I really need to start writing.
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Thread Topic: I really need to start writing.
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Meg- besides being lazy, what's up?
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This is the story of my life. My name is Layla. My last name is... I can't really remember. I'm on the run from the Devil. He destroyed my life, made me a demon like so many others. I ran... er... flied from Hell when I heard that the Devils son wanted me for him slave. I found others like me. We're all different than mortals. We're stronger, faster and we can do strange things. Even among other demons we're different.
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These are the first two paragraphs of chapter 1.
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@Ashley the sky. But I'm sitting on my bed. Wbu?
@Bianca um, right here when you said, "I ran... er... flied from Hell when I heard that the Devils son wanted me for him slave. I found others like me. We're all different than mortals. We're stronger, faster and we can do strange things." it should be "the Devil's son" and "We're stronger, faster, and we can do strange things". But that sounds really good. -
We have wings. We can fly higher and faster than anything in the world, which is good since we're on the run. I remember the morning it started.
*flashback*
I woke up to my alarm clock beeping. I hate mondays. I turned off the alarm and went to the closet. I picked out my black school uniform. I took a shower, did my hair and put on my uniform. Just like any other day here at Forest Richmont School For The Gifted. I grabbed my bag and went outside. 'Thats odd' I thought looking around. -
Meg- just talking to people on here. and sitting on an uncomfortable office chair.
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K. Thanks Meg. And the Devils was a typo. I wrote it as the Devil's son on my notepad.
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@Bianca it's good. Just remember that you if you were to say "I like to run, jump, and swim", make sure there is a comma before the "and".
"Ashley does it spin? -
@Bianca yep.
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K.
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Meg- Yes :)
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Should I type a bit more?
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@Bianca yeppers.
@Ashley awesome :P. -
@Bianca no, it's okay.
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Meg- I know right!
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