Read mty short stor im working on!!!!!!!!!
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Thread Topic: Read mty short stor im working on!!!!!!!!!
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How old are you?
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18
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Hey
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Oh. Well, I don't think it was very good. There was no flow to it, or any paragraphs, and just a little bit of a mistake with grammar. And when people are talking, use the quotes. Also, I think it was a little bit childish. Sorry.
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Yeah i guess i know its childish lol
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Yeah, I thought you were 10....
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Owell whatever' its just something did fore fun
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Lol
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Gahaha 10 no
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Guess it sucks
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