How does this sound?

Thread Topic: How does this sound?

NekoTorix Novice

13 years ago

I want to cut deeper,
but I can barely take the pain.
It makes me so sick,
it throbs into my brain.
But I must get out all this sadness inside,
and I must hope that maybe I'll just die.
Count the scars, one by one,
connect the dots.
Glide the blade into my skin,
close my eyes in shock.
Welcome to my personal hell,
please don't get lost.
Nuna Experienced

13 years ago

Its good rhymes alot but its good
anri hyuga Junior

13 years ago

Wow you write better thn I do Ms. Tori.*smiles*
NekoTorix Novice

13 years ago

Nuna: Thanks.
Izzy: Awhh, really?
Nuna Experienced

13 years ago

Its got good tone. I likes it
anri hyuga Junior

13 years ago

yes really kid you could beat me anyday hm.does the good guy pose*
NekoTorix Novice

13 years ago

Nuna: Thank you again.
Izzy: Really? xD
Teresa22 Senior

13 years ago

It's kind of creepy, but writing wise okay.
NekoTorix Novice

13 years ago

Anna: I am creepy, so.. xD And thanks, I guess.
anri hyuga Junior

13 years ago

yes really.*ruffles Tori's hair laughing*would i ever lie to you kid?
Selena112 Hot Shot

13 years ago

:c
awesome89 Novice

13 years ago

Hey tori. Its nice.
NekoTorix Novice

13 years ago

Izzy: If you were secretly going to steal my waffles, you would. xD
Emily: No sad face.
Tony: Hey.. and thanks.
Selena112 Hot Shot

13 years ago

No sad poem.
anri hyuga Junior

13 years ago

I dont steal peoples waffles. Im not that bad of a criminal.jkjk Im not a criminal.

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