good results!

Name: Flowersky
Gender: she-cat
Age: dunno (haven't really thought about it)
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Medicine cat

Personality: kind,caring,brave,loyal, respectful (kinda motherly figure)

Likes: flowers, her best friend, helping others,kits/Apprentices

Dislikes: Being wet,dogs,disrespectful/ mean cats,failing,

Appearance: sandy brown fur, green eyes, has a flower at her ear (accessorie),slim,not that fluffy fur,

Score: 82%

Name: Zephyrpaw/dream
Gender: She-cat/Female
Clan: MistClan (OC Clan)
Age: 9 moons
Rank: Apprentice (Will live to be Deputy)

Appearance: Light blue/gray tones with some tan and white marbled rosettes. Long, silky fur. Long tail. Long, slim legs. Slim, Lethe build. One sky blue eye and one light green eye. On the smaller side but not tiny.

Personality: Friendly, kind, bouncy. Has anxiety but does a good job fighting it, although she does get anxiety attacks sometimes. She is very spirited though, and goes to trouble to make sure everyone is happy and doing good in her Clan. She can be a bit stubborn too, and sometimes doesnt know the meaning of no. But when needed, she can step up and take the lead, and is good at it when she gets the chance.

Physical traits: Agile, Lethe, fast, great at climbing trees. She is not, however, very strong, so fighting is not one of her specialties. The prey that is easiest to catch for her are squirrels and birds because she can leap very far and high. She can sometimes snatch squirrels out of their nests if she is having a good hunting and stalking day.

Relationships:
Mom: Pasturebreeze
Dad: Strikestorm
Sister(s): Blossomkit(dead)
Brother(s): Verdantpaw, Cyngetpaw
Best friend: Briopaw(She-cat)

Secret crush: Fangedpaw(Tom)(Hes rude and hot-headed but really hot, and half the apprentices are chasing after him.), Dashingpaw(Tom), Briskpaw(Tom), Flarepaw(She-cat), Verdantpaw(Tom/brother), Quellpaw(She-cat), Briopaw(she-cat).

(There are a lot of apprentices in MistClan)
Mentor: Ashenspring(Tom)
Family info:

Pasturebreeze: Kind, calm, motherly. Light gray with blue/gray rosettes. Green eyes.

Strikestorm: Protective, stubborn, nice. Torbie with amber eyes.

Verdantpaw/Flame: Loyal, brave, strong. Ginger tabby with brown patches. One green eye, one amber eye.

Cyngetpaw/Feather: Gentle, introverted, organized. (Also a gay Medicine Cat Apprentice.) White with tan rosettes. Blue eyes.

Future relationships:
Mate: Dashingthunder (Formerly Dash

Name:Lightningblaze (star)
Gender:tom
Clan: thunderclan
Age:45 moons
Rank history: kit, apprentice, leader, deputy

Personality: tough, stern, loving of those who he gets along with, no mercy in battle (which is a bit of a problem), extremely loyal, has very strong opinions on everything, even when he has nothing to do with it. He is headstrong and will do things without thinking.

He loves mice and voles, not really into other food (so basically very fussy), he loves sleep and hates it when he is woken up for dawn patrol.

Looks like: light grey with white chin, black lines on belly and forehead. Blueish-grey tail and socks. Dark green eyes that if he stares at you it makes your hackles lift in fear and you will faint if you dont have enough will power to stay awake.

Backstory (brief): mother died giving birth to him, father waited until giving him name. Got his name by being struck by lightning as a kit, he technically died but his mother sent him back despite firestars protests. The dark forest rises, he meets a cat named aurburntail, she is from WindClan. They fight at first but then fall in love. They start seeing each other in secret but then lightningblaze said that he couldnt continue so she joins thunderclan. They have kits named risingkit and fallingkit, the leader of the dark forest (named darkforest, basically the dark forest scaled down and in the shape of a cat) arrives and takes over half the lake. Fallingpaw is captured by them and then is convinced to join them. Risingfire and fallingstripe get their warrior names. Lightningblaze becomes deputy, the dark forest attacks thunderclan and kills whitestar. Lightningblaze becomes lightningstar. Fallingstripe slaughters alongside the dark forest when they attack again. Risingfire and Lightningblaze are both distraught at the thought of fallingstripe betraying them.

Thunderclan allies with the other clans and attacks the island (where the dark forest is camping) and fallingstripe kills his previously best frie