Oh Wonderful soap c:
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Thread Topic: Oh Wonderful soap c:
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The plot is a bit too simple but we can change it and add things to it to spice it up
Plot: A girl is diagnosed with a very rare eye disease and by December she will be completely blind, but at a moment of pure saddness and frustration she meets a stranger who changes it all around, who seems to make the pain easier to bear but yet she still hesitates to reveal the truth of her trajedy, as time grows close she falls in love with the boy who was once a stranger, but when will she tell the truth and face her reality?
May I be the girl please? :3 -
Cx I would totally do that. Especially now that Ive taking the time to own my writing ability.
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Yay! :D charries?
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Alright. :)
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Name: Alaska Burn
Age: 16
Looks: dark brown wavy hair that reaches waiste, tips died blue, stormy grey eyes with long eye lashes, few freckles by nose
Personality: you'll see -
Name: Ryan Winter
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oh my god I typed that all out for nothing
Name: Ryan winter
Age; whatever age yours is.
Looks: Chocolate brown hair, pale green eyes, apricot skin, a few freckles
personality: kind, understanding, quite humurous, smart
Other: His father died and his mother is deprssed so he lives with her. -
Not it.
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XD
I sat by myself at the edge of the lake, clutching my knees and watching as familys and little kids ran past, huge smiles on their face. I wish I could feel their happiness too, I wish I could atleast fake a smile. But I can't , saddness dawns over me as I think about it now, by December...I will be blind, I won't see anything, nothing, no sunset, no little kids or pretty lakes, I wonder if I'll live with my sight seeing darkness or light, I sighed sadly, I'm suprised I haven't cried yet, I only found out today, but I know soon the saddness will hit me, hit me hard -
I'm going to be using third person POV. :3
The boys feet just barely brushed the surface of the crystal like water, his face showing no evident signs of emotion. Though, he did feel like his emotions had been ripped from him. No anger. No sadness. No hope. No happiness. But if he was feeling like he had no emotion, then did he feel the emotion of emptiness? After a hand rested itself on his shoulder, he turned to the mundane.
"C'mon, Ryan, shape up. You know your mom didn't mean it."
Ryan shrugged, turning back to the serene setting.
"Sometimes I think she really does mean it...." -
Your writting amazes me :O
I gently reached my hand towards the surface of the lake and touched it gently, watching as it obscured the glass-like reflection of me as it wobbled with each delicate ripple that sent through the water. Will I ever remember what its like to watch the gently ripples of the lake. I looked into my reflection that danced with the water of the lake, will I remember what I look like. I sighed yet again, not a tired sigh like my mum, more of a sad frustrated sigh. Glancing around I watched the many other people, I noticed a boy a few feet away who seemed not happy or sad, maybe he was confused and didn't know what to feel? Like me, because at this point I feel lost but I can't seem to explain how -
Gracias. Same to you. :'3
"In what world would a mother disown her child?" The words stung Ryan as if a million yellow jackets had found theirselves upon his skin.
"Go away." He whispered, his fists clenching and then unclenching in rapid succession.
"What was that?" The boy questioned, tilting his head, in a state of perplextion. "I said, GO AWAY!" Ryan nearly immediately retorted. As the other scurried away, he watched as Ryan let's the little tadpoles in the water crowd around his feet. The question echoed in his head.... What mother would disown her own son? -
Thank you :#3
The boy shouted at his friend, was it really his friend. And then I watched him, he seemed really down, something must be making the kid really sad, if I can't SEE that people are sad then how will I help them? If I can't see it their eyes then how will I know. The saddness and frustration began to fill inside my chest, begininng to pile up onto each other, I swear I was about to burst. And a I did. Starting with small tears, then to bigger tears and then to those sobs that make your body shake and you try hard to hide.
I will be blind and I can't do anything about it -
Haha. Cx
Feeling as low as ever before, Ryan made his way into the water, allowing it to shroud his body in its cool temperature. As he glanced around the landscape, he took into account all the happy humans prancing around. He attempted implanted their smiles into his memory, so that whenever this low feeling returned to his chest, he had a little something to turn back to. Possibly then he'd be capable of seeming delighted. Almost on cue, his eyes focused on a girl who's appearance differed from he others. Was she....crying? -
My arms held my knees tight to my chest, I shook my head as the tears came out, wishing it would stop, as I cried I felt cold inside myself, yet sun shone so bright it hurt my eyes but that didn't stop the cold fear and depression inside of me. No, I can't cry like this, I won't... So trying to calm down I took in a few deep shakey breaths, the tears still stained my cheeks and rolled over to the edge of chin but atleast now my body didn't shake with sobs.
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