My other short story thing failed at parts so I'm writing
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Thread Topic: My other short story thing failed at parts so I'm writing
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NiallsBiggestFan NoviceIt was the scariest thing ever. They didnt know I was awake. They didnt know I could feel every move they made. They didnt know that everything they did sent pains everywhere through me. I was in surgery. The doctors gave me pills to make me fall asleep and go numb, but they didn't work. I tried to tell them I was awake. I screamed in my head but the words wouldn't come out! My mouth wouldn't move, and it felt like I was trapped within myself and no one knew. As they made the first incision to my stomach, I winced, but only in my head, where nobody saw the twitch. I watched them as they dug deeper into my stomach. My insides started crawling out of the sides in my stomach. I felt like throwing up. Next the doctor put a small needle in me. The needle maneuvered around and luckily didnt accidently poke me. The intensity of the operstion was making my brain out. Then, the doctor said I wouldn't make it. My eyes tried to widen and I tried to cry, but I just couldn't.
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Later that day they welcomed me to the afterworld. They explained that during the procedure I was midway between being alive and being dead. -
NiallsBiggestFan Novice*making my brain hurt not out
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