I have a story idea

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Thread Topic: I have a story idea

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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Sneak Peak:
  I run down the hall with my best friend Jaxon,I've known him forever. I feel the air rushing pastme when we come to a stop. I examine the door for anything suspcious, its fine.
  I open the door everything seems fine. Until I see Dianne hanging from the fan. I collapse on the floor, Jaxon comes to hold me. I had already lost everything, and now, a friend. I pull myself together and stand up.
  "You know who did this Kelly, don't you" he asks
  "Yes, the man who started this whole game, the game master"
  "I guess he's forced us to play" he replies
  "Oh Jaxon, we've been playing it since day one" I say
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  IcyDesignns Novice

  13 years ago
  i LOVED iT . One Problem , You Cant Use Jaxon . You KNOW That iS What iM Using For My Story , i Hate Copy Cats . How About Joshua ?
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  Horseluver Advanced

  13 years ago
  I like it, just be real carful with grammar and spelling if you plan on writing and publishing.
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  zomgirl Junior

  13 years ago
  it sound like SAW and Incarceron together. I love that! The idea of it so far is very eye catching and a want to read!
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Sweet ok what name?
  oh it's a mastermind thing
  http:/
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Anything?
  plot :
  Kelly is almost an outsider.she is a loner. She has known her best friend forever. And is sweet. Except for the few friends she tries to be quiet. When her bravery is tested, she and her friend (guy) go into an abandoned mansion for a night. But they get trapped and must fight their way to survive the murderous game. One wrong step and one more death of someone they know. Will they survive?
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Hello anything?
  Ok I will stupid typos
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Ideas
  James
  Logan
  David
  Greyson
  Blake
  Liam
  Nick
  Harry
  Fred
  Brandon
  Kendall
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  Sage Parson Novice

  13 years ago
  The first paragraph starts with "I" too much.
  
  Otherwise, nice job!! I like the idea!! :)
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Yea I thought so
  Whaat can the guys name be?
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  Sage Parson Novice

  13 years ago
  Jackson! :)
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  I can't icy usin it
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  Sage Parson Novice

  13 years ago
  Oh. How about Joseph!
  Or Mason.
  Or Matt.
  Or Sam.
  Or Mac.
  Or Max.
  Or Eric.
  Or Steve.
  Or Clint.
  Or Roger.
  Or Cameron.
  Or Peter.
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  tori109 Novice

  13 years ago
  Did you see mine?
  I like yours
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  IcyDesignns Novice

  13 years ago
  How About Chase ?

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