The Jig is Up
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Thread Topic: The Jig is Up
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Disclaimer:
Okay imma try to write up the plot in a bit, if not maybe tomorrow. But I want to have atleast decent soapers that are able to be descriptive and clear. You don't have to type in a s--- lot but at least do what I said above. Oh and decent grammar too please. Idc about caps an s--- but please form sentences that make sense.
Now for the terribly explained plot.
Gang time! I love gang and government related plots.
The owner of a notorious gang, Clinton Sr, has been jailed. The man is father to the now leader and co leader of the gang. Clinton was arrested who's children were young and suppose to be executed many years after for his terrible crimes. They're motives are to rescue the true leader(their father). The reason why they haven't gotten him out yet is because the weak was gang at a last attempt a couple years to do it, many were either shot or imprisoned themselves. It's a very protected jail. But anyway, your character is apart of this gang. You do a few missions and train before attempting to free the true leader.
Template:
Name:
Age:(16 and up)
Gender:
Personality:
Appearance:
Position:
Clothes:
Weapon:
Strong points:(what they're best at)
Weak points: (what they suck at)
Backstory:(if any)
Additional info:
(Last of all, these are mostly ordinary people so no special powers like being able to possess fire or something and they have to be human. And do NOT make them over powered.)
Location: Future; Compton -
Idc about caps
PERFECT! LET US BEGIN!
NAME: MELODY CLINTON
AGE: 21
GENDER: FEMALE
PERSONALITY: MELODY COULD BE DESCRIBED AS AN ALOOF, UPPER CLASS GIRL. THE KIND OF GIRL YOU WOULD SEE PLAYING THE PIANO INTO THE OPEN AIR ON THE BALCONY OF A PURE WHITE MANSION. UNFORTUNATELY, IN HER CURRENT POSITION, SHE'S MUCH MORE LIKELY TO BE CALLED A b---- AND BE DONE WITH. CONDESCENDING, SPOILED AND LOUD, BUT BALANCED WITH AN IMPECCABLE SENSE OF MANNERS AND AN ALMOST SCARY ABILITY TO TALK HER WAY OUT OF ANYTHING.
APPEARANCE: MELODY'S MOST STRIKING FEATURE IS HER LONG BROWN HAIR, RUNNING DOWN TO WAIST BEHIND HER HEAD. HER SKIN IS SLIGHTLY PALE, AND HER BODY IS SLIM, BUT SHE OTHERWISE CARRIES A TONE OF AUTHORITY IN HER ACTIONS.
POSITION: EYE CANDY.
CLOTHES (really should be included in appearance, but okay,) GREY IS THE COLOUR OF CHOICE FOR MELODY. A SIMPLE GREY UNDERSHIRT, FOLLOWED BY A GREY BLOUSE AND TIED UP WITH A GREY TIE. HER GREY DRESS ALSO REACHES DOWN TO HER ANKLES, AND A PAIR OF PERFECTLY SHINED BLACK SHOES POKE OUT THE BOTTOM.
WEAPON: WHEN SHE ANTICIPATES DANGER, MELODY IS SURE TO BRING ALONG A COMPACT, SAWED OFF SHOTGUN NICKNAMED 'OCTAVE.' IN ANY OTHER SITUATION, SHE IS ESSENTIALLY HELPLESS.
STRONG POINTS:
DIPLOMACY!
PERSUASION!
FLIRTING!
LOOKING DAMN SEXY!
AND A TALENT WITH THE CELLO!
WEAK POINTS:
FIGHTING.
SHOOTING.
PANICKING.
RUNNING.
BACKSTORY: MELODY NEVER WOULD FORGET THE DAY THAT EVERYTHING CHANGED. IN THE BLINK OF AN EYE, SHE'D GONE FROM BEING THE DAUGHTER TO THE 'MAN EVERYONE SHOULD KNOW' TO A SCARED REFUGEE OF THE BIGGEST GANG IN TOWN. EVERYTHING SHE OWNED, SHE LOST; THE EVENT WAS ENOUGH TO THROW HER INTO DEPRESSION.
BUT NEVER ONE TO LET FAILURE HOLD HER BACK, MELODY PRESSED FORWARD. WHEN HER FATHER WAS CONVICTED, MELODY WAS PERFORMING AT THE BEST VILLAS IN THE CITY, TAKING ON A NEW IDENTITY. WHEN THE GANG ATTACKED THE JAIL, MELODY ALREADY HAD SEVERAL HIGH CLASS OFFICIALS UNDER HER THUMB, NONE AWARE OF WHO SHE WAS. WHEN THE GANG WAS NEAR TORN APART, MELODY WAS FINALLY COMING CLOSE TO PIECING HER OLD LIFE BACK TOGETHER, UNDER THE PSEUDONYM 'ARIA PHILOHARMONICA.'
AND THEN THE BLOW CAME. A LETTER IN THE MAIL. FROM THE CURRENT LEADER OF HER FATHERS GANG. JOIN THEM AND HELP RELEASE HER FATHER, OR THEY'D SHATTER HER CHARADE AND REVEAL HER FOR WHO SHE WAS. SHE HAD NO CHOICE. SHE COULDN'T LOSE IT ALL AGAIN, NOT AFTER ALL HER WORK. WITH A HEAVY HEART, MELODY SENT THE LETTER BACK; CONTENT TO DO WHATEVER SHE HAD TO IN ORDER TO SECURE HER LIFE.
STRAIGHT OUTTA COMPTON! -
Er, my characters are the offspring of the ex leader.
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My apologies than. Your plot was very unclear on the specifics, so I assumed we'd be allowed to choose. Below I have amended my bio to more accurately portray these limitations.
Name: Aria Philoharmonica
Backstory: The road to fame and fortune is a difficult one, and many people break off and fall before ever reaching that peak. For Melody String though, failing was never even an option. From a young age, Melody followed a simple mantra: if you want something, you dig your claws in and never let go; regardless of what you need to do. Armed with nothing but natural good looks and her skills with a cello; Melody set out to make herself known and famous.
This never work out as planned though, financial ruin and lack of opportunity conspired to keep Melody down, until a single pin prick of hope appeared. The mob. The gang. The yakuza, whatever you want to call them. Through them, Melody rose through the ranks; but fell deeper and deeper into the pit of crime and debauchery. Until finally, she reached the peak.
And then it came crashing down. Her contacts disappeared as the gang disbanded; her debts ran out of control; a list of crimes as long as her arm traced back to her through police stations. With no choice left, Melody vanished. Everything she owned went into storage, and the woman known as Melody ceased to exist.
In her place was Aria Philoharmonica, upcoming cellist and new girl on the streets. She'd reached fame once, and she could do it again. But now, she was going to do it right. Mostly.
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