Please give me your opinions. owo
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Thread Topic: Please give me your opinions. owo
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It's dark, so yeah. You've been warned.
Lele. -
Can I sit next to you
I like benches
I like benches -
How's it going bros? My name is Pewdiepie. Hello? Is anyone in there? Hello? Oooo! Snoop dawg!
Oh you! Oh you! Oh you! Oh you! Oh you! Oh. He's so fa-fa- fabulous. Likes to dress up.
Fa-fa- fabulous. Wearing make up. He's so fa-fa- fabulous. What a get up! Like a pinup.
Shaking that butt. Where you going man? Where you going man? Please tell me. I am really curious.
Pewdiepie, pewdiepie. Where you going man. Please tell me. I am really curious. He's a wizard!
He's so fa-fa- fabulous. Likes to dress up. He's so fa-fa - fabulous. Fa-fa - fabulous. Wearing make up. What a get up!
Like a pinup. Shaking that butt! Fa-fa- fabulous. As a mermaid. Fa-fa - fabulous. Or a hot babe. Fa-fa - fabulous. What a get up!
Like a pinup. Shaking that butt. Pewdiepie, Pewdiepie. I think me and my girlfriend are perfect together.
Pewdiepie, Pewdiepie. And I love her. Oh hey girl, girl. Can I sit next to you. I love benches. I love benches.
Hue ha ha hue! Hue ha ha hue! Hue ha ha! Hue ha ha! Hue ha ha! I'm so fabulous! So fa-fa - fabulous.
Likes to dress up. Fa-fa - fabulous. Wearing make up. Fa-fa - fabulous. What a get up! Like a pinup.
Shaking that butt. So fa-fa - fabulous. As a mermaid. Or a hot babe. What a get up! Like a pinup. Shaking that butt. -
Masky014 NewbieMANCAKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD
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No, no mancakes.
Fabulous song. -
At most I can say that it's a little too matter of fact and could use a little more detail
But asides from that it's good! -
Thank you. owo
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Fabulous.
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I dunno, this might be just me it seemed like pretty much any depressed person when they're venting. I've read lots of stuff almost exactly like this. But you did a good job of keeping a steady theme and getting darker and darker as it goes, I liked that. I also love love love the last line.
but also I'm pretty sure it's spelled unbearable sorry to be the obnoxious person who points out spelling mistakes but
Overall, I think it was a little generic, but it was really good, I don't think you needed more details, I actually liked that it was vague but still understandable. -
Thank you, Lucky.
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