Lets try this again...
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OMG it didn't post:( here it is: I paced back and forth tring my best to fish out of the crowded busy city.I felt myself going crazy and I quickly slide by a building bumping into someone.
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Rithe felt a little push against her, and whirled around to apologize for being in the way.... again. She dipped her head and gave a little bow.
"I'm very sorry.." she murmured. -
I looked down at my feet,avoiding eye contact. "Uh...it's alright.I'm the one who bumped into you." I quickly glanced up but then back trying to find a way to go past her without being rude.Avoiding eye contact is a way...
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Rithe could see that the person was trying to get past her.. She pushed herself against the wall again, gesturing forward.
"Go ahead... Sorry to be in the way.." she muttered, not really sure how standing completely out of the way of human traffic was being in the ay, but not wanting to be rude. -
(I'm good with guy characters so I'm a guy.Is that ok with you?^) I felt my eyes glow red and I tried my best not to show.I feet felt glued,not budging for a move.One mistake with this person can ruin everything,espeacially when I don't know the person.
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Fine by me. First tip. Try to keep notes outside of the soap separate from the parts meant to be in it.
Rithe stared at him awkwardly, at first because he wasn't moving, and then because of the red glow of his eyes. She considered poking him, but it seemed like a bad idea.
"You alright..?" -
(oh I know but my phone doesn't do big spaces like in a computer and I can't be on it.Forgot to mention that.Sorry.) I couldn't help it.I ran off hoping I wasn't being followed,especially now.I hid behind a dumpster observing the place.I wasn't sure if the coast was clear...
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Ah. Tis no harm.
Rithe watched him run off, and wondered vaguely whether she should go after him. He didn't seem well... Of course, she had her own business to take care of..
She stared after him, sighed, and followed. her brothers would have to wait. -
I held my hands out. Something's wrong.I rake my brown wavy short hair and slide down feeling my eyes blaze with fire...the suddenly I sense someone.
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Rithe found him again, hiding behind a dumpster. It reaked horribly on her sensitive nose, but she walked closer and bent down next to him.
"Hey, you feeling okay?" -
I jumped up alarmed.My eyes grew bolder and fuzzy.I felt my hands take in heat and my throat grew sore. "Wh-what do you want?"I stuttered backing away and hiding my hands.
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Rithe blinked.
"I wanted to make sure you were okay. No need to be so rude." she said with a tired sigh, and got up. She turned and started to walk away, fully irritated by the impolite nature of his words. -
I felt my cheeks grow warm.The guilt stung me hard and I ran after her.I grab her wrist and pulled her back over where we were not seen. "Hey listen....I didn't mean it that way." I suddenly realized that my hands were burning hot as I grip on to her.
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Rithe allowed herself to be pulled back, and glared at his hand.
"It's fine." she muttered, wanting nothing more than to leave now. -
I drop my hand down feeling my hands cool down and my eyes turning into their regular chocolate brown. "Sorry."I muttered glancing at how red I left her hand. "Um...whats your name?"I asked nevously hoping she wasn't mad or scared.
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