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  • Huh, a 20% not bad... I was honestly expecting a lot more because of how kinda O.P. (not a lot but still enough to be mentioned) my persona is.

    Okie, SO! A little bit of context for how my persona was created (this will be really important in a sec). I can't have dreams that look realistic(e.g. lucid dreams, ones with real place or time settings e.x.) or else I'll have a Nightmare and wake up crying (roughly about 4 times out of ten) because of this I often have dreams that are in the fictional world and look like the art style as well. I have a type of photographic memory that allows my mind to remember things like this, but also alter the image if my mind doesn't like it(why I can dream in an art style). NOW this is the cool part. I can remember most of my dreams and because of this I remember what a character looked like too. I normally play as (or am represented)in said dream as a persona named Omega Bites.

    Omega Bites is what I'd like to call my subconscious self as that's how they were created, by my dreams. They are a 7'0 to 7'6 (when on all fours) feet tall fluffy,gold and Blush-peach Pantherine (Wild cat, typically lion, or other with bird or other animal wings) Other Cat (a jumble of wild cat's so messed up ya don't know what type it is) with white wings, the tips turning to a rainbow like color. They have a freakishly long tail with a silver-gray mechanical claw-like mechanism on the end. The end of their tail can open up to reveal syringes and potion-like bottles. Said syringes can be fired at an impressive speed much like a bullet would. Omega Bites can also shape-shift and is mostly lurking, watching, or engaging with the main character's adventure in my dreams, since I typically don't like to make my dreams all about myself. Omega has a small,brown, pouch-like infinity bag wrapped around their neck. They often apply to cartoon logic when dealing with world physics or types of magic. Speaking of which! Omega's magic is pretty weird, although it's most

    Omega Bites
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  • 27% Mary Sue.

    My OC is called Thomas, a 17 years old bounty hunter in One Piece universe, without any Devil Fruit ability to speak of, just haki (hardening and observation) and good ol' style brawling. Almost died from being stabbed by a band of thieves and thrown to the river, but was saved by Tashigi.

    Thomas leads a band of bounty hunters that operate East Blue. While Thomas and his crews hunt pirates as a job, Thomas himself has a personal vendetta against thieves who

    "ravaged" and killed his mother, and generally made his life miserable. Thomas' crews clashed with Nami once but they let her go in exchange Nami returned all the money she stole from Thomas.

    Why do Thomas' crews stay in East Blue instead of hunting bigger fish in Grand Line? Simple. They don't have good enough ship to survive Grand Line's unfriendly climate, and East Blue is the easiest bounty hunting job.

    I said that Tashigi saved Thomas' life, but there won't be OC/Tashigi. I have plans to pair him up with my another OC. Personally, I don't like pairing an OC with a canon character.

    Pretty bland OC, I think. But I will try to be better.

    redbird1892
    0
  • --12%---
    name: H-37s

    Species: Idk she has demon horns a plugin tail

    age: unknown but looks 14
    hair: black
    skin color: black

    shirt: a white shirt with a strap that leads to cuff with japense writing that means: too cute

    demon horn: neon green (left), hot pink (right)

    tail: rainbow

    sock color: neon green (right) hot pink (left)

    shoes: neon blue and yellow
    eye color: neon blue
    ----------
    sexuality: Asexual
    romantic attraction: panromantic
    favorite music artist: girl in red

    lore: long story short she was created by my inventor oc

    Cherricola
    1
  • I got 18%. Honestly, pretty satisfied with that. It helped me flesh out my character a bit, which is great because she's based off the Cuphaed game. This also made me realize a lot of my old characters are Mary Sues .... gonna have to fix that some day

    Caspy
    1
  • In the bad situation question she gets out of it through realizing her friends would alwats be there to help her. So it's not like she was alone. But she thought she was alone and the monster feed off if that to overpower her. And that monster was a god in this universe sooooooo.

    AspenTeaWitch
    1
  • 23% yeah i get it.

    My character is from an au sorta thing, her name is Kaniya and shes a demon in a world of demons yada yada, shes based off this fairytale and in the fairytale the protagonist was cursed for being selfish(same with kaniya but i guess the witch demon who cursed her made it into a power) kaniya got purple eyes and purple hair like most other demons in her world, shes kinda average and probably would be considered a side character if it werent for her powers. Kaniya isnt royal and her social circle and everything else is average but i guess the powers/ cursed thing kinda makes her into a sorta mary sue?

    qyunibb
    1
    • she also doesnt have a tragic backstory and her selfishness wasnt extreme, the witch demon just got kinda bored and yk cursed her or whatever. Kaniya is also about 15

      qyunibb
      1
  • My OC got 26%. His name is Jackal and he is (kind of) a deity of the country he lives in. He is a fusion creature, and his component people are two of the 5 deities of the country. He ends up staying at a camp with other kids, and ends up with blood on his hands, as he murders the mentors of the camp. I'm not sure if I'd call him original (despite OC meaning original character) but I wanted to make a character with traits that I don't normally write about.

    Karmasdoor
    1
  • I got %23 for a character I for a book I just started writing.

    The characters name is Copper, she is a half fox (which is normal since everyone is a fox) and shes pretty average, she comes from a tribe out in the woods and was coming to raid an herbivore village (the characters in the story are separated by 3 classes, herbivore, carnivore, and omnivore, Copper was once an omnivore but hopes to become an omnivore) and she had to wrestle one of those villagers who pushed her into the river, resulting in her hitting her head/eye on a rock so she had to wear an eyepatch. Once she woke up from the accident, she meets a new friend and yeah! Thats it for now on her backstory

    ToeTacos
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  • My character's name is Alice(Phoenix) she has orange eyes and fire powers and the other characters have powers and eyes that match that power. Her best friend(Frostbite) has a crush on her she does not have interest(He is friend-zoned) One team member betrays them takes control of Phoenix and kills Frostbite because he was trying to KILL a villain and Frostbite caught him in the act. And Phoenix goes into depression you can see this on my youtube channel (Ariel Wier) she got 14%

    Ariel Wier
    1
  • 19 percent, not bad! I'm looking into adding more flaws to my character eventually, but I absolutely adore her so it's hard. ;w;

    My character's name is Mochi, she's short and honestly isn't that intimidating but can kill a character if she gets a good chance. She's witty and doesn't think about the consequences of her actions, even if it could possibly hurt her. She gets into lots of fights due to this. She often loses due to not having a strategy or just clawing at them until they die :D (She's a cat person/neko) She's very edgy and introverted, though very loving when you get to know her. Anyone she loves she automatically claims as her own and gets a bit jealous when they hang out with someone else. She has brown hair with a blue highlight/strip in her hair, and blue eyes. I often rotate between different stories and personalities for her, but this is the most recent one.

    Ashpatch
    0
  • I got 19%. I can see why, I havent worked on her for that long. So Im just gonna put her description below and you can tell me how I can improve.

    This character is named Kath and shes my version of a siren. Shes a young adult, around 20-23 and she works for the villain in my story. She would often be sent on missions to capture targets for interrogation. She has been working for the villain for a long time and she never thought about whether or not she was happy with doing so. She just did what he said and never gave a second thought. The protagonist ends up saying something that causes Kath to become conflicted. She wonders if working for the villain was what she really wanted and she ends up doing a sloppy job with her missions. She helps the protagonist in the end.

    She has light, blue skin and long, red hair. Shes a little on the skinny side but its because sirens are born slim enough to swim through water at top speed. She likes to make mischief but she lacks self-awareness and is unable to read the room and realise when shes going too far.

    Because shes a siren, her voice has power over other people. It cant control anyone, its more like this: you know how when a song comes on that you really like and you just want to sit there and listen to it and not do anything else? Her singing is like that. She uses it as a distraction when shes out on missions but she needs to give her voice frequent breaks because it puts a lot of strain on the vocal cords.

    AngryAmber
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  • I got 22% with Tsukiya, my Dangangronpa oc. TBH his past isn't to bad. Grew up with his Mother who taught him herbs and witchcraft (specificity Wiccan). He was excepted into Hopes Peak Academy as the Ultimate Witch. I am still working on his time at hopes peak before the killing game as that is part of a role play. He got hit on by one dude (he is aro and ace). He made a friend, Daichi, who stayed his main friend. At night in the dorms he stayed up late studing herbs and magick (yes that is spelled correctly) until dawn. We have yet to start the killing game but he is a survivor (mainly because Daichi is killed so I want to play as someone for the rest of the roleplay).

    Any way to improve him is greatly appreciated

    Ash_Animate
    1
  • I have 40% which makes sense because my character is kinda has mental issues and had a tragic past and stuff and their name is Ash and is a skeleton in undertale and is sans and papyrus sibling UwU I been having her for 2 years.

    Milkcookies
    1
  • About the question about my character having some sort of disability that causes her to act differently... yes and no.

    You see, the story that Im trying to tell is of a young girl who linked with a ghost of sorts. The Ghosts goals are to wipe the girl clean and make her into a blank slate, so the ghost can take her physical form to go and find her dad. The story is about the girls memory slowly dwindlingto the point where the girl can barely even remember her own name, and refers to herself as Dwith the occasional bit where the ghost can take control of her body for a certain amount of time is shes not co-operating.

    So, technically, yes, my character has an alter of sorts, but not in a disability way. Theres also the question of her reforming the villain. Again with the yes and no answer.

    The girl, D, does try to convince the ghost, G, to stop taking away her memories. Serveral times, actually. And while G has considered, she ultimately decided that her dad was more important. (The reason why she loves her dad so much is such a rabbit hole that I could go on and on about). [Spoilers for the ending] G does eventually succeed at finally gaining a physical form via D, but she does ultimately regret it in the end. So Im not quite sure if that counts.

    LoverOfStuff
    0
  • Im 11%.

    I was expecting higher.. but thats pretty good lol.

    Then it said
    Go ahead and make her a little prettier.
    E x c u s e m e-

    My fUrRY/Oc is named Nico. Shes a female and a tiqer

    Shes a bit big. Because of her fluff. She wheres a hoodie and thats it. She has Green eyes and brown fur. With some white tips. And white paws. I aint explain more cuz I hate explaining.

    SleepyTiqer
    1
  • Did my character, Lenora, and got 13%.

    Id say when looking at her, some people may think shes a Mary Sue, but shes just one of those girly pretty girls, lol. In no cases would I say shes a hero in my story because she got attitude .

    Y0Ni222
    1
  • Got 22%!!

    Ngl, I think it's just because the quiz didn't ask very specific questions relating to her character.

    For example, she can transform into a dragon, is a villain cult leader herself, and Is the leader of a war army

    Anaya Argonian
    1
  • 15% wow! My oc us born in a cult and during infancy he was mishandled thus he's a cripple, he's frail but talented (he's an insider) and his talents are used by the higher ups in my story so they can lie their way for more power.

    amarevicina
    1
  • Your character is 21% a Mary Sue!

    I used an OC named Sachiko, she's a vengeful spirit of a high school girl.

    She was severely bullied and ended up dying in her bathroom, now there's a rumour about her that says if you write someone's name in the bathroom three times she'll kill them.

    One of her eyes is bloodshot, as a blood vessel popped when she was dying.

    underqualified
    1
  • Everyone else is doing this so :o

    I used a guy named Arsene (15% btw) he's a pretty mean guy, and mocks everyone that he comes across. friends, family, it doesn't matter to him. due to his country (one that i made, ryx) he has tattoos over his body that tells people how many people he has fought (and won). also worthy to note: he has a face tattoo, which means he has killed someone before (it was by accident, overcome with anger)

    he's friends with a prince, and a girl who has one of the most powerful magic in the world (my girlfriend and i made it up). he. he just has the ability to make good decisions.

    because of his country, he's not rich and is hungry most of the time. he makes sure his friends have food before him though. they don't let him cook, he sucks at it.

    he has helped a villain, but those villains are stupid so yknow. like one is an insomniac, an angry brother, and a guy who gardens. (girlfriend made the first two and the powerful magic girl)

    the prince (i made him? is interesting too, i'll talk about him if y'all want me to :)

    erosphobia
    1
  • I got 15% yay! Well I worked on this oc for more that an year so it would be pretty dissapointing if I would've got more hehe. I mean she is 14 and sometimes smart, most of the times not when needed, and when she is out with people she tends to try way too hard to look cool and it comes off as annoying or even cringy. Oh and her name is Saorsa and she is romanian. Tell me ur opinion about her! <3

    Simon3668
    1
  • 23% - not to bad for a character (& story) who was made up on the spot that was very much inspired by a song (It's My Bad - Nico Collins on SoundCloud go check it out, its amazing) so it isnt really original material but I feel like Im going to have fun with this character/story!

    He doesnt have a name yet - but he is a teenager and goes by he/him pronouns and is panromantic/pansexual (demiromantic). In the story, he gets cheated on by his girlfriend with his best friend for the millionth time. To put it shortly, he has a mental breakdown, and in said mental breakdown, he murders them both.

    For the majority of the story, he is on the run from the police but not before he drags two of his closest friends (names not decided) for the ride. Not sure to end off the story, kind of just a spur of a idea.

    josieleexx
    0
  • 14%, yeah my character's a jerk.

    His name is Clink, he is a D&D plane-hopper who travels the multiverse, but before that he was a pirate on the eborron seas. He was transported to barovea were he met some friends. He was pushed off a cliff and killed, but a kraken god socrathel plucked his sole and transported to socrathels playground (A re-skin of ghosts of saltmarsh) where he sailed the seas for a couple years in till some people said they would grant one wish. he wished he could finish strahd off so he was given plane-hopping powers. he arrived in strahds throne room just in time to watch his friends die. but they weakened strahd enough for Clink to kill him. He became dark lord of barovea, but he got bored. So he went to travel the multiverse.

    ClinkMan
    1
    • Oh also he is one of infinite Alternate Multiverses, some examples are...

      Vecna!Clink
      LV. 20!Clink
      Darklord!Clink
      Mockingbird!Clink
      Warforged!Clink
      Aftermath!Clink
      9 Hells!Clink
      Imaginary!Clink
      Many, many more...

      ClinkMan
      1
  • 17%

    my character is sorta like a god n stuff so i'm surprised i got below 20 lol.

    he's like the person who controls everything, and by everything i mean storylines n stuff lol. they're each represented by locks and are usually open which means it's a good sign and everything is going according to plan.

    but then there's a girl who "respawns" every time she dies, like a glitch in the story, which would make the lock of the story close. but she gave this "power" to one of her friends when she started getting tired of it. (she got rid of it, then died in a car crash lol.) her friend, connor, found out another glitch with it, and was able to travel to different storylines, and in many different eras or years i guess? (this all takes place in my own made-up country called sinan lol.) every time connor traveled to a different storyline, it shut the lock of the storyline, which were sorta hard to open back up. when a lock is shut, strange "not normal" things would happen, like paranormal stuff but without ghosts, and if it's not open soon, then it could get progressively worse. in a storyline about 5 years later, this guy from japan finds out about it from an anonymous forum connor posted on, and wants to broadcast it across sinan on one of the biggest radio stations across the country, but it's mostly an atheist/ agnostic country, so..

    and to think i came up with all of this from a deltarune theory i heard lol.

    dukslsjdmlalsknd
    1
  • I did this quiz before but this time I did it with an old Undertale OC, Temikka. I made her in 2016 when I was 8-9. basically, take it a temmie, make it a furry. make her hair cover one of her bright pink eyes and put a completely natural bright pink streak in her hair. maker her wear the colors blue and purple only, and f--- it make Asriel fall in love with her. make her weapons similar to Sans and make Chara her GREATEST ENEMY. Surprisingly she only got 35% Mary Sue. I would explain more of her backstory but I dont feel like typing a lot rn.

    OhDidlyDoveShado
    1

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