Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

I got 15%

I was not expecting that, because I thought my character was a little Mary Sue-ish and she is also the older sister of a cannon character from HxH

In reality I have two differing eyes, so that one question doesn't count. Oh, and also, I got 2% Mary-Sue. Only took a minute until my OC was imperfect.

The OC I used for this quiz is an android who time traveled from a few years from the future. She was defective and ran away. If youwant more info, check out the comic called Akukx-1247/Astoria on ibispaint.com

The character I used for this is name Ble koudoni, (means Blue bell in Greek :D) shes an mlp character, her character isnt all that interesting. So she got a 19% mary sue, time to do another mlp oc!

aye i know this is worded poorly just because i make ocs don't mean i'm a writer so like it might be confusing n messy :D

7% garysue

I used my character Hana Amjad who after being kicked out when he was 17 for not "following god" found his own definition of god and began to believe that he was in fact a messenger of god and that god basically spoke through him to correct the world of their sins and purify the way humans acted and thought. he started a commune when he was about 20 where he would find youth and people around his age in dark places and invite them to a place where he promised family, support and happiness, only for them to preach his crazy ideas and crazy ideals for how people should think and act, when he becomes angry due to people not listening or things not going his way he becomes abusive towards his followers because in his mind he is superior to any other person in the world. he is also in a polyamorous relationship with a man and a woman which is pretty healthy for a man who mentally manipulates everyone around him

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 15% lets gooooooooo

my oc is named Hawthorne! i often refer to him as Gemini subconsciously because he's kinda like... two... people?

he's a happy-go-lucky, sarcastic, robot-obsessed anthropomorphic bobcat in an anthro feline/vulpine/canine world!! he lives in a dirty lower-class suburban neighborhood near a lake with his mums. He used to have a sister? but something convoluted happened on a frozen lake, causing her to "die," and Hawthorne still really hasn't recovered since. (his sister had blonde hair, so he bleaches his hair, but it looks more grey than blonde)

after a while of homeschooling, his mumsies encourage him to go back to school! he reluctantly agrees, but decides to get lost in the nearby forest instead because he's quirky like that

after a while of wandering through the woods, he finds a disassembled android girl (whos totally not miku whos miku hdgjfgekj) lying on the forest floor. he pops off and decides to 'fix' her!! after a while of tinkering with her, she regains consciousness and immediately tries to run away from him. but, she do be a robot doe, so she's not very fast, so hawthorne the scrawny ass b---- can catch up to her!

b----ass android girl (aka minako) tries to explain as well as she could that (she's a ______ for some _________) but she has that weird ass robot voice so hawthornes like "brug" and reboots her!!! she forgets everything about being a ______ but the company is still using her eyes for analysis! some more characters appear along the story, like (delica, mysterious little ghost girl) and (sterling, sports and science enthusiast). i have a whole story and pilot in the works,, so i don't wanna spoil the entire story until i finish my animation courses. but its so cool that i get to share some crap!!!

if you'd like to know how they look, then you can check out my deviantart @appltun!

i got 30% mary sue ovo
so uh basically
its name is ayumi
and uh

the backstory is a bit embarrassing and cringe waa

so uh
[only listing DrAmAtIc parts cuz yes]
-shes some kind of- g l i t c h lmao
-she was "made" in a lab (oh no the cringe)
-she saw her stepparents d i e mUaHaHa
-got put into lab again for like 7 years oof
-e s c a p e s
-finds friend lol
-[time for extreme cringe]
-a h e m

-her "bestie" leaves her and she tries to find her

-oop rip she gets shot by some lab guy from (obviously) the lab

-epic revive cuz she be glitchy
i have nothing more yet

I was using hp to see if he is a Gary stu. Answer not bothered about BUT. In the quiz you said Retarded. Which is an abelist slur. Please remove it. It personally made me uncomfortable as a disabled person that has been called retarded before.

Apologise for the grammar erros in advance, i just dont care

I got 24%

My sweet child, Mikios was a part of an experiment in the bnha universe, basicly he was a mix of nezu and hawks back story. he was borm with a slight mutation that gve him a tail and clawed feet.His parents, being discriminate a--holes, didnt want him, and gave him up the goverment. He was then trained and experimented on when the secondary part of his quirk developed when he was five. he has the abilties to manipuate shadows, and become one. Great. Now he has the doctors cutting him up, and making him fight these other kids. He is kept in check with electric colors and a small cabnit which would later make him claustraphobic and hate anything around his neck. Flash foward he is eleven, the heroes found out about the fcility and he is ou o there. The hero who saved him was calld Rising Hope. She was adopted him, and he now is in theapy and has an older sis named Janey. He can speak because in a ccident he tore his vocal chords, buts fine now, Janey has been teaching him JsL and he is much happier, and is currentlylooking into finding a school.

i got 24% for my oc, lowkey thought it'd be higher :") but uhh anyways heres my oc because everyone is is explaining theirs!!! also, sorry if i did any grammatical errors or punctuation errors, i swear i'm not a cringey 10 year old.

so, my chracters name is mei muzushima and you can probably tell by the name she is japanese. please don't judge me, i'm australian-japanese and i'm not some weeaboo. anyways, she is a bisexual girl just trying to get through life with a massive need to control everything. like, this girl plans out everything in her life and if it doesn't go to plan she has a full on panic attack and a breakdown. she developed this because her and her mother (single parent, babey!!) moved alot and that caused her to crave that little drop of stability and comfort. she has really nice, long, elbow length black hair and has pretty plain black eyes (i think i modelled this after yumeko jabami, i have a crush on that woman please be nice to me). she also uses alot of jokes to hide her pain and even though she went through alot of s---, she is really positive and tries to romanticise her life and tries to think it's all a ghibli movie.

onto her powers !! since i'm a teen, i have to add this, please don't hate me. girl basically has water bending, period. downside is that literally every night she has to plug herself with a iv to hydrate herself because even though she is only controlling water, it still is really taxing on her body and if she uses it too much, girl is f---ed.

she is part of the military because she wanted to make her workaholic mother proud (even if she wanted to become a fashion designer.) and she puts alot of other peoples emotions above her own.

ok, this is getting long. and if you've read through this, thank you and if you are going to reply, please give me any tips. i'm really new to the writing scene and i wanna learn how to write better.

I definitely expected a low number, considering he's just a corporate higher-up with a sick sense of justice, so 17% wasn't too much of a surprise.

So I got 23% for both of my characters. One of them I think is kinda Mary Sue and I'm working on that. So here they are: Mim is an orphan who lives with her aunt and cousin. She's a petite little thing due to her family trying to lie low and stay off the radar, so she never really gets a chance to get super healthy foods. Now onto her story: in a world where witches are brutally murdered, poor little Mim must keep her powers a secret from the government. She entertains herself by writing and never really learns to use her powers (she learns how to heal and create, but that's it. She learns how to create small barriers later but that's about it). Her aunt goes missing one night while looking for medicine for the cousin, whom had fallen ill. Mim is left with no other choice than try to care for the cousin. The cousin kills himself, leaving Mim to fend for herself. She flees with only two possessions; a wand and a Sunflower she found in her aunt's study. She meets a solider from the army called Thalia, whom produces pink fire and absolutely hates everything. They team up when Thalia finds out that Mim is a witch, assuming she's really powerful. Mim's personality is super quiet and she just kinda sits and waits before taking action. The girls meet Prince Vesper, whom has run away due to not wanting to run the kingdom upon his mother's murder. Vesper doesn't like either of them, but Thalia literally kidnaps him because she was one of the royal guards and swore to protect him, meaning that Vesper could just kill her if he wanted to. Well, Vesper eventually starts to warm up, as does Mim, she becomes extremely naive and likeable. Vesper is like an older brother to her and they all become some sort of misfit sibling family. Vesper eventually tells them that he can talk to ghosts and two ghosts in particular, Jazzy and Bronwyn, have been stalking the trio. Bronwyn is very psychotic and just really doesn't like Mim. There's a whole bunch more but I have to get onto the second

I got a 35% mary sue,
I can see why,

my character has so many ethnicity's and species because shes got a super big and royal family,

her past is very, sad,

but the good thing is that for every species I add I'll add even more weaknesses,

i'm currently writing a book series called Wilted Roses and its a fanmade JJBA fanfic,

if you wanna go check it out my wattpad account is Fnafkidfan0522 I have a Bruno Buccirati / Buccelati pfp and a peppa pig JJBA themed pfp to

49%...

I expected higher being the main characters sister and way to overpowered( literally ) and such but wow

AYYY 12%!! I'm shocked ngl tho, but not so bad! She's a sleep doll that will only be awaken if you put seven rings in her left arm, and her whole backstory was thought of-

I got 20% but I'm confused as my character is the protagonist of an RPG; meaning that she's both a canon and an original character. lol

hmmm.. 24% not bad....I think it is 24% because of the overweight questions on the (human,40+,his/her age) My character is human and looks actually....older than her age

Are humans supposed to be Mary Sues bc I tested myself and got 26%.

I used Lin she got 11 I thought it was more because of how she has powers and color changing eyes.....

I did this quiz with my first oc spider spartan got 15% huh

Lol My oc Mabel is 32 percent Mary Sue even though she's suicidal XD

My character is a violet blooded troll, slightly overweight, and has a LOT of flaws