guys please come here
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Thread Topic: guys please come here
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I'm being dragged down a hallway. I see my little sister. It hurt me to let her see me this way. Beat, broke, and in pain. I am cuffed to a board with my hands and feet cuffed I can't move. I am placed in front of a glass wall. The lights turn on,, on both sides I see my love credessia. Hung from chains. She can't turn werewolf. Tears well in my eyes I yank on the chains. "CREDESSIA! " I yell she says "help me please greyson please " I look at her and see burns, cuts and whip marks.I yank on the cuff. Ii notice a small fire wood place below her. My eyes widen. I yank harder. I hear my little sister banging on the door yelling "GREYSON!!! " she was old enough to understand. I go limp. "Credessia " I say "I promise you will be ok " she looks at me with fear and hope in her eyes. A man walks in the room credessia is in I yank as hard as I can cutting my skin. I ignored my pain. My fangs rip out and eyes turn blood red. He lights a fire beneath her. She screams in pain from burns "no!!! " I yell. I get free. I try to break the glass. I go to the door its locked. "I'm sorry " my fist hits the glass. Her screams fill my ears. I can only watch as she screams in pain. And I can't do a thing about it. I die inside when she stops struggling. I lost my true love. Now she wpuld want me to look after my sister who has stopped screaming my name on the other side of the door.
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Shall I go on?
Oh greyson is a prince
His little sis is a princess
Credessia is his forbidden love -
No one cares :( it took me forever
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That's good.
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It's good, but it belongs in Literature.
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That's awesome. What you should do is have that as a prologue, then go on to when they and how they fall in love and stuff like that, and end it which ever way you want. :)
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Sweet
I know. I know but I wanted to put it here! -
Sweet it is!
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Its an idea for a love story....
Is it like twilight? -
More :
I bang on the door yelling my sisters name "Danielle! " I ssink down the wall in despair. They still haven't taken Credessia. I cry. I haven't in forever its something you learn as a vampire. I hear the door open. Its my little sister I hug her tight "you ok? " I say. She nods. Our mother was cruel, we hated ger with a passion. Our father would have stopped this. She killed him though. I hold her close "I tried to help " she said shaking. "Its ok. We'll be ok ". Tears roll down her face. This time I wouldn't lett anything get in the way of keeping my promise for my sister. The only real family? I had left. -
Good?
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No one cares
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Good. :)
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Thank you!
should I make a book? -
If you can.
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