A Song By: Me ;-;
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Thread Topic: A Song By: Me ;-;
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I sat down
In my own tears
Settled down and waited
For me to drown
I waiting for you
but you never came
I fell down
I stayed there
Until I died
And don't you know?
You could have saved me
But you just stood there
Laughing
Never mind
I'm already gone.
far away for this place
So very far away
You stood there
As the puddle grew into
something that couldn't stop.
I know your not listening to the words I'm saying
Cause you know there wrong
But couldn't you even just try,
Just a little?
I'm already gone
Far away from you
Drowning I my tears
I'm brave enough
To do that!
I'm far away
far away from you
Drowning in my tears
They just grew
I found my way out
But now I'm stuck like this
In a pool
of my own tears. -
me too, zane. me too...
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*sigh* ;-;
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The words are good, but I'm not sure how it would sound as a song. Good job though.
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*cries* this is it.
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Thanks @Teresa
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Great song.
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Thanks V-V
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More of a poem to me.
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