Looking at offbeat today makes me realize something.
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Thread Topic: Looking at offbeat today makes me realize something.
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Mac: Did you like the picture of me? I look more like Daddy.
I can send it to you normally, if you want. -
Sean: You look different than expected.
Okay, thanks. I sent for request to access it or something, but I don't know what that does. -
Mac: Huh. What'd you expect me to look like?
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Sean: I'd expect pale, dark red hair, unique eyes. Like red or gold.
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Mac: Nope. Daddy's the devil, and he has red skin. But Mommy's pale human skin made mine paler than his. Her blonde hair did, too.
Done. -
Sean: oh fun. . .
Thank you so much. -
Mac: Mommy's dead though. :(
You should remind Alana, or maybe ask another writer of GTQ. -
Sean: D: *hugs*
Okay. And I made a lot of typos because of my iPad, it misses some keys. And I put the intro to the story and where the love interest comes in. You didn't understand parts because there wasn't those two in between chapters.
"I thought, finishing what had just happened in my head" meant she had just thought of what happened and played the situation through her head again. -
Mac: *is hugged*
Oh, okay. And that makes sense. -
Sean: *releases and pokes*
Yerp. :P hey! You could be my editor! :D seeing as you known proper grammar and I don't. -
*know
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Mac: ._.
I suppose, although I know you know proper grammar.
Sorry, lotion time. -
Sean: .-.
M'kay.
Okay. -
Mac: Hey, I found a lake.
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Sean: FOR WHAT, DROWNING ME?!
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