(Ok just an idea
What if you made another guy character
He's walking through the forest and he hears Rasia's screaming
And then stuff happens I haven't figured out)
"You called the police on me! That's what happened." he snapped.
The man had reached the cabin. He heard screams coming out of it and a woman sobbing. He thought it was just an old couple fighting, but he didn't leave because he was a little suspicious.
(And maybe that's the guy that Rasia falls in love with, if you still want there to be romance.)
Rasia's curly brown hair was frazzled and messy around her face. Her face was deathly pale and thin, and her eyes were large and haunted. Her bottom lip quivered. "What're you going to do," she whispered.
The man at the door was alarmed at that answer Axel had given. He was sure that the dead policemen were Axels doing, so the man chopped the door down with his axe.
