I started keeping a journal today.
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:35pm
Thread Topic: I started keeping a journal today.
-
My thread was kind of my journal, but now when I want to say something, I've written it in my journal. This may reduce my time on GTQ, if only by a small amount.
-
cmpreg476 NoviceI used to do that. It helped me calm myself writing had that factor for me but I stopped
-
Writing in a journal is good way to show great writing skills. Good.
-
cmpreg476 NoviceI'm awful wt writing
U guys wanna see w poem I had to write sbout my "sister" dying in an accident where a drink driver kills her -
Starr Black Newbiehaha im so drunk haha ha
-
I dislike writing so much, but I do like complaining and observing, so that's good.
-
Starr Black Newbiehaha hahaha.
-
cmpreg476 NoviceYou picked me up and spun me around,
You said you almost died but you hung round.
I was crying because I thought I almost lost you,
You looked at me and said I'm here and you sat down and cried too.
The next day you took me shopping,
But in the car you kept stopping and stopping.
Just to be safe you said to me, Safe is always the way to be.
When we got home you danced with me on your toes,
Then you turned on the music so I struck a pose.
You smiled so big,
So I did an Irish jig.
You put your makeup on me,
You said I looked like a beauty.
I attempted to put makeup on you,
You looked like you lived in a zoo.
You looked so happy,
But I knew you felt so crappy.
You were hurting awful bad,
But you hid it by being glad.
I asked you why that boy drove drunk,
You said boys are lunks.
I asked why the other girl payed the price,
You said that lunk wasn't very nice.
Atleast that's how it was supposed to be,
You were supposed to come home to me.
But if you did I wouldn't be here,
Sitting at your grave letting fall a single tear.
I remember the last thing I said to you that day,
That I wish you wouldn't come home to play.
I remember all the happy things we did inside of my head,
But that will be no more because now you are dead. -
That's actually good. Now you have something reliable on your hands or to look back at for future references or retrospect.
-
cmpreg476 NoviceThank you I appreciate that but I'm a terrible writer
-
I wrote this after my grandmother died.
"Remembering your eyes that night
And the way they peered through my cold exterior.
Could you have known?
No, you couldn't possibly have known
The cruel death that took you.
I woke to a powerful shriek only to see
Yes, your cold and lifeless hand, paled from death.
The tears won't stop.
Energy flows throughout me to power my sobs.
What kind of world,
What world would do this
And pluck you away?
You saw through to my very weak soul.
I don't know what made it come back
But your haunting voice
Visited me in a dream.
Could you have known?" -
cmpreg476 NoviceI like it but if I write apron it has to ryme, that's half the fun for me
-
Good for you, too bad I'm not you and I prefer free verse.
I don't ever write poems anymore. I feel they are mostly unnecessary and pretentious. -
cmpreg476 NoviceMe either I had to write thst for school mostly I just writ in my head bc I don't like writing 4 other people but my parents entered me in a writing collegium for my school district
-
Is that so? Although, I think your rhymes are quite cheesy and forced, I suppose someone finds them enjoyable. Good luck with that.
Pages:
- 1
- 2
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.
