Finished the damn script.
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Thread Topic: Finished the damn script.
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Accomplishment.
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To what?
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For me to get a Girl Scout badge, I had to write a script on getting up, getting active, and staying healthy.
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That's good kiddo!! Great job hm.
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I can always post it~
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You should~ I want to read it hm~
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NEW IDEAS, OLD CHALLENGES
By
JILLIAN NATION
FADE IN:
EXT. GIRL 1'S HOME DAY
Blue and white house comes into view, the trees' leaves swaying in the wind.
CUT TO:
INT. GIRL 1S HOME LIVING ROOM DAY
T.V. is on, showing to some commercials.
PAN TO-
Three girls are sitting on the couch, staring blankly at the T.V.
GIRL 1, 11, pipes up (bored tone).
GIRL 1
This is really getting boring. I don't feel anything but.. well, extreme boredom.
GIRL 2, 10, looks over to GIRL 1, shrugging.
GIRL 2
Maybe weve been sitting here too long. I say we go play video games.
GIRL 3, 10, lets out a heavy sigh.
(pausing for a minute) -
GIRL 3
This isn't healthy! My Mom looks fitter than US. We're doing something wrong. Know what that is?
GIRL 1
(a bit excited)
Um, not eating food. I'll call the pizza man!
GIRL 2
No, I see what shes saying. We're not getting up, or being active what-so-ever.
GIRL 3
We should go to a park. Maybe then we won't be bored.
GIRL 1
(standing up, stretching)
Oh, fine. But isn't getting up to go call the pizza man enough?
GIRL 3 & 2
(loudly)
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Nice kid. I've never made a script before but very good.
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DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PARK AFTERNOON
Kids are playing in the park. On some swings, GIRL 1, GIRL 2, and GIRL 3 are laughing and swinging back and forth.
GIRL 1
Wow! This is fun! And I feel so excited. This is so much better than sitting on the couch all day.
GIRL 3
(proud look)
Now well look better than my Mom.
GIRL 2
I think we ALL look better than our moms. Maybe even equal.
GIRL 3
But the best part is, were having fun together, getting active. Its so much easier than sitting, too.
GIRL 1
Im all in for doing this again. Its so much fun. Ill never be a couchie again.
GIRL 2
A couchie? Whats that?
GIRL 1
(laughing)
Someone who sits all day. Hey, lets go down some slides. You guys in for it?
Girl 2 & 3
(already up and running for the slides)
Yeah!
Girl 1
HEY! Wait up for me!
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Girls are laughing and racing to the slides. Happy smiles.
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Eh. I have it copyrighted and everything. >:3 I say it's going to kick Girl Scout butt.
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