Somehow I'm Alive (part 14) | Comments

Aww you mentioned me! Thank you :) This is really really good, I can't wait for the next part! To be honest I don't think it would ever be too predictable, because you think your characters out really well and your events too, not like just randomly deciding on the spur of the moment to have loads of unnecessary action. (Which is kind of what I did when I was making quizzes :P ) I just hope that tracking device isn't still in the truck... :/

Amazing! Can't wait for part 15! And you're an amazing writer. If you need any help I'm usually on the forums on GTQ. And if you want my email you can ask. Again, great story!

Duh his mom didn't move his truck. She bugged it remember???? She's probably tracking us RIGHT NOW O.O please tell me she bugged a different car :( Ryan+jaslina=ADORAB LE!!!!

Wow is all I can say. Words can't describe how great this story is. I have no idea what will happen next, but I really want to find out! PART 15!!!!!!! :))