Imma post some of my story in this thread
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Thread Topic: Imma post some of my story in this thread
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What?
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This is the first part where the main carictor who belives she was abandoned as a baby remembers her father and mother a little bit:
I stood up and wiped the tears from my face, "If you were with me now I'd find myself in you If you were with me now Your the only one who knew All the things we planned to do" I started walking tword the woods witch was only a short way ahead, "I want to live my life The way you said I would With courage as my light Fighting for what's right Like you made me believe I could". I reached the woods and climed a tree, "And I will fly on my father's wings To places I have never been There is so much I've never seen And I can feel his heartbeat still And I will do great things On my father's wings!" i sang jumping off the tree and langing perfectly on the ground. I saw a wild horse ride past me "This world I'll never see My dreams that just won't be This horse's stride with one days ride Will have covered more distance than me, But I will fly on my father's wings To places I have never been There is so much I've never seen And I can feel his heartbeat still And I will do great things On my father's wings!". I climed up the small waterfall and looked over the ege of it "Someday with his spirit to guide me And his memory beside me I will be free!" and I jumped off of it falling fast, "to Fly on my father's wings To places I have never been There is so much I've never seen And I can feel his heartbeat still And I will do great things!" i hit the water and came up with a splash, "On my father's wings, On my father's wings!" I realized that i had just walked around the woods for a second time that day and started to laugh, "MURA-MURA!" yelled the headmistriss at the school I was forced to go to. "get out of that cold water you'll catch a cold missy!" she said holding out a small blanket, I swam over to her and started to dry myself off. " one day child your gonna hurt yourself beyond repair and ill stand next to you in the hospital and telly you 'I told you so'" said the headmistress, I laughed and she walked with me back to the school. -
Can I be in it?
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oh you are in it but you come later
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Can I be in it?
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I dont know you that well
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Yay thanks
Csn I suggest something ? -
shure
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Post this on quizzaz.com
Qutoev.com
I think alot of people will read it and comment and like -
oh im not really shure
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Alleria NoviceCan i be in this?
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ummm, i dont really know you that well eaither but do you have anny sugjestions?
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The second song is Secret Of Survival it had alot of carictors when I first put it in but i decided it should be just the wheelers, right now they dont have the wheels on there hands and feet so they just have long arms and legs, so the main carictor mura-mura and the headmistress got lost in a fog around the end Mura-mura then lost the headmistress, when the fog cleared her forest was gone and a new one with color changeing leafs took its place, she picked a leaf causeing a tree to scream loudly and disinagrate this atracted a couple wheelers and they try and torment her before takeing her to jail:
The tall men surrounded me and then bunched up in a bug line, they chanted together, "First you see us, then you don't." they disapeared, "Now you hear us, now you won't." they all said sounding like they were behind me when they then did pop up behind me. "It's our secret of survival in a very nasty world." one of them started pokeing me "Now you feel us, now you can't! Are we real? Perhaps we aren't? It's our secret of survival in a very nasty world. It's our secret of survival in a very nasty world." and they disapeared again. "Is it really such a nasty world?" i screamed looking up wondering where they went, "Nastier than you could ever dream of!" sreamed one of them from behind me, i started to run but there voices followed me. "From up above!" screamed one flying infront of me, "and from beneath" said one grabbing my leg, "Eyes and jaws, claws and teeth.". They surrounded me again "Ready to attack you you're a snack you'd better run! DONT GO WALKING IN THE WILD WOOD IF YOU HAVENT GOT A GUN!" yelled the one who seemed to be the leader, they put me in a curcle and bounced me around like I was a ball. "Ha haha haha ha. Every creature for survival has to look out for itself. Got no nannies here or grannies dear to look after your health. You're in The Wild Wood, and every child could tell you that you got no business to be here!" they all chanted pushing me around, some started claping and stomping to the beat, "First you see us, then you don't Now you hear us, now you won't It's our secret of survival in a very nasty world. Now you feel us, now you can't Are we real? Perhaps we aren't? It's our secret of survival it's our secret of survival it's our secret of survival in a very nasty world." and the song ended in cackleing and stomping, one threw me over his sholder and took me away with the others following. -
Alleria NoviceUm....
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
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