Carrotop Only Please!!!!
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Thread Topic: Carrotop Only Please!!!!
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Okay! Now, what exactly do you have in mind for the intro?
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Like how they got kiddnapped. I wrote down a few sentences but I don't know where to go fro there.
Kayla looked down at her hand, innertwind in Jacob's. She sighed happily and looked at Jacob.
Oh, and you can call me Hailey. -
Oh okay! You can call me Gabbi.
Okay....can you write down everything you have? -
Kay Gabbi.
I wrote everything so far on paper. The plot and the two sentences of the intro. -
Okay. Now type them to me so I can read them to see what exactly you have soi know were we are.
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Plot: Kayla and Jacob walked on the side of the dark road, holding hands and talking. They were tthe perfect couple.
When they suddenly disappear, five days later they are found, naked, bloody, tied up, and almost dead.
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Intro: Kayla looked down at her hand , innertwined in Jacob's. She sigh happily and looked at Jacob. -
-_- I feel stupid now lol
Okay....lemme see what I can some up with and let's see if it'll inspire you.... -
Kay.
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Kayla looked down at her hand, intertwined in Jacob's. She sighed happily and looked at Jacob. Her eyes examined his hair, (I'm improvising with his looks, you can change it later if you want) his dark hair, pitch black and spiky. Her eyes traveled along the outline of his nose and over his lips....the lips she loved. The full lips upon the tan face of the boy she loved.
Jacob noticed her looking. His tan fiace split into a smile.
"Like what you see?" he asked.
'More than I should,' she thought, but in response, she simply smiled. With her free hand, she twirled a strand of her curly blonde hair around her finger, her blue eyes now staring up at the endless seeming sky above both hers and Jacobs heads.
Kayla and Jacob (again, I'm improvising) had known each other for five months. They had met in a bakery through a mutual friend. Ever since Kayla had walked through the door that crisp Sunday morning, arm in arm with their friend, Jacob had been unable to rid her from his mind. I was always 'Kayla Kayla Kayla' all the time. Of course, it was possible to do things apart, but they had been inseparable for five months.
And now they were taking a walk down a sleepy road in their quiet town. Kalya and Jacob weren't into big, flash dates. They just liked being in each others company. And today, as they strode slowly down the side walk hand in hand, all that mattered was the one person standing by their side.
And then, the van pulled up. -
What do you think?
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Can I use this? I'll change a few things around and add a bit.
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Sure!! I wrote it for you!
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It's good, and I'll be giving you credit too.
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Oh okay thanks! I'm glad I could help!
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Yep. And when I write the first chapter I'm going to show it to you. You may want to bm this thread. :D
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