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Name: Neon
Status: Loner
-uses they/them pronouns
- 18 moons

(Was a kitty pet but the kitty pet house burnt down)

- cowardly cat, likes telling jokes and completely black fur with some burns and 2 brightly colored paw warmers

Eyes: Orange

Name:Curlyfur
Clan:Thunderclan
Gender:she-cat
22moon
Medicine cat

Nice cat, she has light brown fur whit orange spots.

Eyes:left:green right:blue

Dead:accidentally shot by a hunter while looking for herbs😢

Name: Rowanstrike
Age: 26 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan

Appear ance: Rowanstrike is a brown furred spotted tabby. He has a lean, almost feminine build, and is often mistaken for a she-cat. His fur is short-medium length and is somewhat curly. His eyes are a bluish violet color, the right of which has a light tan spot around it. A large scar horizontally spans across his muzzle. His ears are large and a darker shade of brown. His hind paws fade to the same shade of dark brown. His spots and long, skinny tail are the same color as well. His front legs are covered with stripes instead of spots.

Negative Personality traits: Snarky, vengeful, skeptical/untrustin g, prideful, unforgiving, stubborn, short-tempered

Neu tral traits: Competitive, outspoken, mischievous

Positi ve traits: Ambitious, witty/clever, motivated, independent, introspective, honest, astute, curious, protective, trustworthy

Final score: 96%

Name: Pale'tooth (He/him)
Clan: Shadowclan
Age: 37 moons
Rank: Deputy

Personality: They may come off as intimidating as they are quite a large cat, imperturbable, cynical and stern, will not stand for injustice and is calculative

Likes: likes to observe others, watch the night sky

Dislikes: Brash and rude cats, impulsive behavior. Dishonesty, Disloyal cats and Rogues. He finds Kittypets to be useless beings with no survival skills but may give chance if Given a good reason.

Looks: A fully white cat(albino), with a thick bushy mane and tail, very large in appearance, large paws. Their coat is not very well maintained and may often give the impression that he is wild and messy. He has Grumpy eyes. They have a very low voice and striking eyes.

Name: Red-Stripe
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 41 moons
Rank: Senior Warrior
Clan:WindClan

Personality: Distrusting (from past trauma) Skittish Determined.

Likes: Going on Patrols, Assisting classmates

Dislikes: TwoLegs, Streets, anything implying TwoLags are around

Appearance: A somewhat larger cat with dusty grey fur and amber eyes. A red stripe of permanent hair dye on her back. She doesn't have notable scars, apart from one on the top of her head.

She was taken as an apprentice from a more distant clan, but was abused by her Two Legs and escaped to WindClan. She is generally cautious of others and doesn't have a lot of friends.

I got a 69%, lol

My OC is well made
Lavender'Wing
She-Cat/WindClan apprentice/8 moons

Appearance: Lavender'Wing has a lilac pelt with a slightly deeper shade of marble rosettes. With a rare eye mutations, making her eyes a shade of purple.

Health Issues: Limp in both hind legs

Personality: Charismatic/Positive/Eager to please/Dishonest/Submissive/Self-conscious

Likes: Exploring the moor/Causal chats/Windy days/Green-Leaf

Dislikes: Going to the medicine den/Rain/Failing

Shorten lore: Lavender'Wing was the only kit out of a litter of 5 to not be a still birth. But was instead given the imperfection where a bone in both her hind legs weren't put in their proper places. And wasn't able to walk until she was 5 moons. Though with both her parents being rouges, they only stayed with her when she was unable to walk. Once she was able to all, her parents picked her up and dropped her off in a bush on WindClan territory. Lavender'Wing waited for a few nights for her parents return, but was saddened when she realized they were never coming back. It was only her cries of sorrow that lead the WindClan warriors to her. Though since that day, she has been accepted into the clan. And was given her proper prefix and suffix. Lavender'Wing is very grateful to StarClan for how her life has turned around. Though she might not fully understand it just yet.

(Just for context: This takes place in it's own universe entirely, separate from main story and merely uses the concepts and environments from the books)

Name: Corpse'Blossom (Edgy name, I know, but it was given to him as a joke/nickname by the rogue group that he ran with to mock warriors names)

Gender: Tom/Male

Clan: Previously in a Rogue group called "Wastrels" but took advantage of Shadow Clan as they were low on cats.

Age: 58 moons (Approx. 5 yrs)

Rank: Previously Unaffiliated but bullied his way to Leader when the clan was low on cats.

Personality: Tyrannical, Oppressive, Good sense of humour, Abrasive, Sneaky, Confident, Brave, Loyal (After being driven out of Shadow Clan)

Likes: Getting his own way, Being in control, Birds, Peaceful walks, Fighting for his way (verbally)

Dislikes: Being told he's wrong, Being told what to do, Being alone.

Appearance: He is a scrawny, ratty tom with darkish-grey with dark tabby stripes and white highlights. He has sharp orange eyes and a toothy smirk.

His pelt is often well groomed but can become unruly fast in times of stress or anger. He has long, slightly pointy ears (his left ear having a small tear in it due to play fighting as a kit).

I haven't made a Warriors OC in a good few years so a score of 67% was to be expected heh. However, Corpse is only one of my OC's and I am inspired to go back and improve him. Thank you for the feedback, have a good day :3

DrizzleOfTheStorms - (Drizzle`Step for short)

Previously apart of Tribe Of Rushing Water, later joined RiverClan.

Personality Traits: Tranquil, polite, patient & protective.

Short Lore Description: When he lived with TORW, he, his brother, & his mentor set off on a hunting mission, when a landslide from a recent storm caused the earth to collapse on the cliff-side, Resulting in the death of his former mentor & brother. Lost & alone, Drizzle assumed if he were to return, they would cast him out, therefore he traveled for a few moons, discovering the clans. He joined the clans as a permanent Den-Dad, & would raise kits & help queens there until his death. (Drowned saving a kit from a rouge's claws)

Name: Ambersight
Clan: ThunderClan (former kittypet)
Gender: She-cat

Backstory: Her father was a Clan cat, but she grew up with her kittypet mother and kittypet sister. When her mother died of heart failure, she couldn't bear to live in the same house as her fallen mother. She set out to find her father, despite being blind. She finally found ThunderClan, but they told her that her father had died in a battle. She was heartbroken, but she joined ThunderClan, as soon, she became a well respected medicine cat. She met her sister at the border and they decided to have fun together for the last time, despite Ambersight being a medicine cat. They didn't get caught and they had fun. She ended up never breaking the code ever again, and had a good life over all.

Corvidstone is a black, medium furred cat with grey spots and green eyes.

Taken into Riverclan as a stray kit, Corvidkit wasnt very popular among the clans. They were quite the opposite, actually, with very few actually liking them. The few that they got along with was the queen that raised them, a couple other kits that shared the nursery with them, the leader, and of course the medicine cats.

Growing up, other cats often outcasted them, making them feel unwanted. They spent their free time as an apprentice/warrior out in the forest, practicing battle moves, hunting, and occasionally helping the Riverclan medicine cat look for and gather herbs.

The first prophecy was received by the medicine cat. It worried them, as they werent quite sure what it meant. In the end, the prophecy drove Corvidstone out of the clan, much to the leader and medicine cats dismay. Their adoptive mother and past playmates had begun to grieve. Their adoptive mother had actually taken off from her warrior duties temporarily, as she was finding it difficult to cope with.

The second prophecy was received by Corvidstone while they were on exile. They hesitantly headed back to clan territory, realizing that their old clans camp was being attacked by an enemy clan. They rush in, yowling out orders from a rocky ledge and leaping in to help fight when needed. In the end, their adoptive mother dies due to battle wounds, the leader has 3 lives left, and the deputy has been retired to the elders den due to permanent injuries. A couple nights pass, and the leader decides to make a final decision. Corvidstone is now made deputy, later on dying in a large battle against the other four clans.

Name: Raccoonshade
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: An OC Clan named "BrightClan"
Age: 19 Moons
Rank: (Young) Warrior

Personality: Mischievous, clumsy, reckless, stubborn, sneaky, untrustworthy

Likes: Starry nights, messing with people

Dislikes: Being told what to do, boring situations

Appearance: Raccoonshade is a small, lithe tom that has gray fur with black raccoon-like markings. He gets his name from his raccoon-like appearance. He has distinctive orange eyes with a singular white streak on his face.

His pelt is slick and smooth with short fur. He has almost no scars visible. He has short legs and a very slender build.

Backstory: Raccoonshade's mother was named Duskstep. She didn't want anything to do with him and often mistreated him. She was very neglectful towards him. The closest thing he had to a mother was an elder in his clan named Moonshine. She took care of him when his mother wouldn't and told him stories to keep him entertained. His father was named Spiderstar and he was unaware that he was born for a long time. He has an older brother whom he is very close to. His name is Stoneriddle. He was actually mentored in secret by him. They would meet up when their clans fell asleep, as they are in different clans.

93%! Yes!

Name: Dogsnap
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Age: 48 moons (about 4 years old)
Rank: Warrior (nearly deputy)

Appearance: A sleek and somewhat fluffy light brown tabby she-cat, with a black sock on her right paw, and hazel brown eyes. Her tail is puffed up and out like a Somali cat, and she has black ear tufts to show it. She has a petite mouth on the outside, but when she opens it, it looks double it's original size.

Personality: Dogsnap is known for her sass, even for her age she's a bit lively too. Blunt, and confident, although she might hesitate and discourage it if it's too outrageous for even her.

Likes: Chamomile petals and the strong smell of them. She also likes to nibble on her claws, which is a bad habit, and makes her pristine self look broken by her eroded-looking claws.

Dislikes: She dislikes having to do duties, or being waken up by another cat. Sleeping in is her thing. Or someone sassing her back or being able to. But, that rarely happens :)

My score is 71%, not the best but good.

Name: Goldenorchid
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: My OG clan called "InkClan"
Age: 53 moons
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: Overprotective, Sweet, Loving, Gullible, Judgmental, Forgiving, Trustworthy.

Appearance: GoldenOrchid is a short, cream and cinnamon colored she-cat with large, shing brown eyes. To make herself look better, she often puts and orchid near her ear, hence her prefix "orchid". She got this habit sense she was a apprentice when her clanmates mocked her for her large scar from a racoon attack, calling her "weak" and other rude names, so she put on an orchid to look better. Her pelt is clean and smooth, she has short hair, where you can see her scar pretty clearly. Her pelt was "golden" to her mother, hence the "golden", though when she became older the color faded a little.

Her Prophecy: Although she wasn't in her prophecy, she did deliver one. "The stars will cascade and the feather of the quail shall smother all threatens the hay." was her prophecy, at first no one knew what this meant. "The feather of the quail" was indeed a cat, Birchfeather, and the "hay" was another cat, Deernose.

(Family)
Mother: Rabbitwhisker
Father: Pebblejaw
Sisters: Maplestorm, Ivyheart
Brother: Dawnsky.
Rating: 95% I'll take that :3

REDO SORRY!))
I did my OC Viverridcall!

Viverridcall of BatClan // She-cat // Med. Cat Apprentice // Diluted orange and brown tabby with yellow eyes and short fur.

// Is part of the group that deals with the Herb Fox area, so she's learned a bit of fox tongue. She is fairly liked by the Herb Foxes, and is welcome into their herb grounds as often as she likes. She teaches a few of them cat tongue in exchange for their hospitality and kindness.// Her mother was a part of a recent prophecy. She has yet to return. HeavyWing (a color pointed She-cat warrior) took on a parental role for her. Her father is a rouge. He visits from time to time. He was given permission by the clan leader (Racoonstar), as he knows how difficult it can be for a cat to grow up without their family.

(The Herb Foxes are foxes that hang around a mushroom patch near the southeast BatClan border. They... Eat the fungi to seek a... High. They've come to respect the ways of the clan cats- thus see no reason to attack or threaten them for no reason.)

Name: Flintclaw

Clan: It's in WCUE so whichever one is most populated, honestly.

Gender: Tom

Backstory: He was a very annoying kit always getting into mischief. However, over time he matured. Kind of

He's still a little goofy here and there. He had a mate. She was also a warrior, ge doesn't break the code...anymore... like I said, he was mischievous at a kit. He was great at hunting at a pretty young age, not the best fighter, though. His mentor died (aka gtg bolad) twice. He was very adventurous and somehow always leader- in almost every server... He loved having fun with his Clanmates. As a kit, he would always go off on his own. When he gained his apprenticeship, he somehow had an apprentice friend in every server... They would become warriors together. That's all there really is to it...

Cardinalcall is a red, brown and pale beige/white she-cat. She is mischievous and clever but holds grudges very easily. She had a decent childhood, growing up in a tight-knit family. Her father's name is Redtooth and her mother is Leafspark. She has an older sister named Mousethorn. Her mentor and grandfather was Owlbark, who she killed after watching him kill a young apprentice from another Clan. For this she was exiled, and met her now mates Marinette, a rogue, and Burntfoot, a fellow exiled warrior with extreme burn scars.

Name: Parrotvalley
Gender: She-cat
Age: 26 m
Rank: Warrior
Clan: MandevillaClan
Appearance:

A Bengal she-cat with vibrant pelt patterns and green eyes. She has a half-face-colored appearance with a sleek body build.

She does not have any mates whatsoever.
Parents:

(Mother) Sharp'owl - A dusky brown siamese she-cat with green eyes and a half-colored face. (Genetics ofc)

(Father) Robinheart - A Bengal tom with pale pelt patters.

Traits:
Negative: Good liar, manipulative
Positive: Observant, Self-control
Neutral: Complex, Stylish

add-ons - ADHD, trauma, likes dark humor. Raised a duckling, bipolar, sensing the atmosphere's mood.

my oc i quite strange
Ashtuft

he was clanborn, but as a warrior he ran away from his born clan, Smokeclan, and became a loner in unclaimed lands. Ashtuft lived in an old, partially torn cabin worth of twolegs. Because of where he lived, though, with the horrible weather and constant danger, no twoleg wanted to live in a place like that. In the cabin, there was once twolegs so there was a fireplace, a fabric chair, and Microfiber carpet that he enjoyed clawing at. he also often when outside to catch prey, and he lived alone. to any cat that might see through the window or come in, Ashtuft's eyes will look supernatural and intimidate any cat that sees him. He is often mistaken for a dark forest cat. once he died, he still stayed in the cabin and any cat that looked or came inside would still see his piercing gaze in the cabin warning them to leave.

Name: Cream'Sun
Gender: Female/She-Cat
Clan: WindClan
Age: 34 Moons (approx 2.8 years)
Rank: Deputy

Appearance: She is a cream colored She-Cat with yellow swirls on her back. She has pale cream paws and a big space of pale cream from her belly to her muzzle. She has dark tan stripes on her legs and dark tan rings on her long bushy tail. Her ears are dark tan and her eye color is Amber Gold. She usually wears a pretty pink flower on her head.

Negative Personality traits: Lazy, Bored at a LOT of stuff, Braggy sometimes.

Positive Personality traits: Good fighter, Peaceful most of the time, honest, brave

Final Score: 94% Sweet!

OC Part 2 LMAO
Name: Dream'Pool
Rating: 88%
Age: 17 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Clan: RiverClan
Prophecies: 0
Fell off of a waterfall

Positive Traits: empathetic, energetic, hopeful

Negative traits: cautious (kinda neutral NGL), daydreamer, short-tempered

Likes: sparrows, training (as an apprentice) friends, all clans, peace

Dislikes: hawks, sleeping, waiting, bad cats, rogues, StarClan non-believers, violence

Appearance: grey-blue fur, green eyes, and a bushy long tail. Short fur.

Backstory: when Dream'Pool was only Dream'Kit, she never knew who her biological parents were. So, she grew up with her adopted parents, Spruce'Wing and Wind'Whisker. She had a great life. When she became an apprentice, she was mentored by the leader herself, Fog'Star. She grew up to be one of the greatest warriors. However, during her apprenticeship, she lost her mentor and fell down a waterfall! A kind cat saved her, and her name was Sparrow'Leaf. She got scared, but she survived. Not even a mom later, Sparrow'Leaf killed herself by leading off that same waterfall. She mourned, and vowed that everything Dream did would be for Sparrow.