Should I turn this into an actual story?
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Thread Topic: Should I turn this into an actual story?
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He ran to her as she fell to her knees, "It's just a flesh wound." She told him.
flesh wound... the words echoed in her mind
"It's just a flesh wound, don't worry about it."
"But sister, you're hurt badly..."
"But nothing, there's nothing to debate. I'm just glad you're okay."
Tears escaped as she watched her older sister bleed as she held her small body in her arms. The last time she ever saw her, alive.
(the only reason it's all basically HE and SHE is because i don't have any names thought up)
The actual scene I saw in my head kind of made me cry, the first girl won a fight she fought for her friend and fell to her knees, then he (the friend, who is trained medically) ran to her
she repeated the same sentence her older sister told her, but she died shortly after.
her older sister died protecting her, and refused treatment because she knew she wasn't going to make it.
err trust me it sounded/looked a lot better in my head
i know i know it's an overused concept but i like it, don't judge me >.> -
Doooooo itttt
Make the storyyyyyy.
I will reeeaaaddd ittt.:D -
im a failureee of a writerrr
i only know how to illustrate properly xD
ill turn this into a manga if i write it >.>' -
yea you should try an make it into a story. it's only a flesh wound. have u ever seen Monty python and the holy Grail? hah..
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make it a story its to good not to be a story
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okay then
im gonna try and draw this scene first though. -
Dark Dancer NewbieIt sounds really cool
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whoa lol I likes way you used the flesh wound thing like it waws in her head
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Wow...
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well i think you should write it too, sometimes words paint a better picture. it's awesome
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