The rewrite included more detail and more complex and varied sentence structure . I think its better!
Ive honestly been drawing more than Ive been writing lately, so honestly sometimes I -feel- like I should be drawing instead when I sit down to write. Ive tried a few exercises like rewriting a scene in different styles as best as I can (something really metaphorical and complex, something more staccato and action-packed, writing on descriptors primarily, writing on dialogue primarily, etc.). Writing like drawing is a lot of practice and edits too x.x
Ah I love worldbuilding and character backstory x)
I feel like I should do Instagram. I keep hearing lots of artists are switching there. Is that true?
My younger sister is actually a way better artist than me and shes on Instagram. Shes actually super into Kpop and has been doing a lot of traditional portraits of super cute kpop boys lately I wish she actually uploaded them so I could brag better xD