I'm making a new story, but I need your help.
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Thread Topic: I'm making a new story, but I need your help.
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Genres: Action, mystery, horror,
and romance. (Mostly horror though)
Rated: PG-13
Plot: A quiet, independent, teenage girl moves to a small town. She has been living there for about a month and experienced strange things. Such as hearing her name being whispered, seeing faint shadows in the trees outside and shadows the corner of her room, sitting in the rocking chair. And there's a certain spot in the hallway that she never feels safe in, and one of her parents closets in their bedroom seems a bit....off to her. She's told her parents a couple times, but they say it's just her imagination. Sometimes her mother says she smells her grandmothers perfume, and two days later her grandfather dies. Everytime her mom says she smells her grandmothers perfume, two days later someone in the family dies.
One night she see's what seems to be a little girl with a doll running in the hallway to the end where her parents bedroom is at. Her father was out for the night, working late. When he comes home and heads to bed he wakes up the girl to tell her the unthinkable -- her mother is gone. Yes, missing. Times become hard on her and her father until she makes a life taking decision -- to run away. She meets a guy around her age on the way, running away from almost the same situation. It turns out none of her parents have died, they have been locked in a mind game played by the devil. Well, they decide to team up to kill the darkness or whatever it is and bring their families back. At the end they get together.
I know that was a lot of reading, but there was a lot of explaining to do. This is my first horror story, so it may suck a little. I'm going to try to finish this series. Okay, well here's what I need your help with. I need ideas on a title and maybe something I can add or take away. I was thinking of changing a couple things, but for now tell me what you think and title ideas. Please? Tooda loo! -
Title: The Devil's Little Game
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Mmmmmmm *swishes mouth around* I don't know.....I don't think it will really catch anyones eye.
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Agrre with Zane.
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The Killing Game
The Ghost Of The Devil
Dead By The Devil
:P I have alot of titles with Devil in it. -
LetsParty NoviceI likeit! Title: Mind Games or Playing Mind Games
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I don't like Mind Games or Devils Game or whatever. Try not to think of the game, more of something else lol...
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LOVE OF THE RINGS.
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Aromatic
Let's Play A Game
Hell's Games
I have more ideas. These are just the first few that came to mind. I like Zane's as well. -
There's no love
No rings.
What the heck Zane? I'm tryna be real, not joking around. Please help. -
Fire On The Rings.
Take Your Breath Away. (get it)
Half Dead. -
LetsParty NoviceDefeating the Darkness
Saving Famly (ikr cheesy) -
Sorry it just popped into meh big crazy mind :P
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Darkness On The Loose.
Dark Death. -
Aromatic - What does that mean?
Let's play a game - Cheesy
Hells Game - I likie!
Fire on the rings - What fire? What rings?
Take your breath away - Chees
Half dead - ehhh...
Defeating the darkess - I like it a little bit
Saving family - cheesy
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