battle with sheep
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Thread Topic: battle with sheep
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this is a monologue from an insomniac, and i’m a little lost because this is my first time writing a monologue like this.
this is what i have so far. any suggestions regarding what to add or change?
(trigger warning: death)
Battle with Sheep.
I cannot best you when counting sheep and melatonin has failed. I cannot close my eyes with a 4-7-8. The scent of lavender has not been neglected, but praised, yet my eyes are still wide. Six separate worlds per pillow rest, but I did not remember a single one.
My eye sockets ache, and the skin underneath turns purple and blue. I refuse to stare at a screen, but I just lay there in hopes that I will drift away.
Suddenly, my eyes become paralyzed. I cannot move a limb of my body. Pitch black is all I see.
What if I die? So many people die in their sleep. My grandfather, for example, sleeping peacefully, then his life came to an end. They tried to save him, but it was just too late. He was gone. He wanted to rest, and ended up resting forever.
I’m so tired of being tired. -
pls help
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:c
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I think you wrote that rly well :0
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I agree with Spice. Your monologue looks really good.
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it needs to be longer and i’m so lost, lol 😂
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but thank you!! ♡
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Wow that’s really good and relatable..... XD I don’t know how to improve it or add to it because my writing is trash
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i’m working on it ughh
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