Wow.
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Thread Topic: Wow.
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I don't believe that I wrote this.
Oh No.
Zack hopped into his car.He couldn't wait to have the taste of creamy StarBucks coffee in his mouth.As he was driving,he was also texting you.
"I'm on my way."He knew his mother had always told him to never text and drive,and he was about to pay the price.He wasn't keeping his eyes on the road and slammed into another car.Zack silently screamed in horror as his legs were crushed by the other car.Almost falling,he managed to open the door and fell on the road.He layed there quietly crying.Another driver had seen the accident.That driver was Niall.He reported it to his local news station.Back at the house,you got bored and decided to watch a litle little television.The news was on,and that's when you saw the accident.
"We still have very little evidence on this case."said the news reporter.You were just thinking it was another accident until Zack's car was shown on the screen.
"Oh No!That's Zack's car!"You cried.
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It's good~ :o
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I like how it's like a plot twist. Good job
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Thank you.
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That was chapter eight of my fan fiction.I write it on Quotev.If you have Quotev,please follow me @MsNialler or Kiersten.
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Can I show you how I would write it to make it more dramatic?
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Dark is writting about a car crash because of what I wrote. xD
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Hey
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