An Adventure. 4 Girls ONLY. | Comments

Hey uh a little comment here you should describe everything a bit More so that the reader understands what is going on at thatspecifice time.

You're pretty good but you should've added in descriptions of the boys.Don't worry,you'll get better.

as they said its bit bad for your first try im sure that you will get a whole lot better and you need to tell who the boys are and what they look like but anyway hurry with part 2

hey, the creator of this quiz....... ya, i think u should add A LOT more. there wasn't a lot of things on here about the boys or anything. u did good tho, for ur first time. keep it up.

u should try adding more 2 the story insead of random questions but other than that it was ok

hey this one is actually good gonna be waiting for part 2!

I liked your quiz, 10 stars. I'm about to do part two.

you should have added more of the story and what do you have against blonds with long hair and blue eyes?? lol jk

This a good quiz .

thanks. here, the second part is here,
gotoquiz.com/an_a dventure_part_2

Awesomeness :D

thats a very great start to your first one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't worry. you'll get better along the way! just keep it up! =)