help
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Thread Topic: help
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i am SO bad at writing pain. like i'm doing my best but i feel like i'm being a bad RP partner
does anybody know some good descriptive words for pain? like physical pain.
right now my character's being tortured and she's been impaled and she got a migraine from having to hear a really intense, really low-pitched sound and now this guy's making cuts on the webbings of her toe
how do i respond to this?? -
"she said ow"
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she already said "ow" twice
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Aaahhh oh god crap this freaking hurts
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flinching?
sucking teeth?
little cries? -
oh yes thank you rose
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"it's too big- stop! she groaned in agony, tears flying out of her eyes as she throws her head back and her face grimaces in pain"
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No prob.
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i could... probably switch up some of the words in that phrase but for the most part it could work
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Slayerbrine NoviceHi
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;) no use it all
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