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The story about Memories
Epilogue
Entry One, January 5th of 1972
I actually felt it. Those few feelings Id never thought Id feel in a million years. Greed. Lust. Envy. Wrath. Sloth. Gluttony. And even more than those, pride. The seven feelings burned in my heart once I lost my son a few hours ago. And even a few more hours before that, my wife. I dont know why Im even writing here. Is this normal? To be writing my thoughts and feelings while my family weeps and cries? I dont even know. But one things for sure:
I plan to create something that will fix the hole in my heart. What is it, you may wonder? Well, Im not an alchemist. Im not going to try and make a Homunculus. I need to make something that is easy.... Perhaps a person binded together by feelings. Yes, thats it! A person who is not entirely man made. A being of feeling that has its own mind and memory. One that could live in society without being hunted down. Strong in its own way.
A person who represents feelings.
A thing that will thrive in humanity.
Something that will be awoken from anyone and their new feelings.
A Memory.
January 20th of 1972
I started on working to hide my feelings when near my sister and daughter. Its hard to ignore the stares Ive recived. Theyre haunting. But no matter. Ive created a body...it wasnt hard. Although Id rather not speak about it. Ive begun waiting and hoping it would come to life. Im not going to mess with logic. It will work.
Right?
February 15th, 1972
It worked. It worked! Only a few hours ago, I had been feeling quite mad and angered when it woke up. Of course, I gave it clothing. What else? I couldnt imagine how nice he looked....I felt happy. And a weird thing happened. The Memorys hair color changed. He had been speaking to me in a rude, vile tone at first. But it soon changed. He was nicer.
My feelings made the first Memory. I have no need to write more. He already has told you the story by now.
Chapter One
"Tch. bastard never knew what was coming," a tall man stated simply, looking down at a guy who was knocked out. Or rather, dead. But the man didn't care. He never did.
The man stood at six foot seven, taller than most men at the age of twenty. He had short white hair that stood out from his red eyes. He also had a black shirt and jeans. His hands were well covered with blood. No shoes.
"Krypton.....Honestly, I swear, I fight for your protection and you go and toss it away!" another man said, running up. Krypton glanced behind his back, huffing.
"I'm sorry Clause. I can't help it. These mortals are always annyoing and stupid, they're always pissing me off-"
"You piss yourself off, Krypton. I didn't mean to make you that way, but you are. Just calm down." Clause said, bending down to check if the person lying on the floor was dead. Clause had short, blonde hair that was actually curly in some places. He wore glasses. At this moment, he had a fancy orange shirt on. And he had black pants.
Krypton let out a low growl, looking away from Clause to stare at the woods surrounding the little city. The trees had their normal green color. (In this city, the trees never changed color.) He crossed his arms, his eyes regaining a soft look.
Clause placed his hand on the man's neck, feeling for a pulse. Nothing. He sighed.
"I'm going to leave for the weekend with Violet and Danna. You are forbidden to let anyone into the house. Artemis will come to stay with you. Otherwise, bad things could happen. Very bad." Clause had also created a person with cat ears and a cat tail -also known as a neko- much to the city's disapproval. They didn't know about Krypton, so that was a plus for Clause. Krypton whipped around, his softness gone.
"I'm stuck with that idiot of a person while you get to leave the city? What the hell, Clause! Artemis can't do anything worth shit!" Krypton spat out, walking up to Clause. His eyes were filled with hatred. As usual.
"I need to. If I don't, how am I supposed to fix Artemis?" Clause said, a hint of amusement in his voice. Krypton stood there. Thinking for a moment. Clause stood up. He walked back to the house, entering.
Krypton stared at the door. He wondered what was going on in Clause's mind. Probably something crazy.
Chapter Two
Artemis ran outside, running into Krypton. The two glared at each other before Krypton spoke.
"What the hell, kitty? You cant exit slowly?" he snickered, pushing Artemis into the house wall. Artemis hissed, baring his sharp teeth. Yes, he had them.
"I'm sorry if youre stupid, nyaa. I don;t need to slow if it's your own fault." He said, his voice more of a hiss than something else. Krypton laughed.
"Nyaa, huh? I'm no kitty. Shut the hell up."
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Sorry for any spelling errors. ._. The stupid computer doesn't paste comas.....
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*I'd, used about three to four times
*Don't, used three to five times
*Can't, used four to five times
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I only read the prologue, not the rest yet. Awesome. Nothing else can describe it.
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The entries that are written are in Clause's journal. x3
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Well it's really long. I'll read the rest now.
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That's awesome, Miss Dark!
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Took me an hour to write. xP And yay~
Thanks. ^-^ I decided to throw Artemis in there as well with a different backstory. -
It's really good.
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Danke. That's just the first draft, I'll make it more detailed later.xP
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It's good enough. Actually, you should write it as a complete story here so no one will lose it!
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But I want it perfect. I'm going to make a book out of it and give it to my teacher.
And..If I write the complete thing, that'd take like an hour away from my GTQ time. -
Why are you cuddling Sky?
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I do not know. :3
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