The killer ( part 2 ) | Comments
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I love it and all but, i think you should make it longer. Like, REALLY longer. And try to put more details in it. All that really happen was her sister opened the door, she was suprised that it was her BF, He gave her a weird look, and excused himself. I'm just trying to help you with it. and if you don't get was i mean by more detail, check my series out(Mostly part 4). And don't get me wrong, i love it. I'm just giving you some tips.