~A Freak Among Freaks~p1 | Comments

It'd be awesome if there was a goth person in the series XD or just adrenaline junkies (I'd help with the descriptions) those always make a story fun, not sure what to expect yet, but I have nothing bad to say about the story, it's definantly a good set up and kinda different than what I'm used to, can't wait to see what happens!

Girl you did goooooooooooood. Could another love interest be: Curly brown hair, brown eyes, preppy, thick rimmed classes. I find that cute!

That was... ok I woulda used the F word there to exaggerate my point but I won't haha so let's just say it was CRAZY AWESOME lolz bet you thought I was gonna say it sucked =P Well it didn't! Great job =D

I LOVED It, I think you should put another guy in here. I like moonblades suggestion just instead of preppy i think it should be shy and sweet.

Awesome!

Amazing.