Is this a good plot?

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Thread Topic: Is this a good plot?

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  I Forgot My Name Experienced

  13 years ago
  Oh xD Okay, changing back to Middle School...
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  Teresa22 Advanced

  13 years ago
  M'kay.
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  I Forgot My Name Experienced

  13 years ago
  First Chapter:
  
  Albany Ross sighed as she exited the banana yellow school bus. She was here, finally in Middle school. She examined the brick building before stepping in, a new smell filling her senses. The beautiful white-haired girl looked at her surroundings, taking them in. The circular room, that held the offices, stood to her right side, a plant standing in front of the enterance door. It seemed to be examining her differences. Albany looked up again, and quickly walked down the halls to her home room, not wanting to look like a fool just standing. She soon entered Mrs. Winter's class, and glanced around at her classmates. There was Becca, Monique, Sadie, Brianna... SADIE?! The little girl mentally panicked as she swallowed in fear.
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  Teresa22 Advanced

  13 years ago
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  I Forgot My Name Experienced

  13 years ago
  Thank you :3
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  Teresa22 Advanced

  13 years ago
  No problem.

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