I Can Tell You What Anger IS!
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Thread Topic: I Can Tell You What Anger IS!
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Anger is something that is a part of me
Just get me pissed any you'll see
If you catch me in a bad mood like now
You'll get thrown to the ground.
It feels like you'll be mad forever
Like your really under the weather
Now can you see
The angry part of me?
Yes it sucks
The way I get
Anger is not jealousy at all
You just have to get up when you fall
I may be good
But I can't help but to be bad
When me, the goodly two shoe
Gets mad -
Feedback please
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Awesome... Wicked... Gut-slashingly amazing...and off the fhawkin' chain!
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Stupid typo. Shoe was supposded to shoes
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Good. Here's one of mine: *Gets angry for not finding a good poem* Found one!
DREAM
The starry night will beckon me,
Will light my path so I can see,
And once I find my greatest dreams,
I learn everything is not what it seems.
The colors blur and then they fade,
I'm cut off by a silent blade,
And once I've left this lovely place,
It is the real world I must face.
Kinda short but eh, just give me feedback. -
I like it. I also like writing poems about my life and screw ups. Normally screw ups from my family
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WOW Selena you have a way with words
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I like both of them
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