SONG WRITING CONTEST!!
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Thread Topic: SONG WRITING CONTEST!!
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I wanna hear your songs!!
I just required:
Name:
Age:
Song Genre: (Rock,Pop,etc...)
Song Title:
If you want a theme, I'll give you one BUT YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE IT!!
Theme: Dance -
Song?
Song as in lyrics, or can you attempt to use music? xD -
anri hyuga Newbieum .... ill try but i have to write it sage.
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So, essentially, you're asking for a set of lyrics that can truly 'wow' you.
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Name: Sarah
Age: 13
song Genre: Pop
Song title: Broken Hearts(ripped out Hearts)
Oh baby baby,
Don't hide because of lies
You know that I'm broken inside,
You were my only baby,
Then you went and ripped mah heart!
You went and stole someones else's heart!
You knew that I was your baby, but then
You changed and ripped out mah heart!
There's a hole in this broken heart.
You were my only baby! You were my guy,
Then you decided to go and steal someones heart,
Then you go and start ripping out peoples heart.
Baby, you know that I love you so.
I thought you were the only one for me,
But I guess I was wrong.
Why did you have to be that headstrong?
Now I have to find and forget my only regrets.
Oh baby, you know that I love you still.
But you broke my heart. And now I start to
Rip out your heart. -
dw1996 NewbieName: Dylan
Age: 15
Genre: Rock
Song title: Dance When You're Dead
I'm gonna dance when you're dead cuz
There's nothing more cruel than the life you led
I won't waste anytime on feeling sorry for you
There's nothing you can say that will make me forgive you
Oh, you broke my heart in two
But that wasn't good enough for you
You had to betray my love
My love was never enough
Oh, and now the dirt is choking you, baby
You're buried and suffocating
I didn't put you here
But I won't shed a tear -
Nice songs! :)
@Carri Lyrics. As in...lyrics. xD -
Name: Maddie
Age: 13
Genre: Broadway (if that qualifies for a genre)
Song Title: When I Was A Child
(Jane's Mom)
Girls of your age should show more sense
Honestly, today they are all so dense
They used to be practical
Smart, witty and tactical
I don't know what happened to that!
When I was a child
Kids got straight A's
They were politer
And always knew their place!
When I was a child
Why, everybody knows
Children were smarter
And didn't just sit and pick their nose!
(Jane)
I used to harbor silly dreams in my "empty" head
The sort that I'd wish about as I laid in bed
I wanted to fly away
Soar through stars that to this day
Still sit a-waiting for me!
When I was a child
I wanted to fly free
Go to outer space
And have it just be me
When I was a child
I spread my wings to fly
I flapped until my breath was gone
And every day I still try!
(Jane's Mom)
Now dreams will get you nowhere in this cold dark place
No one with sense harbors those things amoung our race
People don't have wings
Do not fly, you hopeless thing!
I don't know what happened to you.
When I was a child
Kids got straight A's
They were politer
And always knew their place!
When I was a child
Why, everybody knows
Children were smarter
And didn't just sit and pick their nose!
(Jane)
See, this is why I want to leave this place behind
You just don't believe that I have a great mind
I just don't want to use
My brain to blow a fuse
In some poor bloke's empty head
When I was a child
I wanted to fly free
Go to outer space
And have it just be me
When I was a child
I spread my wings to fly
I flapped until my breath was gone
And every day I still try!
(Jane's Mom)
Now listen close, listen well
Listen to me as I tell
You need to think, use your brain
Do the math, or is it a strain?
(Jane)
Dreams are empty, dreams are cold
Without a warm hand to hold
Earth is dark, we need trust
We need a Doctor to heal us!
(Jane's Mom) When I was a child
(Jane) Please hear me out!
(Jane's Mom)Kids got straight A's
(Jane) I don't need A's!
(Jane's Mom)They were politer
And always knew their place!
(Jane) I know my place!
(Jane's Mom) When I was a child
(Jane) I'm still a child!
(Jane's Mom) Does anybody know?
(Jane) Nobody knows!
(Jane's Mom) Listen to your mummy!
(Jane) I'm listening, dear mummy!
(Jane's Mom) Things were so different!
(Jane) Things aren't so different!
(Both) When I was a child!
PS- I wrote this for a musical I'm writing so the characters and story won't make too much sense. -
Animallover207 NewbieAge:12
Title:eagles and mustangs
Genre:country
As we're sitting Lookin at the stars
I say Were way to far u need to be free cuz
Your lik an eagle u need room 2 fly
High up in that beautiful blue sky
Its for the best cuz
I'm lik a mustang so wild and free
Kicking and running babe. It's nothin u did or me we just need to be free
I think you'll agree
Somethings just get to far from help
Cuz we got to close
Now were way to far
And we have to manny scars
U and I need our freedom
Like eagles and mustangs do-oo
Imagine an eagle locked up in a cage
Never havin the chance to fly away
And do all the things it waited to do
To do to do
Imagine a mustang in a stable
Getting its spirit ripped out
It would never be the same no doubt
Cuz mustangs r wild and free
You know eagles r together for life
So u need to find another eagle
And baby that's not meee
Your lik an eagle u need room 2 fly
High up in that beautiful blue sky
Its for the best cuz
I'm lik a mustang so wild and free
Kicking and running babe. It's nothin u did or me we just need to be free
I think you'll agree
Cuz ur an eagle and I'm a mustaanang -
I picked the winner. And the winner is...
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Bookworm!! :) Congrats!!
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:) yaaay! shift key is broken or this would look more enthusiastic!
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