Read this for me, please.
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Thread Topic: Read this for me, please.
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If you can, rate it on a scale of 1-10, 1 being awful as f--- and 10 being amazing and critique if you have anything more to say about it. (On here of course x3) -
oh and tell me if it made you feel bad for Shadow or just like "haha mother f---er"
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That was actually pretty good. I'm gonna give it an 8.
I felt kinda sorry for Shadow, you know? I want him to have some companions. Or be a companion. I don't want him to be alone in that darkness. -
I give it a nine. I cried a bit, poor Shadow. D:
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uwu Thank you. I was trying really hard to make it better than the first draft I did.
yeah well he sure has a companion now that's dying on him but you known companion
ty. lel he doesn't deserve a good life he's a piece of sh... IT HAHAHA IT HE'S AN IT -
Awe no he's not.
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