I am seriously bored

Thread Topic: I am seriously bored

keke14 Novice

13 years ago

hi
keke14 Novice

13 years ago

hi
ICE_CUBE97 Novice

13 years ago

~@keke I'm a master of ploting series as you can tell I have one^-^.Maybe I could help too.Hold up.I'll look over your series
keke14 Novice

13 years ago

ok
keke14 Novice

13 years ago

did u see it
ICE_CUBE97 Novice

13 years ago

~ok I'm done.First off,take your time and don't try to rush through the story.On the other hand it was great.So what kind of action do you want?
ICE_CUBE97 Novice

13 years ago

~hello?
dragon ember Senior

13 years ago

I think the swearing kind of ruins it
ICE_CUBE97 Novice

13 years ago

~yeah and she need all the puntuations.You noticed how she rushed though it?Where is she anyways
dragon ember Senior

13 years ago

... I think I rushed through myself, in unnatural mysteries, please look in literature if you wanna see, it might be on second page
keke14 Novice

13 years ago

oh sorry guys i didnt think youd answer back

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