My Manga: Cross Country.
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Thread Topic: My Manga: Cross Country.
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In the year of 0001, there was a future town named Magnolia. The only living being on that city was a women, a women named Yui. Nobody now could tell how she was born, but she was born to die, to die for the destiny of the city. Magnolia was a beautiful place, full of trees, and full of nature. Another thing was born, and it was no human. It was sick and twisted and vile. And it turned Magnolia into cemetery and all the nature deceased. Everything was bad, and Yui knew what she had to do. She had to fight, but she knew her Legacy was to die for the city. Yui and the spirit faught and as expected Yui had died. The spirit disappeared as she deceased. A gift happened, Yui's spirit and heart was open, and came bursting out a bunch of energy excelas, which were only tiny and hopeless. They went into the dark, magnolia sky and turned back Magnolia to where it was suppose to be. More humans were born, and they were born with excelas and some were born just human. And some were born monsters and creatures. Excelas come in different shapes and sizes and powers. Humans that were born with Excelas were considered lucky, as the excelas were energy, light or dark, that contained a bit of magic. When a human that was born with Excelas don't know until they are 13 years of stars, and experience weird symptoms. Most have found out earlier and are now the most know Witches and Wizards of Magnolia.
@-@ I need more motivation. -
Sooooo
what's the plot, exactly? -
Each special forms of government in the town, researched excelas and converted excelas into special powers and witchcraft. When time passed by, word got around the Princess Olivia Winster.(I had a drawing of her.) Had her government and team got more in depth about Excelas. Everybody wanted a power, everybody wanted to be a witch or wizard, but unfortunately you can only be born with Excelas. Any natural born excelasists can practice any witchcraft. Some fail and some expert in it real well, but there is over 100,000 witchcraft powers they can practice. Some were even born with a specific power, and those are the rare kinds of humans. A witchcraft league was created, and more started to become born and all over town and other parts of the city had a certain league, and the one that is the most know is Cross Country.
Shall we explain how Cross Country was found? -
Shido, sooooo what'd you mean? This is a thread to post my ideas so they don't get lost. :P
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What's
The plot .-. -
There was 2 excelasist, Oracle and Ami. They were running from a farm where they stole Apple's to eat, They haven't seen there parents since birth. They only remember seeing a light. Some specific light, but they didn't know what it was and didn't care. The 2 girls ran and... *tapes device* Hmm.. should I keep going.. or wait until tomorrow..
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Shido: What'd you mean plot?
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A plot.
The storyline.
What is the main storyline of the manga about? -
The farmers were chasing after the poor, hopeless, little girls. One with blonde hair and blue yes, and one with light pink hair and brown eyes.
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The farmers were chasing after the poor, hopeless, little girls. One with blonde hair and blue yes, and one with light pink hair and brown eyes.
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Shido: What's a storyline?
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No brainer this manga would fail o.o
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But I shall still wish you good luck o/
although you do not understand how hard it would be to be a mangaka. You don't understand how hard many things would be in the art world. Naive is the word. -
It's not hard. :P
No, it won't. I am still in the process of making it. -
If you don't have a plot or storyline it's automatically a failure.
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