Is this a good plot?
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Thread Topic: Is this a good plot?
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Albany was an albino girl facing middle school. She was an outcast, she barely had any friends, no one wanted to talk to her. But no one knew her gift.. She could see people's futures when she looked at them.
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So good, I'm thinking about stealing it for a soap. ^~^
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icy-lol XD
IFMN-yup it's AWESOME! -
hi sweet bye
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Albany:
Sadie (Mean Girl):
Madeline (Albany's Twin Ghost): -
Why do that twins look different :oo
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Albany's the only albino twin. Her sister was supposed to be born with her, but died in the womb
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:3
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I'm changing Middle School to Elementry School, seeing as they're little girls. I'm going to say she's in 3rd grade.
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@ifmn don't worry, i still hate you and all, but i LOVED your anime kiss pic.
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Thanks. It used to be my wallpaper on my computer.
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*leaves*
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:P
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First Chapter:
Albany Ross sighed as she exited the banana yellow school bus. She was here, finally in Elementary school. She examined the brick building before stepping in, a new smell filling her senses. The beautiful white-haired girl looked at her surroundings, taking them in. The circular room, that held the offices, stood to her right side, a plant standing in front of the enterance door. It seemed to be examining her differences. Albany looked up again, and quickly walked down the halls to her home room, not wanting to look like a fool just standing. She soon entered Mrs. Winter's class, and glanced around at her classmates. There was Becca, Monique, Sadie, Brianna... SADIE?! The little girl mentally panicked as she swallowed in fear. -
Albany looks like she could be a middle schooler. Maybe sixth grade. She's too old for third though. A lot of kids in my school are wicked short, especially the sixies, but they have facial details that say otherwise.
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