I could really use a critique
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Thread Topic: I could really use a critique
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I just wrote a rough draft in the library for the first part of a horror story I want to write. It would mean a lot to me if you guys would read over it and tell me what you think.
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^-^ I'll read it now and then tell you what I think when I'm finished
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What did you think? It's been 25 minutes.
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It's good to me...
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Reading now...
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I posted.....
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I'm kinda confused with [EXPUNGED] at the moment.
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Apparently it means deleted....
I'd never heard of it but Carri told me that it meant that :)
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