Read mty short stor im working on!!!!!!!!!
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Thread Topic: Read mty short stor im working on!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah bad habit iv gotten into
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Loooooooooooool :p
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@Reaper I was because Max (Calypso) is my friend, but then I just got too lazy and now other people are fighting it.
@Sara yeah, I used to do that. -
Yeah
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@Sara uh-huh. I'm Megan/ Meg (I go by either) by the way.
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Ok
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This all has to be a bad dream... Ill wake up in my quarters at Langley and stare right at the ceiling fan hanging from the ceiling then ill grab my clubs and go golfing and beat Turner and all the other pilots and Havoc and Heartbreak One will be there and....
I open my eyes, and glare at the concrete ceiling of my temporary home at Foreword Operating Base Serenity River in northern China. I shout a curse, conpounded by what had happened earlier. Over sixty good men and women had gone up earlier against the Monolith Cannon, two came back. -
@ reaper. U think my storys bad to?
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That's really good :).
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:)
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sara: Its good, other than a few grammatical errors which are easily rectified.
DOA: Thanks, now getting there is my hard part. Im still in the first act of my book, this is in the third. -
:) thanks
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Oh. I always write mine from the beginning and try not to jump around or get ahead of myself or I'll end up rushing it.
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Yeah. I do that. I plan thoroughly, big event, big event, big event. My problem is getting from event to event smoothly.
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Oh, I usually fill it in with talking and actions.
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