A new Snow White...

So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)

So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)!!

Created by: singin234

  1. "Please, please" A girl's voice screams, it doesn't last long because it turns into cries and sobs. A key rattles in a lock, shaking around in a hurry. Then something soft hits the ground, but has a sound like a body. The girl. The cell door creeks to a close, the keys start to rattle again and the sobs are louder then beside. Then footsteps, walking away, dissapering into the distance. I open my eyes, forcing the tears back, I creep over to the cell beside me. "Hello" I ask, my voice comes out weaker then it was ment to. The sobs comes quite, "hello" a little voice cries back. I clench my dress tight, resting one of my lands on the metal that holds us in the cadge. It's cold, like everything in this place. I find my bed cold at night, I can't seem to find warmth anywhere. I don't think it can be found. "What happened, why are you here" I ask in sorrow, once your in this cage of cold darkness, you can't get out. Or at lest alive. "The queen, she took me for no reason" The girl wimpers, she stands up and looks at me. She already looks terriable, her blond her is thin. It looks torn, pulled out of her head. Thin purple lips, shivering as she talks. Big blue eyes, the would look pretty but they look dull in the darkness. With black rings around them. Her dress is ripped and torn, she looks terrified. I want to reach out to her, but I am scared that she will scream
  2. "The queen," I mumble to myself. The queen is my step mother; I can't bring myself to hate her. I just hope she is doing this, being like this out of something terrible not out of nothing. My father was the king, a good one. They told me, everyone looked up to him and he had a beautiful wife. She used to wander the garden in the kingdom; red roses bloomed in the white snow. No one knew why, it was impossible for plants to grow in the freezing snow. They say it was magic and maybe it was. The light of the kingdom made red roses bloom in winter, well only one rose. My father saw her that day, a sad look on her face, watching as the red rose's swayed in the winter air. The rest was happy, until she died. Of illness, people told me it was because she spends so much time out in the snow. I don't believe that, but I am forced to believe. Then my father had to re-marry. It was forced on him by his adviser, the lady was beautiful. You shouldn't judge someone by their looks, my mother told me once. My father after his broken heart fell in love with her at first sight. For a month, they used side by side until my father died in his sleep. She rules alone and locked me away, telling the people that I am ill and its dangerous to be around me."It's alright, I'll get you out" I whisper to her, leaning on the iron. She nods, rubbing her arms for warmth. Over time, I got used to the cold in this cage. Not seeing the sun, but I catch a glimpse of it from a little window. It has no glass and has three poles to keep me in. "Tell me about the world outside" I tell the girl, she looks puzzled. Trying to place what I was said in her mind, I know what's going to happen to her. The queen will drain her, of the young face. Making her look old, the queen stealing the "˜young-ness' out of her, then she will die slowly.
  3. "My father is a man in the army; he sides with the queen out of fear. Well he did once," She bit her lip that is shaking and turning dark purple. She closes her eyes; I think she is trying not to cry. "He disobeyed her, not killing someone she asked him too. He stuffed death, a slow and painful one. She made us hear everyone of his screams, it was terrible," She drew in a huge breath, her hands shaking as well as her legs. "My mother passed away when I was young, I didn't know her. But my older brother took care of me, until the queen killed him and now me" She burst into tears, I meant about happy times. But those times are over, now just darkness. "When its summer, the birds sit on the window. Singing cheerful, the tweet together, turning their heads as they sing" I tell her smiling, she smiles weakly back. Then loud footsteps come our way, I hurry back to the bed. Pretending to be asleep, the girl sits back on the ground hugging her knees crying. She isn't pretending, no matter how much she would like to be.
  4. A man with white hair walks up to the cell, not mine but the girl's. He isn't old, but young and unattractive. He has a huge frown on his face, I see him watching me sometimes. It scares me, makes me wonder if I am next to go. He hurls the girl out of the cell, twisting her arm painfully. She screams, thrashing around, and then they point a knife at her. I close my eyes, they are not going to kill her but I don't want to see the look on her face. "Please" She cries, as they walk away. Dragging her, "please" she screams so loud that I can hear from the other end of the room. It echoes off the dark stone and iron walls, I stop myself from crying and stand up. I walk over to the min-window; I hang my arms out between the bars. Then something sharp hits me, I jerk my arms back in surprise. A nail? I pull whatever it is out of the wall; it is a long nail and sharp. I can hear a faint scream, they are back already. I jump into bed, without the covers on I huge the nail under the pillow. Keeping my hand on it.
  5. I hear the girl getting chucked into the cell, she cries louder. Then my door opens, I flash open my eyes. My heart beats faster in fear, I almost clutch it but all I can do is stare, the man comes in, "hello my dear" he says normally. He sits down beside me, still frowning. I sit up, hiding the nail. "What is in your hand" He asks looking at the hand that the nail is in. I lung at him, dragging the nail down his face, just missing his right eye barely. I jump up and lock the door behind me, running to the girl. She looks like an old lady, "go, please" she whispers. Beside me the man is thrashing in the cell, I run. I can hear the guards coming down to the cellars. I find a back door, its wooden and old, also locked. I kick it, since it's old; it flies off its hinges. I run out not wasting time, I know this breath could be my last. I fly around corners of the city; no one takes notice of me but the guards on my trail. I feel pain running up my side, I am not fit. I have been locked up with hardly any food, not being allowed to go outside. I guess I am sick now, but not when I was put in.
  6. I fly around another corner, running to a barn. The horses are missing; they are already looking for me. A bell rings, three times and everyone runs to hide. Then a servant came in, he works for the queen. He saw me, I try to run out the door but he catches me. Knocking the nail out of my hand, he drags me away. "Where are we going" I ask him noticing that we weren't going to the castle. "We are going to the forest, so I can kill you" he whispers in my ear. The world turns fuzzy, patches of my come in my vision. Then it turns all back.
  7. So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)
  8. So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)
  9. So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)
  10. So this is A new Snow White... Its like my made up verson of snow white. Its for fun so if anyone takes it the wrong way, sorry. Its like two verson of Snow White mixed togther. I know its short and I dont think I'll make another. I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it :)

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