So I got a soap idea...
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Thread Topic: So I got a soap idea...
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(Awesome!)
"Are you crazy?They're gonna kill us!" -
(I'm so happy! :D)
"Yes I am crazy, haven't you noticed? But we should try and single one of them out....I could try.." -
(And you guess what?)
"Try.It'll be very good if you succeed" -
(What? :D)
I pulled my hoodie over my head and started walking towards the soldiers. I noticed one sitting by himself next to the fire, I'll go for him -
(I finished the third chapter of my book!WOOT!Took time :3 )
Lousian watched as she walked up to the soldiers.He focused his mind on the soldiers,there was some energy in him. -
(Haha how long did it take you? :D)
I sat next to him and pulled my hoodie down
"Who the he-"
I quickly cupped my hand on his mouth before he could say anything else
"Listen, I'm Colnol Richards daughter. The Colnol needs to talk to you privately. Don't tell anyone I was here. Understood?"
He nodded his head but he didn't seem to belive me. -
(Almost a week)
"What the..."
Lousian murmured as she sat near the soldier,but it looked like her plan was working. -
(Your a slow reader, I could read 2 books in that amount of time xD)
"I'm gonna move my hand away..okay and I need you to stay quiet..."
I slowly moved my hand away from his mouth but as soon as I did that he pinned me to the ground holding a knife to my neck
"The Colnol is Colnol Davids...and Richard is known as Private Richards. You lying b----!" -
(I'm writing MY book...obviously)
In a second everything changed,now the soldier was holding a knife to her neck.
"No!"
He couldn't help but scream.He was getting mad again,losing himself to the energies.
"GET OFF OF HER!" -
(Your writting a book? Me too...whats your book about?)
I heard Lousian scream
Lousians energies flung the man off of me and he slammed into a tent.
I pulled my hoodie over and started running.
If they see my face they will know who I am -
(The plot is in literature,if you feel like reading.)
He shouldn't have screamed,but it was too late to think about that.
"We must leave!" -
(I'll read it later :])
Without asking I grabbed his hand and started running
"We'll find another soldier, we can think of another way" -
"Let's get the hell out of here first."
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"You could try flying again..."
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"Can you keep your ideas to yourself?"
He knew he was offensive,but it was no time for discussing not-working dreamy ideas.
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