Children of the moon (part 2) | Comments

Ok, how about you type your story in Microsoft Word or Open Office so it can do an automatic spell check. I use Open Office a lot. And then you can copy and paste the questions and answers. I like the story! Keep it up.

This was confusing and rushed. You might not of ben rushing but the story was. I didn't get half of it. Maybe its because I wa half alseep. Also a little more detail, I don't think you had a lot. If you did, sorry I am half asleep!! Well really tired.

Sorry for getting to this kinda late. I don't know if it was on the new quizzes list.... But, it was still pretty good. Try to work on your spelling and a little on your grammar, and I bet it'll be even better :).

I just think you could do better!!! Its.just you could work on those thing's. Look sorry if everything I am saying ia wrong. I rea It awhile ago and all I can remeber is That's it wa kind of rushed. I am soooooooooooooooooo ooooooo tried!!