Three Things You Are
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Thread Topic: Three Things You Are
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This is a story about a girl and boy,
Who had a train ride long conversation,
She secretly loved him and always thought,
That he was one of god's best creations,
One cloudy morning when the rain falls down,
She sits by her bedroom window, missing him,
She hadn't seen him that day and felt bad,
She said, "Life feels so glum and dim,"
She knew he was upset and very sad,
For he had so many problems right then,
She decided to talk to him the next time they met,
But she wasn't sure where or when,
She smiled when he saw him and acted like an angel,
She'd do anything for him and he knew,
She wanted to help him, and she'd try her very best,
To help him survive and get through.
He smiles and says, "I missed you yesterday,"
She feels guilty, and looks down, so very shy,
Her cheeks go red and she forgets what to say,
And he stands there wondering why,
She takes a deep breath and looks up, she says,
"Today I'm going to tell you something new,
Today I'm going to tell you how I feel,
Even though you know I love you!"
He smiles but he's confused, isn't sure what to say,
"Um... alright, what do you want to say my dear?"
She says, "I'll be looking back on this January day,
And neither will I forget this year,"
He blushes, "Oh, what's so special today?
If anything it's so very gloomy!
And yet, you seem so cheerful,
What are you hiding, girl? Tell me!"
She stares in to his brown eyes for a moment,
Then takes off her Jade and silver bracelet,
She laughed at how red he was,
He looked like such a tiny piglet!
She put the Jade bracelet in his hand,
For that had always been his name,
She said, "I love you," are three words,
That get boring, cause they're always the same!"
He says, "What are you talking about?
I can't seem to follow you right now,
Why are you acting so wierd today,
What will you say then, and how?"
She smiles, grabs his hand and says,
"See the Blue bird on that tree?
With the cyan feathers and ebony eyes?
That blue bird is just for me,
See the flower bushes and tomato gardens?
And all the stars in the dark night sky?
Ever wondered how God created that,
Or just simply wondered why?
See the way this Jade bracelet shines,
And glints a faint green glow?
Did you ever think that there would come a day,
When that lovely shine would go?
Cause you're my blue bird,
And you're my star,
You're my Jade,
Shining from afar,"
He says, "What...?
I don't get what you say,
What are you talking about?
Why are you like this today?"
She says, "What am I talking about?
Why, I'm talking about you!"
He blushes with realization and says,
"I love you too,"
And although there were days when they would not meet,
The girl always looked forward to seeing him,
And her flowers would always be prettier when he was there,
For her heart was something he'd always win. -
Wow...
That was true caligraphy and poetry in motion.
Do you plan to become a writer? -
Thank you very much! I hope Jade likes it, I miss him cause I didn't see him today.
And um, Idk, I wanted to be a doctor but I'm kinda unsure. You think I should? -
@ Music Amazing writing I’m speechless
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Thanks very much! I appreciate that. :)
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Have you read my story is long but a great one
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No I haven't. Which one is it? I'll read it before I leave, then. :)
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Amazing... :,D
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Thank you Angel! And I read you story, Pretender, it took me some time, but I read it, it was great!
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that was a very nice poem roe
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Your welcome, Roe.
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aw thats sweet roe he will love it
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Aw,that was f---ing amazing Roe!
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Thanks a lot Shady, Sm and Jade! I'm glad you liked it!
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very good ILM. I liked it.
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